On the Verge of Expulsion, I Awaken a Proficiency Panel

It's quite real, but some of the logic is hard to understand. I understand the plot of Xiaojia's story, and the emotions are good, but it always feels weird to bring in the protagonist, and everyone is a bit confused. I don't understand the world view, but it's well told, and it's not too outrageous at once. The efforts of ordinary people encounter a system that can be clearly seen. I hope Su is a comrade-in-arms. Even if things change, I hope it will be more reasonable. Lao Jin hopes to give a good ending. I hope the protagonist will not forget his roots 🙂

It's so good. I've read the second volume. I thought the second volume would also have a summary, but the author said that the book's performance was not good, so I posted a book review to prove that it is a good book!!! It's the first time I've read a book in so many years to write a review, because I want to prove that it is a good book! It's beautiful, the emotions are very delicate, and it's really close to life. The author once again made me cry, woooooooooooooooo

Whether in terms of writing style or characterization, this is a work by a new star. I hope the author can continue it and let me see the moment when the protagonist Lin Fan personally removes Zhao Wuji's dog head and awakens his brother Pang Hu.

There are some small logic holes, but they are innocuous. The narrative pace is not fast. The writing is also fluent The plot is indeed quite easy to guess, with Gao Wuwen's panel style, no matter how many plots there are, it's pretty much the same. To be honest, the world view is nothing eye-catching, it's just a pretty average panel type. The style is dark, which I don't like. (As of Chapter 7)

The author writes really well, and the emotions of each person are very vivid. The inner struggle of the person, the courage of the protagonist to not give in, and the spirit of the soldiers who are not afraid of death are vividly written. This is the first time I write this review. The plots of other Shuangwen novels I have read are not as vivid as this one. The plots of some Shuangwen novels are too stiff and emotionless. I think this book is quite good. Come on, author! I will continue to pay attention to your 😘 (forgive my poor language skills)

This is so beautiful. When I see Lin Fan's growth, I really want to cry. I don't know why. The tears just can't stop and keep flowing. I don't know what's wrong with me. I just want to cry. Every volume is so beautiful...

The content is good and the emotional description is very good.

Dear author, I believe you can rush forward! Come on Don't stop updating!!! Lin Fan is really great Brothers' affection is earth-shaking, and their sense of responsibility is earth-shaking. It's a blessing for the world

I don't often read modern martial arts themes, but this book really attracted me. The male protagonist is really obsessed with becoming stronger, and he also attaches great importance to his brothers, classmates and parents. The family and friendship are very touching~ Sufficient hard work and proficiency are just the right golden fingers~ It is not easy for the author to persist in writing to the end~

Although there are some minor flaws in some places, it still looks good overall. To be honest, it feels a bit nonsense. If poor warriors are restricted by aristocratic families, then who will resist the ferocious beasts? Is it possible for those aristocratic families to resist? Will the family resist?