(Through the book, single female protagonist, refreshing + sweet writing, the story is more martial arts + suspense)
Although he is the so-called minor villain in the book, since Li Xiaoyu came through the book and started to take off by relying on the system, he was naturally too lazy to wait for the bloody plot in the book and chose to stay away.
But he did see that the heroine Jiang Ning was pitiful and blind when she was a child, so he secretly gave her some help to save her a lot of hardship.
But I never thought that the help and warmth he gave the heroine in his childhood would make him the only Bai Yueguang the heroine has been looking for for many years...
Reader comments
The author's writing is okay. This is undeniable. The main thing is the bed incident at the beginning. I suggest the author revise it because there are indeed too many negative reviews. If you want to use this to show respect, it is not necessary. If you have nothing in mind, two children on the same bed, each side is no problem. The follow-up writing is still very good and logical. So I still want to suggest that the author change the first part. After all, the score is high. If it is enough, maybe there can be more, so the author can write better.
This is a great book that will definitely be a favorite of turtle men, warm men, and fantasy-loving women. Come and read it [laughing]
It's watchable, although it's cliche, but the plot is okay, but the plot advances a bit slowly, and it's still 12 or 13 years old after dozens of chapters.
I've read Chapter 25, and overall it's okay. Judging from the book's title and introduction, it has a romantic theme, but the emotional growth of the interaction with the heroine feels very forced, but overall it's not brainless.
I think the rating is very low, and most of the reviews are about the part about giving up the bed. If you think about it carefully, giving up the bed is a bit deliberate, but not that serious.
The book is better than most of the books written by Tomato now, I think so, but the writing style is very immature, the plot... Doesn't have much new ideas, the characterization is not detailed or profound, the character interaction is relatively stiff, and the protagonist has no characteristics.
Now I have read Chapter 25. I originally planned to read the book review before continuing, but when I wrote the review, I had already planned not to read it because it was boring. That's it. Now I can basically make up my mind after reading the beginning of all novels. It's boring. I only read more if I read some imaginative articles.
Generally speaking, this book is not a good book, but there are not many good books in Tomato. The author's writing is not good, but at least he writes seriously, and the writing is not brainless, which is much better than most other books.
The plot is great, I don't know why the rating is not high, but it is super interesting and not brainless.
[Smile][like]
The moment the telescope came out, people were a little confused, but this was not the point so I skipped it.
By the way, this is the main story line between the protagonist and the princess, right? What else is behind?
The words and ink are spread out and the meaning is endless, making people's thoughts wander around the chapter.
Love is full of ups and downs, doubts are real, and sentences turn into waves to reveal clever plots.
When you close the book, you still have a dream in your heart; when you open it, you still feel drunk and soft in your belly.
The secular connection was also attracted by Wen Xin, and he refused to stop after reading one volume.
It's not bad. As long as the little poisons in the front are filtered out, it's pretty good. There are still hidden doubts and reversals. Peng Xiang, to be honest, I was also deceived by the author. It seems that I am still too shallow-minded [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]
The book is okay, the characters have distinct personalities, the world view and character background settings are also good, and the author's writing style is also good. Overall, this novel is good.
It's a pity that the protagonist's portrayal is a bit rogue, so he's not very interested in it.
If you update once a day, it is recommended to speed up the promotion of the main line. Twelve or thirteen years old is still too young. If you update ten times a day, just pretend I didn't say anything.
The first poisonous point was to hit the floor, I was so happy
Five-star praise, not unreasonable, I like the style,
It's pretty cool. Will the male protagonist help cure the female protagonist's eyes in the end?
Fireworks rise, illuminating the world, joy is boundless, toast to this year.
May your New Year be as prosperous as window flowers,
As sticky as glutinous rice (to stick good luck),
In the ordinary fireworks, fish out the boiling perfection.
I've seen the latest chapter, and I think it's okay. Although there are some minor flaws, it's still fair and square. Anyway, I feel it's okay, not bad.
He Yiwei, what is the protagonist you want to create? This allows the heroine to stay in the inn without any strength, and leaves no backup at all. As for positioning, special situations will be treated specially. I think the heroine is already dead at this time, and the follow-up is nothing more than the author's divine power. It's a pity that the male protagonist doesn't care much about the female protagonist, so there's that. Let me put it bluntly, it doesn't matter if the innkeeper's wife is a good person, she has no fighting ability, and she will be arrested as much as she wants.
The writing is very good, excluding a few minor points. If you are short of books, you can read it.
The idea is good and the plot is good, but I only give it 4 stars because it was written by AI and I can tell it at a glance. Don't ask me why I know it, because I also use AI to write novels for myself [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly].
It's pretty, but it's a bit unsightly
Well written, support it
I want to be a divine farmer.
It's okay. Why does it feel like no one is watching?
If you want to read this book, you have to be patient and learn to ignore some details. It's still possible.
The reason why I am rushing to comment is to express my thoughts. Don't cause misunderstandings, don't be like looking for someone to make someone jealous, and don't be like the original male lead harassing the female lead [blowing kisses]. This book is very good,
It's a very good book. It's very interesting. I look forward to the emotional line in the future. In the early stage, there was a relatively controversial issue, which is that the male protagonist sleeps on the ground and the female protagonist sleeps on the bed. It can be modified. But I was only 11 years old at the time. They could change the two, or lie together. 11-Year-olds can't do much. This point does not exist in the future. The description is that they slept together, but don't expect to do anything. 11 Or 12 years old [laugh] Xing, the author, depicting this point, is probably afraid of harmony [laughs]
The male protagonist actually confessed his love directly without any trouble. It has surpassed more than half of Tomato's books. It's commendable.
A good book, the male protagonist is well-organized and responsible
It seems quite relaxing, the plot is brisk and not draggy
Very good. The emotional lines are smooth and natural, and the characters are well-developed. The only minor drawback is the sleeping area. Everything else is okay.
It's well written, the protagonist is brave and resourceful, and it's worth watching.
It's a good villain story. The northwest part is still great to read. Although it is relatively long, it cannot be short. So the author wrote, hurry up and let me see how the heroine will develop later when she becomes stronger [I understand]
Well, after the subsequent meeting, I felt like we were getting tired of being together. I thought the male protagonist would hide away [currently in development]
The author's writing is okay. This is undeniable. The main thing is the bed incident at the beginning. I suggest the author revise it because there are indeed too many negative reviews. If you want to use this to show respect, it is not necessary. If you have nothing in mind, two children on the same bed, each side is no problem. The follow-up writing is still very good and logical. So I still want to suggest that the author change the first part. After all, the score is high. If it is enough, maybe there can be more, so the author can write better.
This is a great book that will definitely be a favorite of turtle men, warm men, and fantasy-loving women. Come and read it [laughing]
It's watchable, although it's cliche, but the plot is okay, but the plot advances a bit slowly, and it's still 12 or 13 years old after dozens of chapters.
I've read Chapter 25, and overall it's okay. Judging from the book's title and introduction, it has a romantic theme, but the emotional growth of the interaction with the heroine feels very forced, but overall it's not brainless. I think the rating is very low, and most of the reviews are about the part about giving up the bed. If you think about it carefully, giving up the bed is a bit deliberate, but not that serious. The book is better than most of the books written by Tomato now, I think so, but the writing style is very immature, the plot... Doesn't have much new ideas, the characterization is not detailed or profound, the character interaction is relatively stiff, and the protagonist has no characteristics. Now I have read Chapter 25. I originally planned to read the book review before continuing, but when I wrote the review, I had already planned not to read it because it was boring. That's it. Now I can basically make up my mind after reading the beginning of all novels. It's boring. I only read more if I read some imaginative articles. Generally speaking, this book is not a good book, but there are not many good books in Tomato. The author's writing is not good, but at least he writes seriously, and the writing is not brainless, which is much better than most other books.
The plot is great, I don't know why the rating is not high, but it is super interesting and not brainless.
[Smile][like] The moment the telescope came out, people were a little confused, but this was not the point so I skipped it. By the way, this is the main story line between the protagonist and the princess, right? What else is behind?
The words and ink are spread out and the meaning is endless, making people's thoughts wander around the chapter. Love is full of ups and downs, doubts are real, and sentences turn into waves to reveal clever plots. When you close the book, you still have a dream in your heart; when you open it, you still feel drunk and soft in your belly. The secular connection was also attracted by Wen Xin, and he refused to stop after reading one volume.
It's not bad. As long as the little poisons in the front are filtered out, it's pretty good. There are still hidden doubts and reversals. Peng Xiang, to be honest, I was also deceived by the author. It seems that I am still too shallow-minded [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]
The book is okay, the characters have distinct personalities, the world view and character background settings are also good, and the author's writing style is also good. Overall, this novel is good. It's a pity that the protagonist's portrayal is a bit rogue, so he's not very interested in it.
If you update once a day, it is recommended to speed up the promotion of the main line. Twelve or thirteen years old is still too young. If you update ten times a day, just pretend I didn't say anything.
The first poisonous point was to hit the floor, I was so happy
Five-star praise, not unreasonable, I like the style,
It's pretty cool. Will the male protagonist help cure the female protagonist's eyes in the end?
Fireworks rise, illuminating the world, joy is boundless, toast to this year. May your New Year be as prosperous as window flowers, As sticky as glutinous rice (to stick good luck), In the ordinary fireworks, fish out the boiling perfection.
I've seen the latest chapter, and I think it's okay. Although there are some minor flaws, it's still fair and square. Anyway, I feel it's okay, not bad. He Yiwei, what is the protagonist you want to create? This allows the heroine to stay in the inn without any strength, and leaves no backup at all. As for positioning, special situations will be treated specially. I think the heroine is already dead at this time, and the follow-up is nothing more than the author's divine power. It's a pity that the male protagonist doesn't care much about the female protagonist, so there's that. Let me put it bluntly, it doesn't matter if the innkeeper's wife is a good person, she has no fighting ability, and she will be arrested as much as she wants.
The writing is very good, excluding a few minor points. If you are short of books, you can read it.
The idea is good and the plot is good, but I only give it 4 stars because it was written by AI and I can tell it at a glance. Don't ask me why I know it, because I also use AI to write novels for myself [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly].
It's pretty, but it's a bit unsightly
Well written, support it
I want to be a divine farmer.
It's okay. Why does it feel like no one is watching?
If you want to read this book, you have to be patient and learn to ignore some details. It's still possible.
The reason why I am rushing to comment is to express my thoughts. Don't cause misunderstandings, don't be like looking for someone to make someone jealous, and don't be like the original male lead harassing the female lead [blowing kisses]. This book is very good, It's a very good book. It's very interesting. I look forward to the emotional line in the future. In the early stage, there was a relatively controversial issue, which is that the male protagonist sleeps on the ground and the female protagonist sleeps on the bed. It can be modified. But I was only 11 years old at the time. They could change the two, or lie together. 11-Year-olds can't do much. This point does not exist in the future. The description is that they slept together, but don't expect to do anything. 11 Or 12 years old [laugh] Xing, the author, depicting this point, is probably afraid of harmony [laughs]
The male protagonist actually confessed his love directly without any trouble. It has surpassed more than half of Tomato's books. It's commendable.
A good book, the male protagonist is well-organized and responsible
It seems quite relaxing, the plot is brisk and not draggy
Very good. The emotional lines are smooth and natural, and the characters are well-developed. The only minor drawback is the sleeping area. Everything else is okay.
It's well written, the protagonist is brave and resourceful, and it's worth watching.
It's a good villain story. The northwest part is still great to read. Although it is relatively long, it cannot be short. So the author wrote, hurry up and let me see how the heroine will develop later when she becomes stronger [I understand] Well, after the subsequent meeting, I felt like we were getting tired of being together. I thought the male protagonist would hide away [currently in development]
When you become popular, I will be an old fan.