Lord of the Witches

It's a very good book. It's a Western fantasy with a bit of Cthulhu. The character description is very human-like, but it fits my stereotype of Western fantasy characters very well. The plot is also very well written, with a clear main line, and the progression is not too stiff. However, when the protagonist becomes Long Aotian, I feel like I'm always eating soft food (sad)

I have just finished reading the first volume. Generally speaking, this book is highly recommended. It has a very clear main line, the character creation is relatively good, the logic, the world view, etc. Are all self-consistent, but the expression of some details is a bit rough, the emotional line is relatively flat, the characters are a bit stereotyped, and there are many minor flaws. Although there are some obvious areas that need improvement, overall the flaws are not concealed. The guarantee is also above the average level of a good work. It is a novel with obvious advantages and disadvantages. I hope the author can deal with the small points of the novel well and I will continue to follow up with more chapters [Chigua]

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It's a very good Western fantasy novel, and it's worth the time I spent searching for it on Tomato. When I was reading the first volume, I was still sighing because the author's xx process was not detailed enough. By the second and third volumes, I suspected that Shen He was fainted by the author's elbow. The later chapters are getting more and more exciting as they are written, and there are no big problems until the third volume. I would like to read it as soon as possible. I feel that it is easy to delete later chapters.

I'll give it five stars first. I think it's a Western fantasy novel with an outline and a clear main line, which I like very much. However, the writing style of the book is a bit fierce. Many plot descriptions feel a bit r16 to me (a bit like watching Han Qing), and the character creation is more group-like. However, in order to advance the plot smoothly, many characters feel a bit deliberately designed, such as the part where the count recognizes his relatives. It is obvious that the author has accelerated the pace of the main plot, but the subsequent description of the count's family is also complete. I would like to give my personal humble opinion to the author. The dark and Western fantasy world view of this book is indeed not very good at retaining readers who are mainly middle school students. The audience here at Red Persimmon is still a bit younger. The author can try to make the narrative style more attractive to readers, and the plot design can have a more "fairy tale" feel (black fairy tales are also fairy tales) The current performance of the book does not seem to be very good, but there is also the reason why Western Fantasy itself is not popular on Tomato. However, the author's first book is really to my liking and it is very interesting. I will continue to follow it. Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes] I accidentally talked too much. I have no intention of teaching the author how to do things. The author just writes at his own pace. I think what the author writes is very interesting.

It's quite good-looking and more to my liking, but I always feel that the author is suspected of missing a girl. Luo Li ran away at the beginning, and I don't know whether to accept Chloe later. I'll give it a five-star rating first and wait and see. I don't ask for a large number of scenes. I'll make dumplings at the end and accept them all. Let's see what the author arranges. The third volume is completely unclear... The plot is scattered and messy, and a bunch of meaningless supporting characters are added. Dracula is written every day as if he has replaced the male protagonist. Lu also inexplicably escapes control. I am lucky that I didn't get poisoned. I wanted to give it two stars, but after thinking about it I decided not to. The girls are still very well-behaved. For the sake of the girls, I'll give it four stars.

I have just finished reading the first volume. It is quite exciting. It has more adult-like fighting and strategizing. It is quite similar to the exciting operation of the CK series of games. It is unbelievable that the rating is low. Maybe Tomato readers can only accept the protagonist Shuang Jie? Come on, author [like] I really like this kind of plot trend that favors Han Qing. Although many tomato novels have so-called ooxx plots on the surface, they can actually only count all ages. The author has handled the explosive points very well in the first volume. The second volume is not enough so far [laughing] I hope it can be more comprehensive. In addition, the disadvantage of a large worldview is that the first volume has so much foreshadowing from the first few chapters, and the second chapter so far is mainly about love and love, with no intention of recycling it? For example, in the so-called abnormal containment, no one has been found since the initial appearance?

I read it for two days, but it's not enough. [Adoration] Brothers, this book is considered the best on Tomato. [Adoration] There aren't many poisonous points, it's not too deep, and it's not disgusting. The author also has reflections and plans on his own writing, which is pretty good. I hope he can stop talking about it in the future, and put it less in daily life, and just put it in the relaxation part after the climax. The main plot progress is very stable, and the climax progress is okay, but it does not reach the point of affecting the readers. Anyway, come on, we are looking forward to the next content

It's so good. The character creation is good. The characters of the important characters are quite three-dimensional. The emotional logic is smooth. The narrative looks very comfortable. It is definitely a masterpiece. It should be popular on another platform. Many people on Yangshizi can't accept the crotch tragedy between the male protagonist and passers-by or the important female supporting female protagonist. Maybe with a few changes, more people can accept it. However, even the crotch tragedy only gives people the feeling of a tragedy of the times rather than a disgusting plot. It does not have the experience of someone like you, Sister Lin, who is purely a disgusting person from the production team. I recommend Meow. In the end, why doesn't Kara Picchu look like Meow?

The writing is very good, but the details will be better polished. I hope this book can be completed. The plot is well laid out and has been brought into it. I really, really, really, really hope that the author can finish it. It won't be unfinished. It won't be unfinished. It won't be unfinished. [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend]