Just No**********

It's okay, I can read it, and it's not serious. I suggest that the authors who work on the Qi Refining Immortal Emperor, the son-in-law, the security guard, the stall owner, and go to school should learn from it. If you don't go to school, you won't be able to write about urban immortality? [Laughing awkwardly]

Very good, very good. There is no frustrating plot. The protagonist will not eat beef if the protagonist is offended. Moreover, this protagonist is bad to the enemy and good to his own people. I like this. But I think the best thing is that the protagonist will build something to protect them in his own woman, or in the body of his own woman. There will be no such thing as the heroine in other novels being... When people are killed or about to be fucked, the situation is stuck until the end. If there is danger, it will be triggered directly to protect the heroine. This is really good. I think this alone can surpass 70 to 80% of Tomato authors, because most of the authors seem to be irrational and cannot advance the plot without writing these plots. So it is really comfortable to see one like this today.

Invincible, harem, there is no drama about kidnapping the protagonist's woman and threatening the protagonist, because those people are dealt with by the power left by the protagonist in the heroine's body. They do not accept second-hand junk cars. Invincible people experience a carefree daily life. At first I was a little disgusted with the main character taking on the stupid eldest son of the Xiao family. Later I found it a bit boring. Qi refining was much better than other books on average. The colors of the two magic weapons were swapped in the end, but their names remained the same.

Dear author: Seeing words is like meeting each other, showing trust and comfort. Liking your writing is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in the world. It's not about weighing the pros and cons, or being motivated by sex, but suddenly there is a piece of your work that makes me worried and unable to let go of it. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning, a nap at noon, or a night filled with stars, I want to spend it with you. Don't doubt why I like you, just like fish fall in love with the sea, birds fall in love with the sky, I don't quite understand what this means, I think it's like breathing, no need to practice, just because it's you. By the way, if you still have the manuscript saved, remember to post it. [Sending Hearts]

At present, there is nothing wrong with the five stars. I hope it will remain ruthless. The most important thing is to let girls do dog licking. This is what I have always wanted to say. This kind of video is for men, not the kind that gives girls this benefit and that benefit. I have to say, the five star is indeed worth it. I hope the author can keep it. It's very well written. The girls act as lickers for the male protagonist. This is what a real male video should have. In fact, I also want to write this kind of novel myself, but unfortunately I don't know how to write it. So far, there are only a handful of novels that can make me nod and give five stars. This one is one of them. I hope to keep it.

The immortal soul has arrived. If you still buy second-hand goods, you are really a cuckold. Does Blue Star still lack original and good cars? (There are second-hand plots later that will be praised directly with seven stars)

It's the ultimate cool article [laughter][laughter] Invincible throughout, and there are also people who love to read it [laughter][laughter] Generally I don't comment, I only comment on cool articles and when I want to complain. This book gave me the urge to watch commercials for love [laughter][laughter] The author needs to work harder, I can't stop updating, and I've finished it again, and I still have more to say [cry]

I have always been misunderstood and ridiculed. Everyone thinks it is the same person because they are similar to each other, so I can't change the way. The heroine is constantly being thought about and refuses to resent the hero directly, not understanding. It's good to kill decisively and capture without grinding.

The book is too short, too short. I am preparing the summoning ritual of Cthulhu, hoping to turn the author into a tentacle monster and update it soon. I also need others to complete the ritual. This will be perfect to help the author become an omniscient and omnipotent god of writers as soon as possible.

The writing is very good, much better than other old routines. Although it is a little unreasonable, it is possible that the protagonist is alive and well, but it would be nice to add more storylines. For example, I put the three-headed dragon Ghidorah in the island country, and then Nine Tails came, and I put the super beast in New York, and the protagonist cosplayed with a mysterious masked man, pretending to be a ghost, and so on.

Not the Qi Refining Fairy Brother, the green-haired turtle, the licking dog, but also, the girl really eats it, only drives a new car, and gives five stars [smile] CCB master, all I can say is [laughing evilly]

Excellent and invincible writing, refreshing [laughing evilly]

Chapter 130, either in Xiaren or on Xiaren Road. 211 Chapters, rating 6.8, 17,000 People reading Multiple girls: Yan Ruyan (Charging in Chapter 1 of the Beginning) Yun Qianyue (Chapter 21 Charging) Xia Shiyun (Chapter 32 Charging) Luo Qingcheng (Chapter 101 Charging) Han Yue (Chapter 116 Charging) Zhao Mengyue (Chapter 130 Charging) Li Lizhi (Chapter 172 Charging) Maid: Kamikaze Ayano (Chapter 52 Charge)

I've read Chapter 17 so far. It's well written and I'm still enjoying it.

Very good, no bloody plot, cool article [like]

Yes, it is an invincible and refreshing article, and it is not aggrieved at all. This is in line with the return of a full-level boss to the city [laughter]

Okay, cool writing is not afraid of being brainless, it's just that it's not cool enough. For the time being, it looks good, he kills decisively and takes in girls quickly [thoughts]

The protagonist is at the peak of the late Nascent Soul, has a lifespan of millions of years, can crush the sun with a snap of his fingers, and is absolutely invincible. The Human Emperor Banner, the Immortal Killing Sword, the Qiankun Ring, nothing second-hand, the green-haired turtle, join the plot of the organization, watch with confidence [laughing] The ratings have just come out, please give me a thumbs up

Nice plot and interesting

Okay, no 🐢Men have five stars

After watching it, when will the wooden girls be collected together? I think the beautiful mother is very good.

This is the real cool story, keep killing and killing.

Yes, the main character doesn't have ink marks, and it's okay to have beautiful women.

Although it is a pretentious plot of Dragon King, it is really an invincible novel. There is no doubt about this. If someone wants to endanger the people around the protagonist, they will be annihilated in the next second. Protagonist: My rules are rules [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's pretty good-looking and not toxic at all. The problem with Weiyi is that every random person is a bad guy. I haven't seen any normal supporting characters in the whole story.

I loved watching it so much, it's my favorite little hs again

It's really refreshing. The writing is crisp and clear. Killing the villain directly explodes into a mist of blood. There is no stomach-ache plot such as feeling aggrieved or being looked down upon.

It's pure and refreshing. The protagonist doesn't take pressure and acts decisively. So far, I don't see any inconsistency.

Very good-looking, invincible to kill the opponent instantly, kung fu in bed and sleeping clothes, powerful under the bed to defeat all kinds of tricks, headshots + random killings of all aristocratic families, gangsters, masters and organizations, just watch it without thinking.

This is a masterpiece without any flaws, it is decisive and informal, and its sentences are elegant and eloquent. You can directly see the highlights. Good looking, good looking six stars. I would like to add a little more to the author. Ha ha ha ha