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This story with Su Qingyan and Lu Xingze as the protagonists is a well-completed short sweet pet story, recommended with five stars!
1. Plot rhythm: The 7 chapters are short and concise, with no redundant plots. The transition from the heartbeat of meeting to the warming of emotions is natural, and the rhythm is just right. It is very smooth to read in one sitting.
2. Character creation: The protagonists Su Qingyan and Lu Xingze have vivid images, distinct and complementary personality traits, and the details of their interactions are written delicately and sweetly, making it easy for readers to immerse themselves in the youthful and beautiful love atmosphere.
3. Overall impression: As an essay submission, the story has a complete frame and sincere emotions. The image of "mint shimmer" is also consistent with the theme of youthful love. The text is full of tenderness. It is a very sweet and healing article.
The only small regret is that there is no extra story, and I can't see the sweet daily life of the protagonist, but it also makes the beauty of the story stop at the most appropriate moment.
This story with Su Qingyan and Lu Xingze as the protagonists is a well-completed short sweet pet story, recommended with five stars! 1. Plot rhythm: The 7 chapters are short and concise, with no redundant plots. The transition from the heartbeat of meeting to the warming of emotions is natural, and the rhythm is just right. It is very smooth to read in one sitting. 2. Character creation: The protagonists Su Qingyan and Lu Xingze have vivid images, distinct and complementary personality traits, and the details of their interactions are written delicately and sweetly, making it easy for readers to immerse themselves in the youthful and beautiful love atmosphere. 3. Overall impression: As an essay submission, the story has a complete frame and sincere emotions. The image of "mint shimmer" is also consistent with the theme of youthful love. The text is full of tenderness. It is a very sweet and healing article. The only small regret is that there is no extra story, and I can't see the sweet daily life of the protagonist, but it also makes the beauty of the story stop at the most appropriate moment.