Transformation**********

It's so beautiful. Just watch it. You won't be able to stop talking after watching it. And Lu Pinwen changed it, but it didn't look like he had changed it. The former two golden elixirs fight against each other, and the latter fights against the golden elixir at the peak of foundation building. Still the author's divine power, or Lu Pinwen's divine power

Okay, okay, I will forcefully kill the dog no matter the cost. Tianming and Master Xianzun will kill the horse regardless of the cost. Good Luck is equally worthy of praise.

From the beginning to the end, the White Lotus heroine gives the impression that she doesn't believe in fate, no matter the beginning or the end. Of course, she mostly causes trouble for the protagonist, and she doesn't feel that she is purely malicious. Some of the protagonist's behaviors after the gender change feel a bit strange. As far as the first few chapters are concerned, it is not a big problem. After that, the protagonist wants to be pure. The strength begins to give up the perception of external interference, and indirectly and passively accept certain things. These are the driving forces for subsequent events. The other male supporting characters are more focused on the White Lotus female supporting role to cause trouble for the protagonist, and more are the conflicts caused by the "original plot" correction to the protagonist. The character creation is very full, and it is worth five points. PS. If the protagonist is later set to be the heroine who awakens her own will and deceives herself into being a male, transforming from a male time traveler into a female, this is pure setting fraud. I have been fooled once.

It's rare to see good bianwen. It doesn't make you look soft and cute as soon as you wear it. It just looks comfortable.

A score of 6 or more may be low, but it may be just right. The writing was okay, but the story had no logic. I'd better sort out the outline clearly next time I write a book. The story got sidetracked when it came to the martial arts competition, and the front part was pretty tight. It's good to have no standard group portraits. The story has one protagonist and distinct supporting characters, which makes it easier to tell the story and control the direction than a group of protagonists. But it's only in the first half, and it's because the trial section was sidetracked. Maybe the author didn't know how to fill it in, maybe he was anxious to get ratings, etc. The plot took off, and the readers were thrown off the earth and stopped thinking like Kaz. I've read half of it, it's not a very good book, I'm looking forward to growing up [blowing kiss]

It looks good, and I feel very good about it so far. The protagonist of the script is struggling, and the supporting characters in the script will also doubt themselves. The people outside the script are not completely following the script without caring about the sect or their own interests. This is good.

Although it is a female video type, it has been transformed by the author to make it less frustrating, a bit interesting, better than the same type, and not so depressing.

Although there were some Xiao Lei in the early stage (the kind of mentally retarded dramas that are common in female videos) that made people feel aggrieved, it became more and more smooth later on. If you come to Xianxia, ​​you will come to post. It is best to skip the first 40 chapters so as not to delay the plot and you will not make yourself sick. Because most of the previous plots have confusing word order, and except for some small foreshadowings, the plots are full of surprises. But after 40 pictures it becomes rare and gets better and better.

It's pretty good. The content is not as ugly as the ratings (5, 7). It can be regarded as a group portrait article, each one has its own characteristics. The original heroine of Chuan Shu who is almost driven crazy by the rules of the original book - Su Wan The original male protagonist who is unlucky in every sense of the word - Lu Mingxuan (what is better about Wei Yi is that the author did not add any bad character to him, he was simply guided by the rules to confront the protagonist) CP-Yueli, the protagonist who stands out with her straightforwardness and generosity (personally I think the author created this character very well, I can even say that all my 5 stars are because of her) Chapter 54 can be read in detail

When I saw Chapter 40, I knew that the score would not be high. Just like when I was practicing swordsmanship, it was said that once the protagonist is identified, he will fight to death and focus on practicing without caring about other things. The heroine is controlled by the law of heaven and can't help herself (the fate Gu is so scary). I am really interested in the suggestions.

It's good to watch, but it's a bit abstract in the early stages and overly descriptive of Su Wan. Moreover, Su Wan's characterization in the early stage is a bit abstract, but it gets better later in the Tianjiao Conference. The one named Lu is not as abstract as those people said. He is just a villain with the template of the male protagonist, and he was killed in one move. When it comes to the Tianjiao Conference, the writing is actually very good, and the Yueli shaping is good. It depends on the author's follow-up.

After watching it for a while, I felt it was okay, not as bad as I imagined.

How shameless! [Like] I just feel like there are a little few posts.

It's probably good-looking, but there are many places in the article that don't conform to human reading habits and logic. It would be better if the author could polish it up again.

It's getting better and better in the later stages, I feel it's pretty good-looking, the posts are substantial, and the plot is well implemented.

It's pretty good-looking and enjoyable to watch. It's a little flawed occasionally, but it's okay. I'd like to ask you, is this the main focus? [Sending my heart]

The characters are so special to me!

It's rare to meet someone who likes to watch it

Looks good, but the rating is too low

It feels pretty good, quite novel [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Sir, when will my orange-flavored stickers arrive?

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

Overall, it's pretty good, but it was a bit too harshly controlled by the original plot [blowing kiss]

I can only say that it is okay, and it is worth reading among Tomato novels.

It's very beautiful, nothing surprising, but there are too few, not enough to look at.

Not bad, come on, author!

It feels okay now Not bad, very pretty

It feels pretty good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This book is more than just that