People Are in Tianlong, and the Gods at the Beginning of the Game Are According to the Scriptures.

This book is truly amazing, five stars is not an exaggeration👏 Jiumozhi is so exciting as the heroine, and her scenes with the protagonist are full of tension🔥 Every confrontation is like playing chess, you come and I go, it makes people's palms sweat 😅 The pace of the plot is just right, and it was super enjoyable to read it in one sitting! ! This book is truly amazing, five stars is not an exaggeration👏 Jiumozhi is obviously not the heroine, but she steals the show even more than the heroine. She is full of sexual feelings, and I immediately broke my guard 💥 The plot advances as fast as going to the market, and the character interactions are layered, making you unable to stop watching🔥 The review is based on this sense of CP, it must be Amway! ! ! ! [Laughing awkwardly]

It's so beautiful. The introduction of this book says it has multiple heroines, but it actually has a single heroine. The heroine is Jiumozhi. The emotional scenes are very well written. The heroine is not a burden, and has saved the protagonist from fire and water many times.

It's pretty good, and the writing is also very good. It can be regarded as a rare masterpiece of martial arts, especially the heroine Jiumozhi in the book, whose portrayal is penetrating, highlighting the depth of the author's writing skills [full]

So far, the writing is smooth, the plot and characters are well integrated, at least it is not stiff, and the protagonist is not systematic. It is obvious that the author is very familiar with Jin Yong's novels, so I can't give a bad review based on this. Jiumozhi's writing is quite interesting, like the image of the 1997 version, full of joy~

It mainly tells the story of the protagonist and Jiumozhi's love, hatred, love and murder. It cannot be classified as martial arts, because there is no martial arts at all.

This book is a Tianlong fanfic, and it is really well written. At least I really like it. I also read the book reviews and found that many of the negative reviews were simply inexplicable. For example, I gave a negative review because I didn't understand it. I gave a negative review because I took the courage of a snake. I also gave a negative review because the protagonist's surname was Su. I also gave a negative review when I learned that I had to kneel down to a man. It really made me laugh. The author's rating is comparable to that of Dou E. This book is quite good among martial arts fan fiction. I hope the author can continue his work and reach a higher level. I regret it, I deserve your 7.4 Rating [smile]

It's really good. There are a lot of interesting plots and funny ideas. I think about Jiumozhi's nth day. Most of the Tianlong novels are like a running account, with a large plot span and lack of experience details, or they are full of bitterness and hatred. They just write whatever comes to mind and the rhythm is unbalanced and fast.

The writing is really awesome. I haven't seen such an interesting martial arts fanfic for a long time. The only drawback is that I discovered this novel too early. Can I update it twenty times a day? It's not enough. 😱

This is the most comfortable martial arts fanfic I have seen in the past few years. The combat power system is problematic, the cheating is stable, and the love is always there. The protagonist has a clear mind and has cultivated his true nature all the way. He is not said to be a knight, but he is very comfortable to watch. This book is really good

After reading it, the martial arts masterpiece in Tomato has no messy ambiguity, nor does it randomly set up realms such as masters, innates, or levels. The plot design is reasonable, and the background fits the original work. It can be seen that the author is very careful, but it is a pity that the author is too short...

The best Tianlong fanfic I have ever seen, highly recommended. The real protagonist Shen Zhaojing starts

At present, I see that Hero Conference 2.0 Has just ended. To be honest, 7.4 Is really a bit low. When I watch martial arts, I generally like to watch mixed martial arts, and rarely read fanfics of a single original work, because I feel that it is just following the protagonist of the original work, and there is no fun in grabbing the chance to be the protagonist. But the writing of this book really exceeded my expectations. The plot is not conventional, the characters are vivid (don't say what I said is a cliché, anyone who has read this book will know whether what I say is true), the content is not thin, although there are some small flaws (in fact, I didn't pay much attention to the flaws, but there must be nitpicks or things that are not to someone's taste), but the flaws are not concealed. It is really a good work and worth reading.

During the Chinese New Year, I discovered another good book. I haven't read a martial arts novel for a long time. This book is so interesting and the language is witty and humorous. A good ending. After all, he doesn't kill people or set fires, he just steals a few books. The Imperial Master is also a scholar [laughing] The other one is Xiao Feng replacing Linghu Chong. I read that one first, and then Tomato🍅 recommended this one to me. I saw the latest chapter, using a living person Dong Lie to make elixirs, which is a bit disgusting🤢.

The author's ideas are eye-catching. Not everyone who travels through Tianlong must rely on the system to intercept Hu Duanyu! The settings are quite good, but the only drawback is that the author has too many narrations and emphasizes the settings of Jiumozhi Power Bank too many times. But I still think this book is pretty good, keep up the good work

The male protagonist has a very stable mind, clear logic in doing things, and is neither reckless nor cowardly. Although he has both appearance and understanding, he has clear plans, boldness and carefulness. Although his strength improves quickly, it does not make him invincible early and makes the story lose suspense. The convenient description of the characters is in line with the characteristics of the original characters, and has been amplified to a certain extent, allowing the characters such as Jiumozhi to shine even more brilliantly, and also adds a lot of laughter to the story. The emotional depiction is relatively restrained. He is not the kind of slutty male protagonist who falls in love with another and accepts the other. The pace of development is very comfortable. At present, the only emotional lines are Wang Yuyan and the quadruplets, and the possible Xixia princess in the future. The overall look and feel is very good, and I look forward to the follow-up.

It's cool and interesting The main plot is to collect martial arts skills and cultivate immortality in martial arts. There are many female protagonists, but they are not the kind of studs who accept one after another. The supporting characters have curves and highlights. For martial arts fans who have passed or above, I would rate it 8.7 Personally.

It feels okay. I don't know why there are so many low scores. I think it's pretty good, better than many. However, there are also shortcomings. One is that the character creation may not be so perfect, and the other is that the updates are too slow and more updates will be added.

The writing is okay and the plot is very good, but I hope some holes can be filled in.

Everything else was okay, except that Duan Zhengchun washed it too much! First of all, those are Duan Yu's sisters, which means that Dao Baifeng married first. In other words, he provoked so many women even though he knew that he could not persuade Dao Baifeng to give other women their status. Furthermore, he himself didn't know that he had so many daughters, which shows that he ran away after playing and never thought about taking responsibility, and never paid attention to the woman he hurt. As long as he can keep it outside and wash it, I will accept it. Another point is that Jiumozhi writes so much that he almost becomes a guest-centered writer! The protagonist is also the same as Jiumozhi, who goes around looking for martial arts secrets, complaining about Jiumozhi's greed for biting off more than he can chew, and becoming Jiumozhi at the same time.

The Imperial Master is the True Heroine [laughs] Although the writing is absurd, it still has logic. It makes people laugh after reading it, and I hope to keep up the good work.

One of the difficult points in traveling through books is that the protagonist has to participate in some important scenes of the original book at all times, but the protagonist's participation cannot prevent the original story line from being unfolded. The author's handling of this point is very good, trying not to destroy the opportunities of the characters in the original book, and allowing himself to improve. The logic is very consistent. The character design of the protagonist is also okay. His basic views are positive, he is not overly enthusiastic, and he speaks and does things to the point. I think one of the more frustrating points is that there are too many martial arts secrets for the protagonist. It is not necessary. It is enough to learn one or two useful secrets. A lot of secrets are stacked together without greatly improving the strength, which makes people feel a little cumbersome. Finally, I would like to complain about other book reviews. These book reviews have really made me gain knowledge. It's okay to complain and criticize, as long as you have a basic understanding. Most of them are harsh words and have no logic at all. The author is quite good. Don't read the bad book reviews (including mine), and write your own story well.

The martial arts alone is still very good and worth 5⭐, but if you want to watch more female protagonists, you should probably stay behind. The single female protagonist Jiumozhi in the front only has two ⭐

Fellow practitioners in the upper, middle and lower dantian areas have a good idea and feel like they are about to rush towards the path of cultivating immortality. One star for the protagonist Four stars for Tietoujiu Mozhi [laughing] The slightly dissatisfying point is why Wang Yuyan was chosen in Tianlong. Apart from her talent as a master of martial arts theory and her beauty, she didn't see any bright spots. It's really not as good as Variety A'Zhu [thinking] who understands everything

It's rare that Tian Long Shen Ting Jing starts the game, and the characters are in line with the characteristics of the original work. They don't maliciously distort and demean others just to pick up girls.

Why such a low score? I think the writing is very good. I think if this score is rated normally, it should be above 8.4 And below 9. I just don't want it to be written by a writer. If it is a bit poisonous, it is still a little bit. If you like reading martial arts novels, you should be very interested in this book. The author's writing is also very interesting. I hope to keep up the good work.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book in Tomato that has such a strong sense of immersion and rich character descriptions. It's such a good book. If you don't like it after reading chapter 50, I'll just complain about it [making faces] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]

It's very interesting. It's different from the stereotype of practicing martial arts and starting a harem without thinking. The background is not limited to the original work, but mainly based on the original work, supplemented by other histories of the same period. The goal of the male protagonist is not to learn martial arts to get rid of trouble, but to live forever. It doesn't abuse the owner, nor does it lick the dog. In my opinion, it should score at least 8-9 points.

The word "Shuang" should be "Shuang", the plot inside is very good, but there are some things that can be directly enjoyed, so he summarized them directly, mainly about the mission levels and things step by step, slowly. But martial arts is not like martial arts, and love is not like falling in love. I personally don't recommend it. If you are bored, just watch it.

Yes, it's quite interesting. I think fan fiction should be based on one's own understanding of the original work and the background and worldview of the original work to create its own story. Those who have read the original work will not find it strange, and those who have not read it will also understand it appropriately. I am disgusted by those who always like to bulldoze the original work by filling holes in it, as if they have the writing skills themselves. But since the author has been linking Jin Yong's world view in the early stage, have you ever thought about simply connecting them?

I have read about 80 chapters so far, and overall I like it very much. What I especially want to say is that there are no other similar novels that always write about trivial things, and the writing on the evolution of martial arts is pretty good. However, it is said that there are multiple female protagonists, but I haven't seen it yet. In addition, the protagonists all aim to become immortals, and their skills are better than the last. They may be invincible when they come out of the mountains. In this case, if you keep the rhythm, the combat power will not be easy to control.