[Completed] Xie Junan & Lu Zi (zī) Yuan ❗️They are two men, please don't mind entering❗️ [Two men] + [Time Travel] + [System] + [Man Disguising as Women] + [Double Cleansing] + [Past and Present Life]
"You really want me to sleep with you!? Is this right!? I'm just a traditional time traveler!"
Emperor Lu Ziyuan had a cold face: "I will not have a son under my knees, let alone sleep with a woman."
Xie Junan just breathed a sigh of relief when he turned around and was pinned down in the side hall by the emperor and stayed there until the end of time.
What's even more outrageous is that his sister is fighting in the field, and he is pretending to be a concubine, and both of them are stepping on the red line of bullying!
The crime of deceiving the emperor?
Or two? !
Xie Junan: Your Majesty, don't be confused! If you continue to confuse me, I will lose my head!
Lu Ziyuan: I won't do it if I don't allow it.
Jingcheng: It's over, the sky is about to change!
Reader comments
It seems that I am the first reviewer of this book. [Note] Give me a five-star to encourage you.
Coordinates: Chapter 46
This is a novel that I think the overall plot rhythm is not sluggish. The perspective is the perspective of the protagonist and the subject. When I read it at the beginning, I felt it was a bit forced. Later, after the encounter after amnesia, it is a normal love relationship. The plot may be a bit off-kilter, but I think I am well-read, and I can make up for the awkward parts of the plot. I hope it will be popular🎉
At present, I think there are some minor flaws and possible lightning points:
1. In the early stage, Lu (attack) will use Xie (receiver) as a substitute. He is bent without knowing it, and the emotional changes when getting along are a bit insufficient. As a result, when watching, it is easy to feel that Lu completely treats Xie as a substitute.
2. Xie's motivation for deciding to leave the monastic life is a bit abrupt. Personally, I think there could be more foreshadowing.
3. The plot of two people meeting after amnesia is a typical man picked up on the roadside, but I really can't think of a better way. Maybe it can be geographically reasonable to write that Abbot Xie heard about the people at the border and took the initiative to go to the front line, and rescued the amnesiac Lu in the process of saving the people.
Great point:
(Quietly | ω・`) There are additional sweet moments between the two of you on the big page 🧣 (*/∇\*)
It's very beautiful, it's my favorite style₍˄·͈༝·͈˄₎◞ ̑̑
So sweet and beautiful
Beautiful and worth watching. ˚*̥(∗*⁰͈꒨⁰͈)*̥Wow~ They are so sweet between each other
It seems that I am the first reviewer of this book. [Note] Give me a five-star to encourage you. Coordinates: Chapter 46 This is a novel that I think the overall plot rhythm is not sluggish. The perspective is the perspective of the protagonist and the subject. When I read it at the beginning, I felt it was a bit forced. Later, after the encounter after amnesia, it is a normal love relationship. The plot may be a bit off-kilter, but I think I am well-read, and I can make up for the awkward parts of the plot. I hope it will be popular🎉 At present, I think there are some minor flaws and possible lightning points: 1. In the early stage, Lu (attack) will use Xie (receiver) as a substitute. He is bent without knowing it, and the emotional changes when getting along are a bit insufficient. As a result, when watching, it is easy to feel that Lu completely treats Xie as a substitute. 2. Xie's motivation for deciding to leave the monastic life is a bit abrupt. Personally, I think there could be more foreshadowing. 3. The plot of two people meeting after amnesia is a typical man picked up on the roadside, but I really can't think of a better way. Maybe it can be geographically reasonable to write that Abbot Xie heard about the people at the border and took the initiative to go to the front line, and rescued the amnesiac Lu in the process of saving the people. Great point: (Quietly | ω・`) There are additional sweet moments between the two of you on the big page 🧣 (*/∇\*)
It's very beautiful, it's my favorite style₍˄·͈༝·͈˄₎◞ ̑̑
So sweet and beautiful
Beautiful and worth watching. ˚*̥(∗*⁰͈꒨⁰͈)*̥Wow~ They are so sweet between each other