Juezuzero: Please Be Immortal? the Golden Descendant I Invited!

It's okay, but some places are quite strange. For example, I remember that the relationship between Anko and Anko was pretty good casually in the game, and the first time I met Yuzu... Maybe I read it too quickly [something] and felt that there was no reason for conflict. It was a bit too deliberate.

The quality of this book is very good. It is already very good in Tomato. It is worth reading [laughs] There is nothing serious about it [Love] As for whether you can persist in reading it, it depends on each person [Love] [Like]

Not bad. Is there a female protagonist?

This book is really great, whether it's characterization or other aspects, I recommend writing a long one

It's ok, there are no poisonous spots at the moment

Nice looking, quite interesting

It's not bad so far, keep going.

I haven't read it for many days, and I have saved a lot of chapters. To be honest, I don't feel comfortable watching it. I want to watch the battle! Fighting! Fighting! Fighting is fun!

The author is very thoughtful and the subject matter is also very novel. I look forward to future updates [Love][Love]

It's good-looking, nothing bad. It would be better to update a few more chapters a day. Keep working hard and don't stop updating. [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Use more to give the protagonist some strength.

It looks good initially, keep going

It looks okay, pretty smooth. It's just too much preaching and exclamation.

Very good, good luck to the author

I'm curious, who are the heroines? Is there any Xi Lian?

It's not bad. It's quite interesting to watch when you're tired after working all day.

The book is not bad, but the emotional line is too fast. Senior Sister Xiaoguang has feelings for Elder Lu, but Nagisa is also too fast. We haven't met her a few times in total, and we have a crush on her immediately.

Very creative and not boring to watch

It is a very suitable book that combines Juegu Zero and Bengtie. Among so many Jueju Zero books, this book is the most comfortable one for me. Good cheers, author.

I hope there is no heroine [eating melon]

Beautiful, very emotional

Don't die violently again! ﹨[Almost crying]/

Does the heroine have golden descent?

Come on! Very nice

The protagonist's soul power will gradually strengthen, why not learn some warlocks with soul attack power? After all, you must at least have the ability to protect yourself first

In fact, there are still many points in the plot of Yunkuishan that need to be explained. This book may be backstabbed in the early stages [face covering]

Well, that's what the brothers said, they are very cool, even more cool than Sister Yu's sweaty feet.

The plot structure is very comfortable, and the characters' emotions are delicate and reasonable. Like it very much

The subject matter is novel, the writing is fluent, and the content is rich. It is definitely a masterpiece among all the zero-derivative fan novels in Tomato.

It looks good, I love it, I like it! I hope the author will continue to work hard