Stealing Pen: the Witch Is Breathtaking

It's nice to watch, but there isn't much about the witch character. It feels like the heroine has been dealing with things in an ordinary way, which makes people who are looking for this character a little disappointed.

The teacher's writing is still very good🎉🎉🎉The writing style is mature and the writing is smooth🥰Looking forward to the follow-up development! What will it be like when Lian Na meets the King of Hell in the snowy mountains (✧◡✧) What happens after Pema and Xiaoguan, how Pema escapes the fate of sacrifice, what happens after Pema and Lian Na, how Zhang Fulin solves the Zhang family's harm to his wife and children, what Lian Na will do after the Zhang family discovers Lian Na, the sparks between Lian Na and other characters... Super invincible and looking forward to the follow-up! ! Teacher, you must not rest! I believe you must have saved some manuscripts! Looking forward to the follow-up! ! !

I really like this tone, and the character design is also very interesting. It was a very popular setting before, the ageless witch x adopted son, but this adopted son also has a long lifespan, especially since his bloodline is still very pure, hahahaha, so cool! The only flaw is that I think the heroine's sense of presence is a little weaker. Most of the descriptions are based on the perspective of the younger brother, which shows that the heroine's presence is not very strong. Furthermore, it is more everyday and does not highlight the witch setting. It would be better to enhance the heroine's presence and flesh out the character's witch setting! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, highly recommended! The other one is also pretty good! The characters are not OOC, they fit the original work, they are logical, and they are not full of bugs or mindless, so you can watch it with your brains in mind. The pain is that this book is much slower [crying][crying][crying]

One of my favorite tomb robbing fanfics, the little brother is reborn and meets the heroine Lina, a variable, and everything is different. Baima and Zhang Fulin are all fine, as are everyone in the Southern Archives. Haike Haixing and the Zhang family have also been protected and met the black blind man in their youth... The most important thing is that because of Lina's status as a British noble, the younger brother has also become the adopted son of a duke, and has lived a stable and prosperous life. He does not have to be the last patriarch of the Zhang family and shoulder the heavy responsibilities like in his previous life.

From another book in Dada, Lian Na's arrival brought changes. Xiao Guan was reborn as a baby and grew up, with his own home, caring parents and godmother. His background is kind-hearted, and when he is able, he will consider involving other members of the Zhang family and shoulder the responsibilities of the Zhang family. How can I put it, he is indeed a god on earth, but selfishly I want him to live a happy life without caring about anything!

The Ageless Witch and her adopted sons? ? Quite interesting

So pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I just discovered that I'm following both of the teacher's books, come on!

I think the writing is quite good and I like it very much.