Zhan Shen: Yes, I Represent Azathoth

The setting of this book is quite new in the fan fiction. The style of the drama is not too abstract, there are not many bad sentences, and it does not copy too much from the original work. Among the fan fiction of the Goddess Killer, I think it is the best in terms of writing style. Azathoth in this book is not the one in the original work, but a higher-dimensional existence. So far, there are no problems, except that the original line jumps very quickly. I don't know if I plan to start another line, or if I want to complete the entire novel. If I have to clear it up, it's that this book doesn't have that much abstract fun, and it's not really about fighting. The author does very little fighting scenes. I just want to read funny stories and fight—it's fun! It can be avoided, and the update is too short. As for the protagonist, I think it's okay. He has masculine virtues, isn't vulgar, doesn't speak dirty words, and isn't a virgin. He's like a college student who has just entered the workplace, a bit dead but very energetic. I wonder if you can get what I mean, energetic but with a bit of literary melancholy? What impression did he give me? He is probably the kind of "ordinary person" who has a sense of faith, or the lucky ones and the best among them. He is integrated into this book instead of the fourth natural disaster and high-dimensional life. For example, in the plot of Li Yifei, he wanted to get in touch with the plot in advance and save the assimilated students, but it also brought about the butterfly effect. The plan of the snake demon was advanced. When he returned to his thoughts, he realized that even if he discovered the snake demon in advance and solved it together, he could not save more people. More people in the original story survived, but some were assimilated because he was not dead but was assimilated. He felt sad and sad for their passing. If he had been stronger earlier, could he have avoided it? He doesn't know. He is in awe of life, instead of just brushing off the people in the protagonist group. To him, they are all real people, even if he has never met them, they are all living people. If I have to summarize and compare the relationship between the protagonist and Qiye, I think it is like the Pioneer and Bai E in Bengtie. A person leaves home (train) and wants to go home to see his family and friends. But this possibility lies in Lin Qiye. At first, he is the kind of person who is curious and excited about seeing the characters in the book and also takes some advantage (referring to wanting to use Lin Qiye to ascend the dimension and let him send him home). Qiye is in the endless world. I met him in reincarnation, the person who accompanied him for five years in the silent night of his childhood. Their relationship was hazy through a layer of mist and like a veil. For Lin Qiye, he was a companion, a friend, a brother, a teacher... (There is no room for so many people here). I think it will be better if the love line is long and thin. I am curious about the plot of Lin Qiye's childhood when he travels back to his childhood. How will the love line be written?

It looks good, creative and thoughtful, and the writing is good. The bad thing is that when writing some emotional scenes, it may look like AI, but I think it has nothing to do with it. The writing is quite interesting, with a natural and interesting feeling, not embarrassing. But I really think the author can describe more about the subtle operations of some of the protagonists, and the number of words can be improved, because sometimes he suddenly doesn't understand how to do something, and the protagonist has a lot of doubts about his own abilities. Exploration, because I feel that although the protagonist is relatively vivid, he is not very full, so the impact of the character is not particularly strong, and I feel that he is not enough to change the character of the original work, but after all, his flaws are not concealed. I think his creativity can be used as an extra point. The protagonist's combat power is not very inflated, but he does not have that sense of depression. Taking into account the advantages and disadvantages, I think it can be given full marks [Send Heart] (Hao Kan)

Looks good! Like it!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's very pretty, and there's nothing wrong with it personally.

Nice looking, quite interesting

Very appetizing, Haokang [admiration]

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