Lonely Traveler: from Wrecker to Master of Orbits in the Sky

Well, updates are currently discontinued, and I will also talk about the problem I think, number 1. Using the first person perspective, this method, well, is difficult to do particularly well. Secondly, the plot is too fast and dense, which ultimately leads to few people being able to accept such a large amount of dense information. There are not enough transitional daily chapters. Although the character portrayal is quite good, the pace is fast. I have seen more than 80 chapters so far, so the main problem that needs to be solved is that the daily chapters and world view descriptions are too vague, and the introduction of each scene is not particularly sufficient. Compared with a big boss, Doomsday Gods Online is also super fast-paced and refreshing. He gives you the feeling that the information he has given you so far is enough, and he will not put too much burden on you. Later, you will think that it is related to here.

Although it is in the first person, the author's writing style makes up for this aspect very well, and overall it is very good! The author's imagination is very big, and the settings are quite good. It would be better if the introduction was a little more detailed!

I just read this book. Although the shell is science fiction, it focuses on Eastern immortals. The last few chapters have turned to the ghost city. It is a bit light novel style. The author is quite thoughtful. However, the author may want to integrate multiple elements. Without certain writing power and control, it is easy to write. I look forward to the author's follow-up plot development. For the time being, the logic seems clear. The protagonist and supporting characters have online IQs. Five-star praise.

The most surprising thing about this novel is that it turns one of the most humble professions into the starting point of saving the world. Tang Yunchuan, a track cleaner at Wuya Xinghai - to put it bluntly, he cleans up garbage for star track trains. The bottom of the bottom is so small that even its name looks like a passerby. But the author just chose him. This setting itself has a contrasting romance: the person who sweeps the garbage becomes the person in charge of the track. The author combines the "Zhutian flow" and the "behind-the-scenes organization flow" to make each world an independent puzzle and every obstacle clearance a secret battle. And the gathering and dispersing of those law fragments, the strengthening of the star track train, and the fierce battle with the Holy Lord, all progressed layer by layer, burying the cool points deep and densely.

The background of this book is grand and the settings are complete, but it is in the first person. Most of the settings that appear in the game require brainstorming. Although I do not recommend that a large number of settings appear at once, it is the first time I have seen that no settings appear at all. The writing is average. The five-star rating is not because of how beautiful it is, but as an encouragement to the new book.

The plot is cleverly arranged and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional.

It's very interesting to read, well written, and has deep characterization. I highly recommend it.

I haven't seen such a good-looking novel in a long time. The plot is very good and I feel so immersed in it!

A very good novel, with a strong sense of immersion😊The plot is great!

The preparation was very good in the early stage, and it was very well done later on.

There are foreshadowings everywhere, so I couldn't help but read on.

It's so well written, I really like this kind of big writing style

The plot and writing are also very good. [Like][Like][Like]

Cleaning up the remains of mythical beasts while mediating the magic war is so exciting!

The mythical version of the tool man awakens, the order-taking system is in hand, and I have all the heavens.

It's really well written, I love it.

It's so beautiful, this is what I want to see

It's very interesting. The main character is quite likable. Not bad.

It's great, it's my favorite work haha

This book is well written and depicts a new world

The more you get to the back, the more exciting it becomes. It's quite beautiful.

This book is very delicately written and very interesting to read.

I like the book very much, it makes me want to keep chasing it, and I will be immersed in it after reading it.

I was hooked from the beginning, it's very beautifully written.

It's very beautiful, the writing is superb, and you won't lose money if you invest in it. If you haven't read it, you must buy it.

Wrecker + mediator + behind-the-scenes boss, this setting is super cool

The plot has twists and turns, it's so interesting.

The description is quite good, interesting and beautiful^ω^

It gets more exciting as you go to the end, and I'm really looking forward to the subsequent plot development.

It's rare to find a good book on Tomato that I can read.