Interstellar Dating Game

There are good points and bad points. It's easy to persuade people to quit in the early stage, but the plot is better later on. I didn't give it three stars because it's a love game designed by the plot. I didn't give it five stars because I was trying to persuade people to quit in the early stage. I don't know if four stars count as encouragement. I just want to watch this subject... (*Ӧ)σ [Note] Dissuade point 1. The beginning of the chapter progresses too quickly and makes no sense. 2. The heroine's vest is known to the male protagonist who has the ability to read minds, and it is the mind-reading ability unconsciously given by the heroine herself. 3. The heroine sets up a character in the game herself, breaks through the restrictions, and takes the initiative to destroy the heroine's vest, which shows that the heroine cannot control the situation by herself. [Working on draft] Attractive points 1. The plot of the love game, each section will interact with a male protagonist, the description is particularly good, there are main plots, branch plots, and card plots 2. There is no malicious behavior, everyone has good manners, and there are no people who come up to us who are brainless and arrogant. 3. The description of the heroine's vest is quite accurate. She is an all-rounder among the freshmen of the military academy. She attracts men, women and children with her charm.

Okay, I took a rough look at it, and the evaluation is that it makes me grip my toes and give it a four-star encouragement. The sentence structure and writing style are amazing. People who read it at the beginning were embarrassed. Then I felt that the logic was a bit lacking. The hostess type can definitely be picked up later. Well, in short, just keep working hard. After you finish writing it, read it again without any emotion, okay?

The plot is okay, the heroine is quite interesting, I'm busy after school and playing games, I'm so busy, there are so many things to do, the deer with amnesia is so cute, haha, please write it better, it's not enough🍉

It's just that the parts about real life don't look good, but it's more fun to write about games.

This book is very interesting. The heroine is sure to become stronger in career and love. It is also a rare creation of an interstellar love game. It is very novel.

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I quite like this theme.

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