The Diary of a Thief Becoming a God

It's a very good book. It's a Western fantasy with a bit of Cthulhu. The character description is very human-like, but it fits my stereotype of Western fantasy characters very well. The plot is also very well written, with a clear main line, and the progression is not too stiff. However, when the protagonist becomes Long Aotian, I feel like I'm always eating soft food (sad)

I have just finished reading the first volume. Generally speaking, this book is highly recommended. It has a very clear main line, the character creation is relatively good, the logic, the world view, etc. Are all self-consistent, but the expression of some details is a bit rough, the emotional line is relatively flat, the characters are a bit stereotyped, and there are many minor flaws. Although there are some obvious areas that need improvement, overall the flaws are not concealed. The guarantee is also above the average level of a good work. It is a novel with obvious advantages and disadvantages. I hope the author can deal with the small points of the novel well and I will continue to follow up with more chapters [Chigua]

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I'll give it five stars first. I think it's a Western fantasy novel with an outline and a clear main line, which I like very much. However, the writing style of the book is a bit fierce. Many plot descriptions feel a bit r16 to me (a bit like watching Han Qing), and the character creation is more group-like. However, in order to advance the plot smoothly, many characters feel a bit deliberately designed, such as the part where the count recognizes his relatives. It is obvious that the author has accelerated the pace of the main plot, but the subsequent description of the count's family is also complete. I would like to give my personal humble opinion to the author. The dark and Western fantasy world view of this book is indeed not very good at retaining readers who are mainly middle school students. The audience here at Red Persimmon is still a bit younger. The author can try to make the narrative style more attractive to readers, and the plot design can have a more "fairy tale" feel (black fairy tales are also fairy tales) The current performance of the book does not seem to be very good, but there is also the reason why Western Fantasy itself is not popular on Tomato. However, the author's first book is really to my liking and it is very interesting. I will continue to follow it. Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes] I accidentally talked too much. I have no intention of teaching the author how to do things. The author just writes at his own pace. I think what the author writes is very interesting.

It's quite good-looking and more to my liking, but I always feel that the author is suspected of missing a girl. Luo Li ran away at the beginning, and I don't know whether to accept Chloe later. I'll give it a five-star rating first and wait and see. I don't ask for a large number of scenes. I'll make dumplings at the end and accept them all. Let's see what the author arranges. The third volume is completely unclear... The plot is scattered and messy, and a bunch of meaningless supporting characters are added. Dracula is written every day as if he has replaced the male protagonist. Lu also inexplicably escapes control. I am lucky that I didn't get poisoned. I wanted to give it two stars, but after thinking about it I decided not to. The girls are still very well-behaved. For the sake of the girls, I'll give it four stars.

I have just finished reading the first volume. It is quite exciting. It has more adult-like fighting and strategizing. It is quite similar to the exciting operation of the CK series of games. It is unbelievable that the rating is low. Maybe Tomato readers can only accept the protagonist Shuang Jie? Come on, author [like] I really like this kind of plot trend that favors Han Qing. Although many tomato novels have so-called ooxx plots on the surface, they can actually only count all ages. The author has handled the explosive points very well in the first volume. The second volume is not enough so far [laughing] I hope it can be more comprehensive. In addition, the disadvantage of a large worldview is that the first volume has so much foreshadowing from the first few chapters, and the second chapter so far is mainly about love and love, with no intention of recycling it? For example, in the so-called abnormal containment, no one has been found since the initial appearance?

I read it for two days, but it's not enough. [Adoration] Brothers, this book is considered the best on Tomato. [Adoration] There aren't many poisonous points, it's not too deep, and it's not disgusting. The author also has reflections and plans on his own writing, which is pretty good. I hope he can stop talking about it in the future, and put it less in daily life, and just put it in the relaxation part after the climax. The main plot progress is very stable, and the climax progress is okay, but it does not reach the point of affecting the readers. Anyway, come on, we are looking forward to the next content

It's a very good Western fantasy novel, and it's worth the time I spent searching for it on Tomato. When I was reading the first volume, I was still sighing because the author's xx process was not detailed enough. By the second and third volumes, I suspected that Shen He was fainted by the author's elbow. The later chapters are getting more and more exciting as they are written, and there are no big problems until the third volume. I would like to read it as soon as possible. I feel that it is easy to delete later chapters.

The writing is very good, but the details will be better polished. I hope this book can be completed. The plot is well laid out and has been brought into it. I really, really, really, really hope that the author can finish it. It won't be unfinished. It won't be unfinished. It won't be unfinished. [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend]

The plot is quite smooth. There is a lot of foreshadowing in the first volume. Unfortunately, it is impossible to know what Anna went through in the north. The author should have written a backup manuscript. All in all, the first volume is very smooth. There are also several witches' debut stories in the back that are very exciting. Give a good recommendation [top post]

It has a cruel world view that I like, and the interactions with the female protagonists are not brainless. The male protagonist is not the kind of trash who yells, at least he has his own plan. I give it five stars, but I hope the author can work harder on writing. I still want to read the rest of it. I also have a small question, is there a Shura field in the back? I really want to see it.

It's so good. The character creation is good. The characters of the important characters are quite three-dimensional. The emotional logic is smooth. The narrative looks very comfortable. It is definitely a masterpiece. It should be popular on another platform. Many people on Yangshizi can't accept the crotch tragedy between the male protagonist and passers-by or the important female supporting female protagonist. Maybe with a few changes, more people can accept it. However, even the crotch tragedy only gives people the feeling of a tragedy of the times rather than a disgusting plot. It does not have the experience of someone like you, Sister Lin, who is purely a disgusting person from the production team. I recommend Meow. In the end, why doesn't Kara Picchu look like Meow?

To be honest, among the novels I have read on Tomato, it is second only to the God-killing novel. The plot is quite good, and all the foreshadowings surprised me. The protagonist has no system, and in the subsequent unknowns caused by the butterfly effect, the protagonist shows extremely high emergency response with the player's thinking. In terms of ability, IQ belongs to the higher category, and at the same time, it also has some daily jokes. I have bought so many books, and it is a pretty good one. Who said the previous one was from a female channel, which almost made me run away. Can you please stop making random comments, is it easy for me to buy some books [angry] [angry]

I have been following this book for half a month. I was amazed when I first read it. The structure is very big and I should be able to write it for a long time. However, there are not many people who follow it. I hope I can write it well and don't end it hastily [I'm about to cry]

In fact, it's okay. I've already read Tomato, the novels are all free, you can read them, and some of the plots are logically clear, so there's no need to be picky. I haven't seen anything toxic so far, and it's very suitable for Chinese children like me who are not very smart to watch.

It's quite interesting, the pacing is good, it's clean and not cliché, the title is a bit cliche, but the actual look and feel is a lot of interesting. It's a group portrait, the protagonist has a brain, and really tries his best to save the world step by step, and the villains and supporting characters are killed when they need to be. The mid-open and high moves are worth a look.

I have read the first volume. It is a Western fantasy aristocratic romance theme [Angry], with a bit of Cthulhu horror, and the writing is delicate [currently in progress]. It also depicts the emotions of the heroine and the attitudes of the surrounding NPCs very well [Sending my heart] The logical thinking is rigorous [Like] [Like] [Like], it is not a brainless love story [Sparrow Eater Masterpiece], and the content has a lot of emotional fluctuations [Bookshelf Plus 1], it is a very interesting love story. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

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It's a very good book. The writing is smooth and there are no glitches. The overall plot is also good. The growth of the protagonist is also quite exciting. It makes people want to read more. I hope the author will continue to work hard [eating melon]

So far, it's pretty good, the plot is exciting, and the content is great. I just don't know if it's my imagination. It feels like I'm reading a historical biography rather than a novel. Maybe the author's writing style is like this

It's good to watch, the plot doesn't have any major problems, and the characterization is okay. A decent Western fantasy novel. This is the author's first book. The writing style can be gradually improved. Although there are some flaws in some places, it is acceptable in terms of tomatoes.

The following comments are all based on reading the first volume Save money, a Western fantasy novel that opens low and goes high The author wants to open a net similar to the world where the front and back lines are intertwined. In fact, the author also writes this way. In the climactic battle at the end of the first volume, it is obvious that the world lines are closed. The climax is very good. I opened it low because I thought it was a mindless and cool article. In fact, the feeling it gave me in the early stage was true, but the decisive battle in the royal city later was really a slap in the face. The front and rear lines are intertwined. I feel that the author's writing skills have improved greatly before and after I don't know if it's my imagination, but this book feels like it has been changed a lot. At least part of the content has been deleted to cater to Tomato readers. Before the final battle, it was obvious that I felt that I was a little rushed, and the overall pace was too fast. The author's emotional line. The two sisters of Baroness Luo's family wrote it very well, with emotions, clues and interactions. But the rest is really hard to describe in one sentence. The author himself said that the first volume of "The Witch and the Yandere" was not written. I was shocked when Hera suddenly said that she was not allowed to marry. The first volume of "Hera" was not written and can be written later.

It's very beautiful, the characters are well described, and everyone is fully written and doesn't feel cookie-cutter. Of course, meat and vegetables are also paired, so there is no boring feeling. (*¯¯*)

I'm glad, this novel is okay. I quite like the daily narrative. However, it should be noted that the author's writing skills are indeed a bit weak, and many climaxes are not lifted up. But overall, the shortcomings are not concealed.

I have read Chapter 37 so far. Let me talk about my feelings. Overall, it seems okay. The author has the ability to make the plot not stiff and dragging. However, at the same time, some plot turning points are very abrupt, which affects the overall perception. In addition, the emotional portrayal of the characters is not delicate enough, and the characters are not three-dimensional enough. I originally planned to give it three stars, but considering that it is the first time for the author to write a book, it is already good to achieve such results, so I would like to give four stars for encouragement [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting. The protagonist is relatively sane, especially the proposal. The writing is very good. Are there any similar books?

The Western Fantasy book is considered a good book. I feel that the author's writing style is not very good. Some of the expressions are not very clear, but the narration is smooth and has a refreshing but not refreshing feeling. It looks quite comfortable, and the further you read, the more comfortable it becomes.

The content of this book is wonderful and beautiful, the plot is rich and exciting, and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional. The writing is beautiful, fluent, and contagious. When reading, it feels like you are immersed in the book. It is worth savoring. Come on, the author is great

It's really good-looking, with justice that doesn't give in to darkness, the bond of dedication, the courage to face despair, the beauty of hope for world peace, and more importantly, a love that looks greedy but is actually pure and sincere. Wow, is this really a novel that can be found on Tomato? This is just my personal opinion. This novel has fascinated me so far [blowing kiss]

It's very good. It doesn't have the taste of industrial saccharin, but some of the Western intermarriage and promiscuity will not be accepted by many people. The feeling of pleasure is not too strong, but the setting is quite interesting and enjoyable to watch.