Ascetic Sister, Admit It, Vampire Princess Is Pregnant with Your Baby

Overall, it's still okay, and it's still visible. The settings are quite interesting. Just to clarify: the writing is a bit messy, and it's not very clean, so don't read it if you're mysophobic. Also, the protagonist really has no sense of boundaries and has no sense of boundaries with everyone. Any passerby can stick to the protagonist. [Face covering] The plot is a bit frustrating. I have been threatened all the time, especially by my brother, and the logic is not very rigorous. If you mind if the protagonist has contact with other men, such as hugging, just don't look at it, the child is born If you don't mind the above points, it's still quite fun to watch.

Very good. The early stage is mediocre but the later stage is great. Also, the author can't update four times a day. He is just a bastard who can be bullied on the bed.

The writing is very good and the rhythm is tight. The vampire queen disguises herself as a man and lurks in human society, but becomes pregnant with the child of the director of the Operations Department of the Administration. The setting is very innovative. There is also the feeling that the person you are looking for is me, but you don't know it, and you still dote on me. The black pulling feeling under the lamp is very poignant. (*σ´∀`)σ It's a lot of fun, the plot is very interesting, I really like the contrasting interaction between the cold-blooded sister and the soft and cute vampire girl. It's a good book worth recommending [Sending my heart]

Nice! The Lolita is paired with the royal sister, and the pregnancy at the beginning arouses the readers' interest in reading. The protagonist is Xue Ji, who has been pretending to be a boy, but is gradually revealed later, and confesses to her parents that she is a girl. Anyway, it's beautiful, Lily will always be a god!

There are not big problems with the setting and content, but I personally think that this kind of subject matter should be confessed early and start the post-post journey. After all, we are here to see Lolita, and we don't want to see Xiao Nanliang get along with her. If there are too many previous stories in the book, it will be difficult to get up. In addition, the writing style needs to be improved. The description of the content should be sufficient (at least clearly write the names of the people). People like me who have low understanding will not be able to understand it. However, the author, please calm down, the potential is unlimited! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Overall, it's not bad. It's not as bad as they said. The plot line is pretty good. Oh, I suggest you bring a translator, otherwise you won't be able to understand some details. It's very exciting [laughter]

Is the main body of the child a human or a vampire? If it was a vampire, and the heroine only sucked it once for a long time, would the child be in a state of half-death and yet undead [face covering] I forgot you can eat animal blood [face covering]

It has fulfilled its promise [laughs crookedly] But I still have to say that it is very good-looking, and the emotions and plot are very smooth. Still, being pregnant at the beginning [blowing kisses] made up for the pain of not having a child.

The article is well written. Although there is a bit of a knife in the middle, it is still very enjoyable to read. Moreover, the emotional line of this article has obviously changed. Well, I would like to ask the author what time do you usually update? Could you please tell me?

Although the plot is a bit flawed, it is still relatively good in terms of character creation and worldview shaping. Maybe the plot attracts a small group of people, but the general direction is more in line with my orientation.

It's very beautiful. Although it's a bit messy, I love watching it.

Author, how did you hit every plot point so accurately? [Face covering], I can't even scratch my head to figure out what kind of thinking you used to write such a magical plot. For a pregnancy, I almost read the whole story and found that every plot point you know can hit the thunderous points in normal people's thinking in a very magical way. There are so many weird things that I can't say anything at all. I'm just curious about how old the author is.

The writing is very good. After reading so many novels, there are not many that interest me now. This one is one of the few. Therefore, the author must keep updating and not stop updating. When the update stopped, my sky fell. 😭😭😭😭

This book is highly recommended. The language is ingenious and very good.

The author's writing style is quite good, the characters are vividly drawn, and the plot is also very good. This book alone can be called a tomato masterpiece. But taken together, it seems a bit confusing. It is suitable to read without thinking. Don't think about why, just read along with the author's intention. All in all, it is a masterpiece that does not hide its flaws📚

Good-looking. Love to watch. Like to watch.

It's beautiful. I love watching it. I don't know what other people think. Anyway, I really like [The God of Sparrow Food]. I hope the author won't stop updating. Please [Blow a Kiss]

It looks good. I like the setting. The plots are connected smoothly. It's quite interesting. But it's just not interesting enough. The author will continue to update [please update]

Looks good, pretty good , it's a bit short. I hope the author can work harder and write more.

Make a wish for the author to become a cat lady.

Teacher Qualification Certificate (melted) It's a bit bad. To be honest, the early plot is very messy. The scenes change too quickly. There are too many poisonous points. The setting is quite novel. I can only give it three stars here. First of all, it's deliberately making things worse. This is what I can't stand the most. Secondly, the plot is very messy, and readers will not carefully figure out the psychology of the characters, so don't write like this. Just write about the psychology. Don't just rely on other descriptions to describe the psychology. Many things are only mentioned a little bit in the front, and then you start to use the things you want to use. You should write at least as much as you want in the front. Okay, here is my evaluation. If the author can overcome these two, then I think his work can achieve a rating of 8.2 Or above. If the plot arrangement is in place, it will be more reasonable. It's reasonable, but unexpected. I think it can be upgraded to 8.6. If we optimize the logic of the entire article on this basis, it can be upgraded to 9.0.

It looks good, but when did you know the child was Jiuli's? [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

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It's a good book, but there are so few new ones at the moment. I'm a little afraid to read it. So I won't read it after I finish it.

The plot is quite novel, but there are typos and omissions in some places, making it difficult to read smoothly.

It's good-looking, has a rich plot, good characterization, and the subject matter is relatively novel. I recommend [Blow Kiss]

The book is very nice. But why can't I see the comments every time? Apparently people like my comments every day, but I can't see the comments I posted [angry]

It's good to read, but I was confused for a while when I saw Aleph [face covering] [face covering] There's not much else, but it's still a highly recommended book.

Nice! The subject matter is very novel and the character creation is okay. I remember that the last book I read was Blood Ji Wen or Ji Bai's. The author must not stop updating [please update]

It's pretty good. It's pretty good. I followed it right to the end.