Hongwu Xianwang: at the Beginning, Xu Miaoyun Raised His Sword and Forced Him to Get Married.

When I first read it, I thought it was no different from other Ming Dynasty novels. The plot was okay and the writing was okay. At first I thought the score would be around 8.9 Or 9. But then it seemed that starting around the time when I saw the protagonist going to go into the army with Xu Da, the richness of the plot written by the author suddenly increased. Is it my imagination? Then during the battle with Wang Baobao and the others, the author added a lot of characterizations of small characters and told the story from multiple angles, making these little characters flesh and blood. Now it is clear that the author has more than 6,000 words per day, but I always feel that it is too short and not enough to read. If the following quality updates are all of this kind, it will not run above 9.4. In summary, the author's plot and character portrayal are very detailed. It is recommended to read [OK]

Good review. In fact, the emotional line in the first part feels very light, but the war line feels very heavy. I have actually read some similar articles before, but they were all too light-hearted. Really liked this one. The rating shouldn't be so low, really, the author Niubi.

Now at chapter 43, it can be seen that the author has a profound literary background, he can make ice and gunpowder, and he can also quote scriptures. The characters' language is very historical and interesting, and his words are brisk and natural, which is very powerful. Around Chapter 17, Xu Miaoyun tests the sharpness of the sword [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more thinking about what Zhuge Liang Tutu said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

It looks good. I hope the author will update more. I think that for a hollow tube, a small amount of black powder bomb can be placed at the front end. The kind that is close to the body can be lethal. Coupled with the sawdust of the hollow tube, it is quite good. Pull the fuse from the front end through the hollow and pass through the tail end. The one is almost timed, and you can calculate a few hundred steps to start ignition. Now that we have gunpowder, we can also make some small earth mines, the kind that are made of bamboo. We can put them in a noose and throw them out.

I would say that it is the best written about the history of the Ming Dynasty that I have ever read. I personally like history and read historical novels. This is my second account. Together, I have read more than thirty Ming Dynasty books. The writing is really, really good. A new book is so good, I really recognize you as the author. In the early days when I wrote about the young couple, I thought it was just a sweet story, but later on it shocked me so much that it completely elevated the story. The description of the war, especially from the perspective of little people from different camps, shows that when the war breaks out, the people at the bottom are all the victims. There were also the condolences at the end, which almost made me cry. His Highness King Wu walked out of the room after condolences to the families of the martyrs. His shoulders seemed a little shorter. The writing was really naughty! ! ! ! The emotional line is well written, unlike other stories that just prove that the protagonist's sexual orientation is normal. Moreover, the emotional lines are written very delicately, and they are not just as sweet as the silly ones all the way. Among them are also Miaoyun's meticulous psychology, King Wu's care when he was sleeping, and his thousands of miles of traveling in both directions. This book portrays the heroine very well. There are also various stories of little people, which are the most touching and great in the ordinary. You can't write a book without reality and fireworks. The author has grasped the fireworks very well. I can't say more. I have awarded him the rank of fairy grass. Come on, author [eat melon][explore][top post] It's hard to believe this is the author's first book

A big color, the love between children is long-lasting and richly engraved, and every word is eye-catching. I will make you so happy that the protagonist licked me. I have only one sentence for you. If both parties love each other, it is not called licking, it is called running in both directions. The status of a prince is not necessarily high. The woman is a prince of the current dynasty and a general without a fiefdom. You really don't have to be able to fight the woman. Don't tell me that a prince robbed and forced the daughter of the prince [laughing] This is normal [laughing] If you like this, you are also a god [laughing] Some people on the Internet are like saints, online He licks the evergreen tree among dogs, beats the tiles to recognize his mother, and the woman refuses to give him a face but still goes hard, and the boiling sheep feel inferior to each other [laughing] If you have no face, no money, no money, you can't calm down even if you read a novel, you can see what kind of life it is [laughs] Those who say Isn't he the King of Xian? I haven't seen people like Xian spend their whole lives in the ophthalmology department. You don't read the introduction. You must spray when you spray [laughs]. In fact, I don't see you looking for all kinds of minor problems and living in confusion all day long. Now you are more careful [laughing and crying] Then at this time, some people who acted as substitutes cried anxiously [laughs]

I read it all night long and let me tell you my opinion. The writing is quite good. The protagonist is not a brainless one. He is also afraid and has things he doesn't care about. Especially when I read the letters from home, I was moved. It's worth reading.

Very well written! It won't be like other books, where you go back in time and continue to be a bully, and the emotional drama is just to prove that the protagonist is not gay! The author writes about fireworks that we don't have time to enjoy now.

The author's writing style is really good. The letter home in Chapter 83 is really the kind of letter written to the family by someone who is about to die. It also writes the ironclad character of the Ming Dynasty.

One star for the character setting, a very novel selection of Ming Dynasty characters Two stars for the writing style, no AI or mechanical imitation. Samsung gives each chapter a word count of 5,000 sub-chapters. Four Stars created the characters. Zhu Biao, Zhu Yuanzhang, Xu Da and other secondary characters are well created, allowing people to imagine their respective personalities and characteristics, which are almost perfectly consistent with history. Disadvantages: Maybe it's because Xu Miaoyun is the heroine, the portrayal is so amazing. Although Xu Miaoyun in history is also a first-class talented woman, she has never reached the point where she is so amazing in almost every aspect. There is a kind of exaggeration of the female channel. I personally don't like female channels, so I give it four stars. I haven't finished reading it yet. If the subsequent writing is good, it will be changed to five stars. Cheers to the author [Sending heartfelt wishes] Full marks, must be full marks. The author's writing style is so professional. The multi-angle scene description, smooth camera switching, and the foreshadowing of profound metaphors. The writing style alone can earn five stars [shocked][shocked][shocked]

This book ranks among the top five history books I have read. First of all, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very consistent with my imagination of a lifelong couple. The relationship is delicate and generous. Royal feelings are also very good. Secondly, all the characters who appear on the stage, from the emperor and queen to the soldiers and soldiers, all have their own distinct class characteristics and conform to the class personality. This is actually very difficult. Furthermore, the author's writing style is not procrastinating, and the description of war scenes is not boring. I am willing to read it and look forward to reading it. After reading this, this is the author's first book on Tomato, and I also gave it my first gift on Tomato. If it can maintain such quality on the day of equalization, I must be giving it the light of the great god with both hands! I hope the author can stick to his original intention and finish this book, which is really a fairy grass. Come on~

It's okay, the daily love story is okay, forget about the hegemony story. A few vassal countries dared to force the palace, and then compassion broke out, and they changed their craftsman status and military status. Let's not talk about craftsman status, let's talk about military status, how much does it cost to recruit soldiers, the Song Dynasty, which is known as the richest feudal dynasty, can't stand it, and how can you appease the low-level officers? Good sharing of wealth. As a result, you withdrew the guard station, and Lao Zhu was able to kill everyone everywhere. I think it has a lot to do with Zhu Yuanzhang giving hereditary command to middle and lower-level officers and making hundreds of thousands of households. Moreover, these hereditary officers really left a family fortune for the Ming Dynasty. Two hundred years later, there will still be pillars such as Zhang Juzheng, Qi Jiguang, and Sun Chuanting. Policies must be in line with the times. Doesn't it mean that the more advanced the better, direct socialism is better? Isn't this realistic? The last protagonist is really all-round, proficient in everything including agriculture, industry and commerce, but it's just a small plug-in and it doesn't hurt. Generally speaking, it is considered a high-quality product in Tomato.

I predict that the rating of this book will go up. It is currently 8.6. Maybe not many people will read it. Let me talk about my impressions first. There are more than 100 chapters. The daily life in the early stage is lighter, and the war in the middle and later stages is heavier. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into this part. The sensationalism is just right, and the small characters can create emotional resonance. , There is basically no forced sensationalism that makes people feel abrupt, and I also admire the author. He updates five to six thousand words a day, and sometimes even ten thousand words a day. Thank you for your hard work. As for the poisonous points, as long as I don't think they are abrupt, they are reasonable and reasonable, and I don't feel any poisonous points at the moment. The writing is above average.

I have seen the latest chapter now. In terms of war, the cruelty of war and the psychological changes of soldiers are described poetically and picturesquely from the perspectives of various little characters. Simple words and plain descriptions present the most tragic side, making people feel that these soldiers are alive, they have flesh and blood, not just simple numbers. The protagonist is their soul, pointed by the sword, and invincible. In terms of emotions, Xu Miaoyun is very good, and the protagonist is also very good. The description is not vigorous, but like gurgling water, slowly gathering together from all directions, like a new river, continuous and gushing. When watching it, I didn't realize that in fact, our faces also have an aunt's smile. It turns out that this is love. Therefore, five stars, the follow-up author should continue to work hard. Of course, it will be good if you can update ten times a day.

This is the best plain text I have read so far. The time traveler has talents, brains, feelings for his family and country in his heart, and even more awe-inspiring [sending heart] The situation has ups and downs, mountains and mountains, and the group portraits are described delicately, from small individuals to the country and society. The author describes everything very well. It is truly a masterpiece. He generates power for love and is sincere to you [sending heart]. I hope the author can write better and better in the future, and the more he works, the more he will be successful [smile]

When I first started reading it, I thought it was an ordinary time-travel novel. But when I read it later, I saw that the protagonist had traveled through time and had a relationship with his brothers and parents, and a love relationship with his fiancée. The emotional descriptions were particularly detailed. The battlefield was not always a matter of victory. How much preparation had the protagonist made? There was also a battlefield in the third person. The description deeply reflects the two sides of war, including the struggle on the battlefield, the silent strategy in the court, and the feelings between relatives and friends. The author is also very dedicated. At the end of each chapter, he will mark the sources of some modern scientific products mentioned in the article and attach pictures, which is very responsible. In this book, it is not like many novels that deliberately whitewash the second and third oldest children. They also have shortcomings, and the protagonist is also influencing them and developing for the better. The heroine is not just like a vase. The heroine is also very smart. The heroine can guess what the hero is thinking most of the time. , And will also fill in the loopholes in the male protagonist's plan. The male and female protagonists treat each other with respect, but are inseparable, and they both understand each other's thoughts. The female protagonist has the kind of life-or-death determination that Yu Ji has for Xiang Yu, and the male protagonist always has the confidence that he can solve all the female protagonist's worries. In the letter sent to parents, the preparations made, the battlefield survey, and my own reflections are all written in it (there is a suspicion of trying to make up the word count). We do not have a God's perspective like the male protagonist. It is also the first time for the male protagonist to lead the army, and he is also transforming and growing. The male protagonist is not 100% sure that he will be able to defeat the enemy. When An Gui came back, he could only reassure his parents and arrange his affairs. At this time, I could feel that the male protagonist had truly integrated into this world. Everyone in this world is flesh and blood. It is these people who constitute a good work. I am very lucky to read such high-quality works.

It is an excellent historical article. It can be seen that the author really wrote it very carefully. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but after thinking about it for a long time, I gave it five stars. First of all, the story is very well written. You can tell what story the author wants to write in each story. The writing is also very enjoyable, which makes up for a lot of regrets. It's just that the author seems to have left out a lot of details, and the writing is too smooth. The first thing is time. The method I thought of today was realized in a short time. Don't talk about ancient times, even in modern times. If you want to open a company, there are various industry insiders who are proficient in giving guidance and smooth joints all the way. It does not happen overnight. The second is the people's hearts. Whoever can get into those official positions is not the best among the best. The writing is a bit sketchy. I still can't forget the sentence said by Wan Qixi of Shao Song Dynasty to conquer the world. A good historical web article, but if you want to truly turn it into a top-notch web article, it still needs a lot of polishing.

I have read a lot of Ming Dynasty novels, and although they are all good, I always feel that there is no novel with flesh and blood and emotions like this. It contains the deep love between brothers, the longing and worry between mother and son, the quarrels and interesting things between father and son, the tenderness between husband and wife, and the determination of fighting on the battlefield. , This book portrays and describes all the people with flesh and blood, as if they can emerge in the mind, vivid and lifelike. It can be said that this is a seriously underestimated novel.

The writing is indeed good, and the historical context is well grasped. It's just that the writing style is a bit biased towards women's videos. In recent years, the economy has been troubled by disasters and the economy has not been very good. Prince Wang who likes relaxed genres can understand the writing style. But you can't just write emotional dramas, you should focus on your career. Come to the battlefield quickly.

It's good to read. Although it's not a very serious historical article, it's very enjoyable to read. The author also checked the information. The part where the protagonist goes to the battlefield was well written. It's a pity that the update hasn't been finished yet, why do you have to keep reading the good-looking ones [crying]! ! ! Come on, author✊

It has good literary skills and not many poisonous points. Overall, it is a book that can be read. In addition, as of now, this is a one-woman story, and there are basically no scenes of love with other women, so it is quite acceptable.

The writing is very natural, it should be lighthearted, it should be heavy, there is no sense of deliberately arranging the plot, everything just happens naturally and smoothly. The character description of the protagonist is also very delicate, and the change of character has complete cause and effect.

I first read this book as it progressed, and after reading it, I continued to read it for a few days. I would like to write down some thoughts: I have read many time-travel stories from the Ming Dynasty, with people dressed as Zhu Biao, Zhu Xiongying, and Zhu Yunxi. Of course, the one I have read the most is the one dressed as Chongzhen. Dressed as Lao Wu, this is the first book, and Xu Miaoyun is also cut off. [Laughs] This angle is very strange, and it makes people want to read it. This is very important. Some writing angles are not attractive, which makes it difficult for people to have the desire to read. I saw a lot of people wearing Zhu Biao because of this. The angle is unattractive, I think too much, and I do things too far ahead of my time. There is a book about Zhu Yunxi in this area. I have been following it for a year or two. The early part of this book is good, but the later part is very average. But I still relied on inertia to finish reading. Going a step further, so far, I have seen the latest 158 ​​chapters. So far, there are some poisonous points but the impact is not big. The character descriptions are relatively full, and some technology trees are a bit advanced, which can sometimes be a bit of a surprise. But the overall impression is still very good, because I am a lazy person, and I basically don't review books that I feel are average, even if I read them for dozens or hundreds of hours. However, this book still gives me a very good feeling. Good luck, author! In addition, I am still looking forward to the development of the subsequent plot. If Zhu Biao does not die, how to deal with the problem of reducing the vassal clan. To be honest, even if the author now expands his financial resources, it is still not enough to deal with the entire feudal king system. The best way may be to entrust the feudal kings overseas and let the feudal kings expand their territory on their own, instead of tossing around Kyushu. The current progress is 158/158. If the plot changes later, I can come back and change my comments at any time. [Sinister smile]

I have read so many books and posted so many book reviews. It is rare to find such a good book that I can't wait to give a favorable review after reading less than a hundred chapters. The author is not writing a novel, but like carving a work of art. Every plot arrangement has been repeatedly polished by historical materials, and every climax design is meticulous and rigorous. As for the writing style, even those good books that are praised as excellent works are not far behind this book. There are the passionate and heroic battles on the battlefield, the interest of the boudoir where children love each other, the profound and complex emperor's mind, and the trivial family affairs of father, son and brothers. People can't help but sink their minds into the grandeur outlined by the author. What surprises me the most is that the score for such a good book is less than 9. I am afraid that anyone who reads it for a few hours will not be able to help but feel sorry for the author [laughing and crying]

The writing is very good. The ancient novels still have to be written by the author to be good. The war is wonderfully written, and the emotional aspect is okay. I personally don't like it if it's too boring. I hope it won't be a plot where two people stick together all day long.

It is soul-stirring and endlessly memorable. Each plot allows different readers to taste different tastes from different angles. The only thing that is the same is that they are all looking at the flesh-and-blood Ming world described by the author. For a story, the plot should be prioritized, but for a description of a world, the details of the plot can be simplified, but cannot be omitted. The best thing about this book so far is that the author not only shows the changes in the Ming Dynasty in this book from the perspective of King Wu from the perspective of King Wu, but also writes from the perspective of the common people. What made the Ming Dynasty better in the book is that the common people can benefit from King Wu's actions. Being able to buy an extra meat bun to reward yourself every day, being able to save an extra foot of cotton cloth for yourself or make an extra piece of new clothes for your family... These may or may not be associated with the plot, which makes people feel at ease and comfortable. It writes the people's simple emotional yearning for a better life, which means the world is brought to life. Even if the book is finished one day, it will not make people feel that the world has stopped, but only closed a window to observe the world.

The author writes very carefully. There are many things that I have never seen in historical novels before. When I see one, I have to search for a while before I can find the picture. It would be great if the author can accompany it with pictures [laughing and crying]

There are no other stories that write about the dark and bad sides of Lao Zhu's family, such as the bad side of Crown Princess Lu, the negative side of Lao Zhu's second and third children, and it has a very warm feeling and a sweet story. There are also a lot of little knowledge and feelings about family and country. Overall, Xicran [laughing]

After watching it in one breath, my evaluation is: Xiancao, the best, especially the description of the war scenes, starting from the small characters to experience the cruelty of war, I cried to death [crying] Moreover, the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are very sweet, so sweet. He is not the kind of straightforward love talk, but the sweetness brought out by every side description. It is super beautiful [Please update] [Please update] The author should update soon!