Mortals Cultivating Immortality: I Can Travel Through the Heavens and Worlds

It looks good, I love watching it, and it integrates smoothly with the plot of Zhutian, especially the decisive killing, clear goals, and no sloppiness. So far, there is no verbose text. I really recommend it with five stars [like][like][like]

I was so excited to read this book. The plot is compact and the characters are vivid. It definitely has the potential to be a hit.

After reading Chapter 42, I feel it is very good and worthy of encouragement. The story is not cliché, traveling through the Republic of China to collect resources, and plotting with Wu Xin and Yue Qi Luo to kill the Taotie, the Japs and the Shikigami. The plot is smooth and there is no cumbersome operation such as random jumps in the storyboards or random intrusion of memories, which makes people have a headache. If the tension is enough, marry Chen Qiaoqian, kill the old devil Han in the cub stage, and seize the little green bottle.

The interaction between the protagonist and his partners is a highlight of the plot, with full tacit understanding

With his rich experience and knowledge, he carefully writes heart-stirring stories and portrays the pig's feet as brave and resourceful! Incredibly beautiful!

Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡Super beautiful

Looks good! Super pretty!

Very well written and worth reading

I feel very satisfied

That's so evil, I stabbed Nangong Wan's paper man

The new books are quite good, I'll add a bookshelf and wait for the follow-up.

The rhythm is fast and slow, with both thunderous and steady flow.

Excellent scene management ability, able to handle scenes no matter how big or small.

The characters are perfectly created and supported.

The core of the story is positive. Always give people hope in difficult situations

In fact, the writing is not bad, there are some poisonous points, but there are also excellent parts, and it has a sense of substitution. At least the writing style is not entry-level.

The writing is good and the plot is great! The storyline is fantastic!