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It is true that Li Wen has the sense of taboo and the essence of it. The aunt is portrayed so well. It seems that Li Wen is pursuing Mu's unconditional preference and tolerance. While taking into account this, aunt also has the enthusiasm and unrestrainedness of a big sister, never being pretentious, and even has the innocence and shyness of a little girl. She is simply the perfect lover. My aunt said she had been to that couple's slope before? I hope it's not Lei, I really just want to watch sweet love! The male protagonist is also quite likable. He is not the kind of bulldozer who falls in love with everyone he meets. He is quite bottom-line, but he is too real and fits the characteristics of a young and ignorant college student. He is always rough. Brother, the author, will there be a career line for the male protagonist in the future? I hope he can become a mature and stable real man, otherwise he is still not worthy of his aunt. Secondly, there are many plots where the male protagonist is jealous, which made me feel a thorn in my heart when I saw it. In any case, thank you to the author for his contribution, this is a good work It's time for the male protagonist to step up [Sending Hearts]

The pleasure of poking someone's finger is worthy of being the moderator's overseas student [Admiration]

It's super, super good-looking. It perfectly fulfills my fantasies about my older girlfriend. There's no overly long ambiguity. The heroes' fates have been tied together since they were young. I love it so much! I believe you can update faster [blowing kiss]

The writing is really good. I don't know if you like reading some Internet articles that have been completed for 7 or 8 years. There is really no need to describe the feeling of sadness. "Shuangwen" was originally a derogatory term, but now it has become a hard-to-find complimentary term in Tomato. It has gone through many changes. If a fluent article is about plot and writing style. An article with charm depends on whether it can be written into people's hearts. Characters are like prisms, and the author shines a beam of light into it, scattering different aspects of a character, but the essence remains the same. The first person is really rare in online novels. Logically speaking, the sense of substitution in the first person should be stronger than that in the third person, but this time I felt some distance. I don't know if the heroine is too beautiful, the plot is too heart-warming, or something else. But I think this is an article worth reading with your heart. Author, I just read this far and you give me such a high evaluation. You can't slap me in the face. Come on.

How awesome, with encouragement, my auntie is the best. By the way, pure love must not engage in the act of coming out of the closet.

Five stars for waiting and watching, good luck to the author, the writing is good, and the psychological activities are also written very well. If you want to make the male protagonist more mature, my comment is in the comment on the paragraph in the last chapter of today that you asked about the book to study. My humble opinion. Never write the male protagonist as someone who can only stress Aunt Xuan and who can easily fall into heat. The first part is fine. Although I got into an ugly show of jealousy and even got into a quarrel and got drunk, it was all resolved. Try not to write the following part. The kind of person who got into a big fight out of jealousy and drank unconsciously, like a junior high school student. The male protagonist should act more mature in this situation. You can drink or be sad when you are in a bad mood, but you should exercise some restraint. If you want to be mature, then you also wrote that before, after a quarrel, the heroine admitted her fault and tried to coax her. In turn, did the hero grow up and the heroine feel a little surprised? Or if you really feel that you are right and don't want to admit your mistake, then if you want to drink after leaving home, find a restaurant, order two dishes and a bottle of wine, and send her a message telling her what you were doing there. When you go back later, you can write about the male protagonist's psychological activities and persuade yourself to go back and admit your mistake. When the hostess comes over, we eat together. If she doesn't come, we buy two more meals and take them back to her, and solve the problem while eating. After all, there are many men and women quarreling now, and the woman will say I want to go back to my parents' house, right? Don't play missing for no reason

(The following is my personal opinion. You are right if you criticize me.) The setting has met all my expectations. The writing is pretty good, and the emotional drama is also well done. A little bit of a knife is more in line with the setting of this book. When it should be sweet, it should be sweet and when it should be sharp, it is very good to write about Su Yule's growth process. The bad taste from time to time is the best part of this book. The finishing touch is that the relationship between Aunt Xuan and Su Yule, which is set off by a little Shura field, is more vivid. The foreshadowing is also recycled relatively smoothly. There is no abrupt emotional development. It makes people look very comfortable. The foreshadowing is very good. The unique setting is refreshing. It is a good book worth reading (if you are paying 4000+) The only flaw is that the scope of the male protagonist's jealousy is too wide. Of course, this just doesn't feel good to me. Maybe it's this setting that makes me feel that this kind of emotion is in line with my xp.

The part about loving people is like growing flowers is invincible. It is really well written. The rating is too low. Why is it only nine points? I think it should be nine point five. The description of my heart is also very delicate. The characters are three-dimensional and deep, and the story is emotional and warm. I was really healed. , But I may not often read single female protagonists. I always want to read Shen Man, An Ran, and Song Qing. I have read 300 chapters and I really think it is good. I usually don't comment. I really can't help it. I can just go in without thinking. Finally, the author will update it quickly! !

The writing is so good, especially the characters' inner struggles and contradictions between human nature and love are intertwined very well. It seems very real and makes people feel deeply involved. Halfway through the book, I don't suddenly feel that the plot description is too novelistic, which makes it a drama. The writing is very good and it is smooth and comfortable to read (I am not trying to be a culprit, I really feel that this book is so good [laughs])

I have read relatively few books with the male protagonist in the first person, and the author has good control over psychological description. The writing is relatively smooth, and the length of the male protagonist on campus is more appropriately controlled. In the previous part, the part where the male protagonist accidentally gets jealous several times feels a little flawed. I can't explain it clearly. I feel that the trust between the male and female protagonists is a bit weak in that part, but the author may have dealt with it this way. A crisis of trust? But the faults do not hide the faults! I also read the novel after reading the book reviews. I read it at 6pm yesterday, and now I have finished it at 12pm. I read it for several hours and it was very enjoyable! ! ! Come on, author! You will become strong! !

It's awesome, a bit like Taste of Chongqing. It has a strong sense of first-person substitution, the rendering of feelings and emotions is very delicate, and the life is also very detailed. It made my heart itch when I read it. The last time I read it was a novel about falling in love with my sister. What's the name? My sister is very brotherly and controlling. It made me smile when I read it.

It's so good. The plot is no different from the Li Wen movies I watched, even better. I like to watch this kind of movies with a lot of psychological activities and personal descriptions. It's worthy of the moderator's training. It's so cool. The more I watch, the more exciting and comfortable I become. The writing is still the same.

The psychological portrayal of the characters is very good, and the sense of immersion is really strong. If you like this kind of brother-sister relationship with an age difference, you must not miss it! Although it is 1V1, I hope Shen Man can win together [Shy] We are all good friends, and living a good life together is more important than anything else [Smile]

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was heard and the tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. It's so beautiful🥺 Men are menstruating when they see it 🙄 Women are going crazy when they see it 💪 This is the nemesis of depression 😎 It's the alarm clock for vegetative people 😭 It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😱 So handsome 😘 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😊 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😮 It makes me realize God It does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. It's the nemesis of depression😋. It's an alarm clock for vegetative people.😨It's so cute that tears flow out of the corners of my mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It sounds so good. God is my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful.

This is one of the rare works where I can empathize with and willingly take on two perspectives at the same time. I prefer to take Su Huaixuan's perspective - I prefer to regard her as a sister. I really like her mature yet agile temperament, gentle and measured, lively and unsophisticated. But I can always see my own reflection in Su Yule, and I completely understand his turbulent obsession with Aunt Xuan and his fear of her being snatched away by others. In fact, at the end of the day, I think Su Yule is not just the boy in the story, he is pointing to every child who in adolescence clings to the little warmth he has and regards it as the whole world. We have all been like him, taking the light that catches us in life as the destination of everything. His worry about gains and losses, his concern about details that he dared not express openly, and his almost paranoid possessiveness were never exceptional cases. That is the true thought that every child who is sensitive and lacks love and understands the heartbeat for the first time in ignorance has experienced. We may not have had his life experiences, but we all understand the certainty and uneasiness of "there is only one person in the world." His struggles are just the unspoken secrets and obsessions of our adolescence, completely spread out on paper.

No need to say more, full marks [laughs] To be honest, I have been reading novels for so many years, and this is the first time I have come across this type of novel (I mainly read fairy tales). For this type of novel, it is really a big girl sitting in a sedan chair - the first time. The author's writing style is quite good👌 You can rest assured that the description of these two people who depend on each other is quite good. The author also listened to the advice, and after reading more than 300 chapters, there are basically no bad points, but there are some parts that gave me a stomachache [heavy punch] I hope the author will continue his efforts and give Lele and Aunt Xuan a happy ending and a happy ending [shy]

The emotions are delicate, the sense of substitution is strong, and the subject matter is also very novel. The chapter of "loving people is like raising flowers" inspired me a lot. It is very suitable for young people and saves the book shortage. The author is a super fan [blowing kiss]. Chapter 13 [shy] [shy] was a hit a few days ago. The content is very well-paced and not sloppy. The reading experience is unique. It is suitable for the emotional inspiration of the Kochi people. Support! [Sending Hearts]

The subject matter is interesting and the plot is interesting enough. It can be sweet, bitter or sour. It's a great article. For those who like Nian, I think this theme is really interesting. I feel like there are many places that could be explored in depth to expand the plot. If I were to write it out, I would probably be able to write a large article with over a thousand chapters. The people who are rating are still here, so I'll hurry up and increase the ratings [laughs] Let's strengthen the male protagonist. He will slowly grow up later, but what kind of things are he encountering now? A school bully comes out to bully him. Can you strengthen the male protagonist's combat power or use relationships to deal with those people? I just want to watch some romance where you pull me apart, and I don't want to watch a plot where you get beaten up by being a coward. Can the score be raised a little? How can this plot and setting only be worth a few points? Really awesome

It's already 4 episodes now. It's very emotional. Because it's in the first person, I can write a few self-narratives. I think readers should be very curious about the heroine's perspective.

The more you read this book, the more interesting it becomes. The text is delicate and restrained but full of emotions, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the story is plain but has moving power. The plot has a comfortable rhythm and the ending has a long aftertaste. After reading it, I feel full of warmth and feelings. It is worth reading again and again. The writing style is smooth and natural, the narrative rhythm is just right, the characters are full and real, and there is no deliberate sensationalism but it touches people's hearts everywhere. The story is profound and full of details. It will make people think about it for a long time after reading it. It is an excellent book that can be calmed down and read carefully.

The plot is compact and not procrastinating, the characters are three-dimensional and vivid, the emotions are delicate and real, and the foreshadowing is cleverly laid out. The more you read, the more you get into it. The rhythm is relaxed and relaxed, and the ending has a long aftertaste. It will take you a long time to calm down after watching it. It is worth pondering over and over again. Hurry up and update the author

It's very beautiful. The opening is really concise, focusing on daily life. It's very sweet. It's really too sweet. It's a little sadistic. The male protagonist also grows up slowly. The female protagonist really pays too much for the male protagonist. It's like a mother raising her son. From childhood to 18 years old, it's really great. I like the setting, the emotional line is very good, the progress is very fast, I like it very much, the two are often jealous of each other, the supporting characters are also good, Shen Man and Aunt Shen, the characters are also good, my mother is a strong woman, every supporting character is alive, the whole story is really perfect, I like it very much

It's really, really good-looking. The emotional pull between the two and the estrangement caused by the complicated relationship are very exciting. It's so cool. The pull and ambiguity, the woman showing weakness and the man showing weakness are so damn cool. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. I can very well substitute for the male protagonist in the early stage. Without Aunt Xuan, there is nothing. I am a person who lacks love. Reading novels makes me substitute myself as if I can be loved, so whenever I see the sentence "I thought you didn't want me anymore", my heart will always throb. It's a really good book. I hope the author can write more. It's not enough [crying][crying][crying]

I have been following this book intermittently for a long time. From the beginning to now, I have watched it get closer to the end. From the conflict between Aunt Xuan and Su Yule to the gradual coming together, the story ends very happily. I can only say that it is over. Thank you to the author for allowing us to witness the story between them. Although the book is almost finished, I think their story is still continuing.

🌟This novel really stood out to me✨, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the characters are three-dimensional and flesh-and-blood👏. Every chapter is like watching a movie🎬, with a strong sense of immersion, and I can't stop reading to the climax🔥. The author's writing style is smooth and natural, and the details are delicate and moving💖. It is fully worthy of five-star recommendation! Very good-looking, okay, I can't stop [punch out][punch out][punch out]

This book is super, super good-looking. The plot is very attractive, with ups and downs. It is eye-catching. Once you read it, you can't stop. The characters are very three-dimensional. They are not just paper figures, they are flesh and blood. The whole thing is very complete, the logic is online, and the emotions are very touching. Must come and see 👀

It's not bad. It's a pretty standard heroine.

Thanks to this book for accompanying me in my boring study life. When I saw the ending, I felt sad and happy at the same time. Sad because such a beautiful book has ended, but happy because Aunt Xuan and Lele are really together after experiencing so many things. I sincerely hope that they can run the flower shop well and have a child. Finally, I wish all readers will eventually get married and find the one they love [Like]

It's really good, but it depends on your personal point of view. Some people may think it's a bit... Ruined. However, the plot is indeed a bit curious, and the author quickly gave me an update. It's not enough at all😠 Author, please update quickly, please, it's not enough, please [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

This is one of the good books I found on Rotten Tomatoes. I am also an old bookworm. The first one made me feel that the emotions are well portrayed. I really don't want to be reborn. This is the second one. It starts with Aunt Xuan's escape and then slowly accepts the knife, the mouth, the heart, and the growth of Lele. I think it is very well written. The author will continue to work hard to present better works (this is my first review on Tomato)