Mingchao: Wanjie Mall, the Starting Increase Is 20!

The routine is very good, and the emotional lines are also very natural. The combat is okay, but too long. The combat power is too suppressed. When fighting elite monsters and above, it's always a 50-50 split, and I can't wait for seconds. The protagonist's level is maxed out, all legends +12 Dragon Fighting Sets; Taichu Sword. As a branch line, clearing out the cannon fodder of the residual stars will take a long time. When it comes to scars, time is of the essence, so if you don't open it directly, the three will be crushed directly. But together with the scars, one for you and one for me, from low-level to high-level skills, one by one. There is no inverted feeling, just water. The branch plot is too long, and I have to follow the original plot step by step. Obviously the daily writing is very good, but some branches can be abbreviated or omitted. Daily interactions and emotional development can be supplemented. There are currently no ideas to supplement the shortcomings of the protagonist. For example, it can't fly, has no sense of perception at all (it's so strong that the mobs can't detect it in advance), and can't move long distances quickly. The protagonist has no intention of preparing in advance to deal with the villain. Knowing that the opponent was a scar, he did not prepare any space-focused skills or props in advance. As a result, Canxing will keep running. Even if we have to follow the plot, we can't let them run away so easily, right? I quite like this book, but the branch plot is too long; it's obviously super strong, but most of the time I can't stop it, but everything else is fine.

It is a rare Mingchao fanfic. It is a relatively good-looking novel. It has no novel features and is a bit ordinary, but the book is still readable. In addition, there is no beauty, and the plot of the story is missing. It is a bit different. It depends on the book friends. Different opinions and wisdom.

I never expected that there is also a dnf + Mingchao or a rare Devil May Cry career panel. Overall it is good. There is no poisonous point at the moment. The protagonist should have replaced the original drifter and become the savior. It is just that the battle takes up a lot of space. It would be better if there is more life later.

Okay. Does the author have an outline? If you say it hard, it usually doesn't match the subject matter. Also, some of the protagonist's behaviors feel like they are just made up and the plot doesn't have much logic. If it weren't for the fact that the protagonist had trouble, he would be almost like a clown [laughing awkwardly]

As someone who has never played DNF, I think this pressure control is very good. It has that cool feeling, but it is not as awesome as in DNF. At least you can still play, right? -_-||But the feelings brought about by the perspectives of ordinary people and players are also different. Whether it is correct or not, just follow your own heart.

Author, where is my Ah Piao?

The writing is okay, but it seems to have nothing to do with Wanjie Mall. Devil May Cry content is extremely high.

The author writes very nicely!

Really good

I can only say that I was delayed by the name.

It's pretty good so far. Is there a female protagonist?

It's a bit less, not enough to eat

@Sulianya Before I knew it, there were more than 100 chapters. It's been so long and I can read it. Keep up the good work, you write very well [laughs]

Personally I think it's well written, keep up the good work [Like]

It's good to watch, the plot connects well, and there's no short-circuiting

It looks good and I feel comfortable watching it.

Okay, more fun

Okay, pretty good

Not bad, it's good-looking. I like it.

Why don't you get the Yama Sword to play with?

Except for watching Gone with the Wind for a long time, everything else was fine [smile]

It's a very good book, why has no one read it?

At present, it looks very nice and smooth [Adoration] [Blow kiss]

It's really good-looking, but I don't know if there's a female protagonist.