Who Would Turn It over to the World of Immortality After Being Reborn?

It's very good-looking. It's a classic way of leaving the heroine alone to return to reality, a classic way of seriously injuring the heroine, then a classic way of not killing the murderer and letting him run away and keeping an eye on the protagonist secretly, and finally a classic way of saving the heroine. This is the content of the first dozens of chapters, recommended! ! ! So pretty! ! ! After reading the following, the heroine came to life within a few chapters. The author still listened to the advice and continued to eat. It's okay so far.

The overall writing style is more realistic, without exaggerated golden fingers. After the protagonist is reborn, he only has the memories of his previous life and a ring. He has to practice step by step on his own, and to obtain resources, he also needs to explore and even take risks on his own. This down-to-earth way of cultivating immortality, coupled with the main line of official revenge, makes the story both refreshing and tense. It makes you want to follow up.

This is a highly complete story about rebirth and immortality. It has a novel setting, a logical plot, and three-dimensional characters. From the layout after rebirth, to the preliminary exploration of the world of immortality, to using the resources of the world of immortality to improve reality, every step of the protagonist's operation has a clear goal, and there is no aimless wandering. The foreshadowing in the article is carefully laid out, such as the sealed ring space, the mysterious animal skin map, and the tampered techniques, all of which make readers full of expectations for the subsequent plot. The disadvantage is that the integration of the secular line and the line of cultivating immortality is not close enough at this stage, and there is little intersection between the two. In the future, the linkage between the two lines can be strengthened, so that conspiracy and cultivation can influence each other.

The story is quite interesting, and the writing is also good. It doesn't have the AI smell of tomatoes everywhere. It must have been written by the author himself [face covering] There is a small problem at the moment. The important supporting characters in the article are all women. The male protagonist has a childhood sweetheart, and there are always female friends popping up around him. This does not mean that the male protagonist cannot have female friends, but every time an important supporting character appears, they are all female, and there is no important male supporting role. After reading the latest chapter, I feel that two girls are already having a little ambiguity with the male protagonist. I was afraid that the male protagonist would start a harem later [face covering], so I backed away first.

When faced with injustice, never change your lifelong loyalty to your family and country; Start over and continue the ambition of your previous life. Good book, online IQ, exciting! [Praise]

The author has quite good control over the cool points. After the protagonist is reborn, he quickly draws Qi into his body, kills the Wang brothers, and unlocks the ring storage function. Every plot can bring a real sense of growth. There is no excessive golden finger blessing, and the improvement in strength is logical. Especially in the scene of counter-killing the Wang brothers, the calm and neat operation highlights the transformation of the protagonist. However, the description of the battle is a little simple and the visual sense can be strengthened.

After rebirth, the plot progresses relatively smoothly. From finding the ring to opening the path to the world of immortality, the logical chain is clear and there are no too abrupt turns. The combination of the identity of a high school student and the elements of immortality is not inconsistent.

A good article, the first life, handed over to another world and was shot. In the second life, I first went to explore a different world with my girlfriend, and found that it would save time and worry to turn it in, and then I was shot again. In the third life, I will continue to hand it over in another way and continue to be shot. The 4567890th was also turned in and shot. In the eleventh life, I found that I was a little resentful. I brainwashed myself that it was the first life where I was turned in and shot. Now I am in the twelfth life. I swear that after handing in this time, I will definitely avoid being shot.

The plot is compact, the setting is novel, and the writing is good. It's just the best! Remember to eat or not...

The protagonist knows that self-preservation is the right way to go. This sober setting, I think, is a few steps ahead of other novels and must be praised.

At present, the potential of this story is acceptable. The three clues of exploration of the world of immortality, real crisis, and revenge line run in parallel. However, the pace is slow, and the conflict needs to be escalated in the future to keep readers fresh.

My skills are still shallow, and my poison resistance is not strong. The first chapter is interesting. In the second chapter, I gave the key to my girlfriend with a pig's trotter, and I died unjustly in my previous life.

Even if you love to kill your enemy's daughter, there is no need to give your space to her. The more you love her, the more you should not let her participate in the early stage.

The interaction between the protagonist and Qi Qingyue is quite interesting. The setting of childhood sweethearts adds warmth to the story and does not make the revenge and immortality lines seem too cold. The ring is both a time travel key and a storage space setting. It is functional and unobtrusive, and it also leaves good foreshadowing for the subsequent seal. Not bad. Does everyone have different preferences? I don't have many requirements for reading.

I finished reading it and am still waiting for the update. I think it was well written. I finished reading this rebirth novel in one go, it was so satisfying! The heroine's IQ is top-notch, her emotional line is also delicate and touching, and the hero's silent protection is heart-wrenching. The writing is smooth, the rhythm is exciting, you can't stop! Highly recommended!

What a novel setting. Let me comment first and support the author. Continue.

You can know what the author is by looking at this screenshot [Learn] Foreign countries: Protest, you must hand over the extraordinary system! Author: OK Foreigner: Are you really friends with me? That's so "unity"

It's quite innocent, in line with the cognition of high school students.

If you don't have enough writing skills, please don't touch things like Machiavellian politics, dark politics, okay? The protagonist is not as careful as I am in playing games

Emmm, so far it's okay, the logic is clear, I hope there will be more interesting things to watch later, and it won't be too boring.

This subject is very new, it's the first time I've seen it! Hand in the world of cultivating immortals + national backstab, the plot is compact! Breaking out of the conventional cool writing routine, it looks great!

Modern cultivation of immortality + backstab reversal, I like this setting, it's going to be popular at first glance

It's not bad so far, but don't talk about it. Zhang Sandao: Li Sidao: The protagonist said: The heroine said: Just remove these and just talk directly. Listening to the book makes me have a headache. I will say it one by one after a while.

The last second was full of dangers. Chapter 26, "It's safe here, I'll go back to Earth by myself", is very interesting. I suggest everyone take a look at it [shy][shy][shy]

To be honest, this is the second time I have seen a popular novel. The last time it was in the book "Bian, Du Dian, Dian Dian is good". The structure is clear and the impact it brings to me is no less than that of the top list. I wish the author can reach the top as soon as possible.

Only then did I realize that it was a female author. First of all, I admired her for daring to write this kind of article. However, she was a girl after all, and she was not brave enough to completely go against the authorities. After all, everything had changed in the world of spiritual recovery, so there was no need to be afraid of the authorities. This world is all about doing whatever you want, no matter who the other person is, if you dare to mess with me, I will fuck you!

It's quite enjoyable to watch, the protagonist's golden finger is just right~

The King of Rebirth Is the Love Brain #The King of Rebirth Or Waste # is a very interesting novel. I have tried it myself. I really recommend it. Please come back and thank me after reading it.

Well, how should I put it? Judging from the title of this book, it is obvious that it is based on the popularity of the book "Send it to the World of Immortal Cultivators to Make Me Ascend". However, I haven't read that book yet, but the name of this book is a bit more realistic. Overall, it is actually a newbie's book, but it needs to be improved. It is worth reading.

I really didn't expect it to be so thick. It has a lot of fur and looks very warm. The quality is also super good. Will come again next time if necessary. You can never wake someone who is pretending to sleep, but the smell of hot pot can.