[System + multiple female protagonists + open low and go high]
The system has a low sense of presence and focuses on romance novels.
"Lin Mo, didn't you say you only love me?"
"I'm a bad man, baby. Bad men always mean what they say, don't they?"
"If you want to blame it, blame it... I have a system."
If ordinary people meet a bad woman, it will always be difficult to deal with them and they will be hurt a lot.
On the first day of school, Lin Mo was targeted by Neptune Senior. He could only become a member of the fish pond, but the anti-routine strategy system was accidentally activated. Neptune Senior was dedicated to him, and returned regretting his first love. The yandere senior vowed to take him down, and even the aloof top student...
It's fun to write, the system presence is relatively low, and the protagonist will develop slowly. Please accompany this book and accompany the protagonist's growth.
Reader comments
The following are personal suggestions:
1. Strengthen the protagonist's appearance, thinking, etc.
2. I feel that the protagonist is a bit passive. I blindly guessed that the author is a girl. Maybe she is not. She should not always be passive and accept it, but should take the initiative.
3. The props can be weakened a bit and changed to permanent ones. I personally like to see permanent props. If there are no props, they can be changed to money, because I can't find any related to the protagonist's background.
4. I hope there won't be too many female protagonists, maybe about four or five, and then intersperse a little bit of career. Girls don't necessarily love money, but everything that touches girls will definitely cost money.
5. I hope you can eat meat as soon as possible. Tomatoes are so popular in the world. There will be fewer people who like to watch them all the time.
6. The last option has a bit of a literary feel. I don't know what the audience is. Some people may like it and some may not.
In the follow-up plot, the blind guessing of Neptune's senior sister got lost and she found that she liked the protagonist. Then the protagonist found out that the senior sister was a sea king and retreated, and found another heroine. Personally, I hope to see him eat meat as soon as possible, and then become a master of time management among multiple heroines and have his own career.
After the system was updated, I was a little uncomfortable with it. Then the protagonist's charm increased from 7.6 To 8, and his intelligence increased from 8 to 9. It would be more rigorous if an attribute enhancement could be added to the system update chapter.
The following are personal suggestions: 1. Strengthen the protagonist's appearance, thinking, etc. 2. I feel that the protagonist is a bit passive. I blindly guessed that the author is a girl. Maybe she is not. She should not always be passive and accept it, but should take the initiative. 3. The props can be weakened a bit and changed to permanent ones. I personally like to see permanent props. If there are no props, they can be changed to money, because I can't find any related to the protagonist's background. 4. I hope there won't be too many female protagonists, maybe about four or five, and then intersperse a little bit of career. Girls don't necessarily love money, but everything that touches girls will definitely cost money. 5. I hope you can eat meat as soon as possible. Tomatoes are so popular in the world. There will be fewer people who like to watch them all the time. 6. The last option has a bit of a literary feel. I don't know what the audience is. Some people may like it and some may not. In the follow-up plot, the blind guessing of Neptune's senior sister got lost and she found that she liked the protagonist. Then the protagonist found out that the senior sister was a sea king and retreated, and found another heroine. Personally, I hope to see him eat meat as soon as possible, and then become a master of time management among multiple heroines and have his own career.
After the system was updated, I was a little uncomfortable with it. Then the protagonist's charm increased from 7.6 To 8, and his intelligence increased from 8 to 9. It would be more rigorous if an attribute enhancement could be added to the system update chapter.