Help, the Magical Girl I Raised Has Turned Black.

Very interesting to write. A pretty good book. It feels like the protagonist is the Emperor sitting on the golden toilet, the S+-class magical girl is the original, and the three witches are the traitorous Horus. Centaur, golden ring, thirty years, first return son Thinking of Huangquan, thoughts are flowing like a fountain!👊😭👊 Read the Imperial Sword! Never forget it!🗡😭🗡 Royal Dutch Palm! Life after life!✋😭🤚 After thirty years of solitude, my son returns for the first time!😡 The most unforgettable gift, the centaur ring! 😍 Ullanor's canonization, Imperial Warmaster!🤤 The Emperor loves me, I love the Emperor! 🤪 Impossible, how could the Emperor only regard me as a tool? Absolutely impossible! Gua—Father, I love you so much—woo woo—wow croak—ah ah—hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee! Let the galaxy burn! 👿

The food cooked by the teacher is really delicious. The protagonist's character does not (fw) have such a gap from strong to weak. The setting is not toxic (in my opinion). The story line is very good so far. I look forward to the author's subsequent posts!

There is no poisonous point at the moment, the emotions are portrayed very delicately, and it deserves five-star praise Haochi [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy] Damn, it was poisoned in the back. The protagonist was afraid that the other heroines would find out, so he pretended to be an old man. One of the heroines jumped up and sat on her belly, and then he felt her heartbeat before she recognized it. Mask Lei

If your guess is correct, this book should be based on "My Ex-Girlfriends Are All Witches". After all, I saw that the core structure and even the essential plot are exactly the same, but it is not bad, because I think it is a very good and beautiful book (even though the author is a eunuch). However, when I read it, I always compare the writing style of the two books, so I can't give it full stars now, but I will continue to watch it! Let's see how to [learn] first

The rating of the book has not yet been released. In my opinion, it is a pretty good magical girl novel. The background is quite technological (similar to continent), not traditional and modern. The image created so far is quite good. Good luck to the author, five stars for encouragement.

Interesting, so interesting, quite good. You are one of the few people I have seen who writes about the modern harem of magic so fluently. Bro, I like you very much.

Emmm, I just finished reading chapter 101. The creation of various yandere characters seems to be very good, and the description of Shura Field is also very good. It is not the kind of Shura Field without conflicts. As for the overall plot, I don't think there's much of a problem (this may vary from person to person.). There is also the AI ​​issue that has been discussed in the comment area, but it actually feels hard to see. Personally, I think it's pretty good food so far. The character positioning of Sha Meng has returned to the original concept of a yandere. This is how it should be written. It's so cool. There is also the iron-blooded male protagonist (the ultimate fourth natural disaster). At present, it seems that the main plot is to slowly influence the male protagonist to become an xp party or a pure love party (), at least with a little bit of humanity. There are currently 172 photos in progress. The emotions of the heroines are portrayed very well. The emotion of the gravity system is very, even 9 points sweet. Instead, it gave me the feeling that the protagonist was playing with emotions, being condescending and unworthy of such sincere emotions. I really have to thank the great Three Witches, otherwise these six Gundam Team would probably become the next batch of Three Witches. Looking forward to the transformation of the protagonist. (One additional point. No wonder the score is quite low. The protagonist does seem a bit too arrogant. But it feels like it's just because his identity hasn't been revealed yet.) Update, the current progress is chapter 213. Sure enough, after the identity is revealed, the early perceptions have improved a lot. (Additional explanation, I had a flash of inspiration and felt that the protagonist's situation is a bit like Kelsey in Arknights)

It's very beautiful. There's nothing toxic about it so far. I just like this kind of Shura field. The heroine's character description is also very good. The only drawback is that there are a little few chapters, but the author does make up for it by updating 2 or 3 times a day, so I'll support it with 5 stars.

I hope the author will be kinder to the people of the Three Saints Sect After all, if you want to communicate with the witch after becoming a holy king, you must ensure that the opponent's organization is large enough to ensure that no personnel are killed or injured as much as possible. In this way, while reconciling the contradiction between the two parties (witch/magical girl), the manpower and strategies available will increase, which will help to establish one's own power in this world... What if the authority is returned? It's all no longer needed! Let the rabbit head sweep away everything, and be yourself is the way to go! [Adoration][Adoration] [Then I was beaten and eaten by the harem in the end... Wow... It's exciting just thinking about it! ] I have seen the back, and now I am about to invest in Saintess Pie without any hesitation, there is no reason why! Because I am a good person! [Shy]

I've read half of it. It's nice and interesting. I haven't read such a comfortable book for a long time. It's particularly good to write it completely around the title. The words are all about the yandere and dark expressions of the heroines. As for some game management and background, I also like it briefly, but I'd better write a little more to enrich the content. The only shortcoming is that the portrayal of the heroines is still not perfect. The characters are all likeable, but they do not reflect the degree of obsession after being blackened. Simply put, there is too little description of the past. This is the case for Lin Mu, Chloe, and Anna. As for the past encounters, acquaintances, falling in love, and parting, it is described in a few lines. I think this part should not be abbreviated. It is completely possible to write one chapter for each heroine's past encounters, and several chapters for each heroine's gradual falling in love. The confusion and heartache when they were separated. Write a chapter about the final darkening process, so that the emotional outburst when we meet again five years later will definitely be stronger and more beautiful than now. This will make the contrast between the characters stronger and make people feel more comfortable. Lin Mu's shaking, Chloe's docile side, these are all. As for Shura Field, I think there is nothing wrong with the writing alone, but the core is the problem mentioned above. Without foreshadowing, the conflict will make people feel a little abrupt and the smell of gunpowder is not so strong.

It's so exciting. Although the previous description of the protagonist's company's strength is not very good, a large company that has already dominated the world is being troubled by a cult on its own territory. Especially the incredible security personnel, who also blocked the protagonist from entering. But the foreshadowing of the protagonist's identity later is really interesting. The last few pictures talk about Katya's lover, who is similar to the protagonist, and Katya is very similar to Anna. This means that the protagonist is similar to the savior in Ming Chao who keeps losing his memory, making new friends, and saving the world. And are the current six witches basically the same witches that the protagonist died in before? Combined with what the three witches said now, the protagonist was spliced ​​together. Then his materials should have been collected before the protagonist lost his memory. This can also be related to the success of the protagonist's current company mentioned many times before, which is a foreshadowing of the achievements of previous generations. I will finish writing this book honestly, put away the pitfalls of foreshadowing, and then write a few more chapters to talk about later. Sort out your world view and go directly to the starting point. The combination of magic and reality, as well as those twisted characters, I think are quite lacking in starting point these days. If there is a female protagonist, it is best not to have more than 7 themes of this kind. I mean above the starting point. Tomato still has the same female protagonists, plus the three villains as witches

Kougua! This is what I want to watch. In the early stage, the yandere flavor is very strong, and the handling of the Shura field and the harem is also very delicious. In the middle and late stages, the witch comes out. I think that part is averagely written, and the impact of the yandere flavor is not so strong. It can even be said to be a bit weak. I think the themes of yandere and love should focus on people, and in the middle and late stages, the witch and the male protagonist revolve around the core conflict. It's actually a way to save the world. The witch side also feels a bit old-fashioned. How do you define what it is, what it means to eliminate the bad nature of human beings, what it means to make the world peaceful when time stops. That's not right. The witch used to be a magical girl under the male protagonist, and the male protagonist's bunny hair caused the other party to turn into a witch. Shouldn't this kind of plot be about love and hate, and then the male protagonist unravels his heart knot step by step? And I also think the pace is too slow. It feels disconnected from the previous pace, and there is a suspicion of hydrology, but it may also be that the author wants to write something more philosophical but is not very good at concisely expressing it from the perspective of a witch. But all in all, although my actual rating for this book is about four stars, I am still willing to give it five stars because of the good writing by Yandere.

First of all, come on, little author who writes brilliant articles The plot content and writing are pretty good, starting from 3 stars, and my personal rating is 4 stars. A half-yandering, half-sweet prison romance novel, delicious😋

Personal opinion: When the protagonist finds out that he can contact Zhuang Xingyu, he should contact the other five S+ magical girls through Zhuang's father. In this way, too many people will muddy the waters, and at least he can get out of the trapped state. Then, use the power of magical girls to find a way to solve the panel problem and at the same time impose self-restraint on the company. Instead of helping the banker play a house game to fight against injustice, or reading some information when you are in trouble. And this Zhuang Xingyu, although she is a typical image of a silly and sweet little rich woman, she can actually be bullied by a poor loser Ailian who is also in the D level. Not to mention that Ailian is a strong person in D. If her daughter is used as a sandbag for others, can Mr. Zhuang, the agent, be able to be a victim with peace of mind? Especially Zhuang's father is still a slave to his daughter. Of course, the above is only my personal opinion, if there is any difference, you shall prevail.

Nice. Tomato is one of the best magical girl books I have ever read. The description of the yandere in it is profound. It's not just the kind that tortures the protagonist to death, it's like the kind of enemy who claims to love the protagonist the most. Although there are many types of yandere, I think the bottom line is that you cannot harm the protagonist.

I have read a book with a similar plot in Tomato, and I feel like this is a reference to that book. But this book is better than that one. That book hasn't been updated for a few days, so it probably ran away. For those who like yandere novels, I highly recommend this book.

Gua, I want to see the protagonist regain all his authority and transform back into Mr. Q, who is full of divinity and rationality. I want to see those magical girls change from their hopeful eyes to their extremely desperate faces. I want to see Mr. Q, who is full of divinity, die in front of everyone in order to save mankind. I want to see rivers of blood. I want to see the desperate ending where neither the witch nor those magical girls can get Mr. Q! ! ! ! [Sinister smile]

It looks good, the setting is interesting, and the Shura field link is normal. When I read it, I often lamented the author's rich experience and wide knowledge. I hope the author can continue to write and in time he will be on the right track [Top post][Top post][Top post]

The author probably borrowed from the book My Ex-Girlfriend Is a Witch. The beginning of that book is very similar. I hope the author will not stop updating it like that book.

Although many people may think that the protagonist's behavior is CS and too cold and heartless, before you say this, please click on the table of contents, click to search the full text, search for "win rate" and check the content of Chapter 10. If you are still not convinced, please click on the table of contents again, click to search for the full text, search for "Rewind" and check the content of Chapter 118. If you are still not convinced, I have no choice.

I like it very much. The protagonist's constant struggle to survive deeply moved me. Hehe, I must live.

The thoughts of the witch can be written to complete the world view. But if you write too much, it will become like philosophical thinking, and to be honest, I have little interest in these. Gua, that's not what I want to see [punch out] [punch out] It's not interesting, give up

I have read Chapter 190, and to be honest, the rating of this book should not be so low. The male protagonist is relatively rational, the female characters are well described, and the world view is quite satisfactory. I have seen all the Shura fields that I should see. This book is worth at least 8.5

Great people are all doing the same thing, moving forward and moving forward the destiny of mankind. Absolute rationality may be the direction of progress for the race, but crazy sensibility is also the existential anchor of the human self. Human beings are such contradictions, both great and small, selfless and cowardly. If you were sitting on a golden toilet, how would you think about the world full of big portions? Please be careful if you are mentally weak, this is not a two-dimensional novel in the traditional sense. The author forcibly embeds the crazy magical world into the sugar coating called "Magical Girl", allowing readers to savor it carefully. The tragedy of the times, the struggle of the nation, the shackles of human nature, and the reincarnation of history again and again.

Well, it's a book that feels like a light novel. Shura Field is written very naturally and doesn't force the protagonist's level. The memories of the girls are very interesting, and the bond between the protagonist and the magical girls is uniquely created.

I am Shennong Good-looking food, don't worry too much about the settings. The author's driving speed is okay, but it may be gone later.

It's so well written, it's one of the best books of this type among foreign persimmons. However, the quality still needs to be polished. Some chapters are very smooth, but some chapters are very heavy with AI assistance, and there are a lot of repetitions of sentences and adjectives in the preceding and following paragraphs. Fortunately, there are no big problems such as repetition of chapters or plots. Editor 2: The more I write, the better. Compared with books of the same type, this book is most special in that it introduces the origin stories of each important character, and you can feel that the story is carried out by an outline or a complete and self-consistent background setting.

Give it 5 stars and look forward to it. Regarding the treatment of the three subsequent saints, I now want to watch a very crazy plot, including the plot of Qin Chuan facing the pure love saint. If there are 3 chapters per day, it feels like Pure Love will have to wait until all members of Team Gundam unlock their individual plots before it can be her turn. Anyway, let's look forward to the development of the plot.

Manhun! A+ grade art work, even better than a certain cat's popular counterpart. I look forward to the author's subsequent plot.

Ok, I think this is also very good. Well, in short, it is very good. Anyway, I think it looks very good and feels good. It can be regarded as a very good work. Well, in my mind, it's good. I should be able to give a good ranking.