From the Start, I Draw a Red Talent and Become Invincible!

In the introduction, he said that he was the only extraordinary person, but later on, his spiritual energy was revived.

A very classic protagonist in the martial arts era, love, hate and hatred

You write about Wanjie, and you also have to integrate the simulated world into modern times [vomit]

I read other book reviews, and some of them are indeed correct. Any inconsistencies between the introduction and the content will be deleted immediately. Secondly, the first and second simulations are very interesting. You can write in this style.

It's a self-love story again. The protagonist hides away in daily life and simulates suffering. It's a patriotic story about China's archaeological enjoyment. If you are really patriotic, you should learn from the best male gun in the Japanese server. Are you feeding rocks in the novel?

It would be great to follow the first simulation and write a fast pace and then write the reality again. The second simulation is so long.

If the author really wants to write the second one, he can just write a novel based on the second incident.

The biggest poisonous point of this kind of simulator novel is that it completely accepts all the memories in the simulation. Simulate memory jumble a few more times. It's hard to tell whether the remaining consciousness is the protagonist or not. This is simply the biggest poisonous point.

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, working hard unyieldingly, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, steel being refined a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night. When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty years old, the memory of the bookworm has a place for you. Even in the long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

It's okay, but the second world is a bit too long, and the writing is still the best in Tomato, and you can only equip one talent at a time. It's not like a simulator, but more like a reincarnation. The main world can actually be written less. There is no need to write too detailed about the simulation. When reading simulation articles, everyone just sees a fast pace. It is too slow, resulting in many negative comments in the comment area. I hope it can be improved in the future. I hope the author can see