After Rebirth, the Big Sister Is in Trouble at the Beginning

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't help but post a comment. I read the content of the novel. It's not an AI article, but the author has writing skills. Why doesn't it even have a rating for more than 400,000 words? I clicked on the cover several times and saw that there was no rating for more than 400,000, so I quit directly. I couldn't find a new novel to read today, so I clicked on it and took a closer look, and found that there is really something interesting. However, I also found a problem. The first ten chapters at the beginning were too cumbersome and too procrastinating. They could be condensed into two or three chapters, so that the rhythm would be more comfortable. No, that's too early to boast. The author writes about the protagonist's family background and arranges these family members. Isn't this causing trouble for the readers? Two stars deducted, the author's writing skills are good, but don't be a literary inexperience in the future!

The protagonist's mother is mentally ill. . I suspect the author's family situation is also complicated. . .

The author's description of the main character's family is very real, and my family is similar. Life is good, but if you don't enjoy it, you just make a fuss. People with good families can't even think about the existence of such a family after seeing it. It's too difficult. If you have money, you still have choices. If you don't have money, you will really torture each other like the protagonist in his previous life.

It's very good, but I can't stand it anymore. I feel that the protagonist's life is quite painful, but the writing is okay. The family is too suffocating, but as soon as the pharmaceutical factory was established, I lost interest. No calls [face covering]

Author, I would like to make a suggestion, why don't you put the two pictures at the top and the bottom at the back?

The plot is pretty good, but the details are a bit rough, so it's okay to read as a refreshing novel.

It looks pretty cool! There aren't those silly routines!

It's okay, I can watch it, and I recommend it.

Good rebirth article

It's very pretty, but the size is really weird.

The writing is smooth, thank you to the author

A very realistic book, not bad

The language is interesting, the content is substantial, the characters are clearly drawn, and it is beautiful to watch.

Very realistic, brings back many years of memories [Like]