My name is Yanying. Since my parents passed away, I was taken in by my father's colleagues.
I have a system!
Wait, what are you doing for me?
The man in front of me was obviously just my godfather, how could he become my adoptive father!
When did the Los Santos PD become six doors?
What? My adoptive father is Xie Xun?
Day 1: No matter how good your skills are, you are still afraid of guns. Keep a low profile and stay steady!
The next day: Martial arts in the world are invincible, except speed, who else!
Day 3: I have decided on this elder of Miaoyin Sect, who is in favor and who is against!
Day 4: I am determined to eat Sichuan Bao, even Jesus can't keep it!
Day 5: The sword is coming!
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[Only My Way] [Invincible] [Dislocation System] [Urban Literature]
Reader comments
Well enough. There are too many descriptions of the characters' appearance. When viewed on mobile phones, most of them describe appearance. Moreover, there are too many descriptions of women's appearance, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to eat.
Overall it's a good book.
See Chapter 39. When will the protagonist have the strength to seek justice? Always discovering problems shows how difficult they are to solve. If you don't solve the problem, it will be very uncomfortable.
All in all, there is hope. When people and laws are useless against animals, the protagonist has the ability to solve the problem on his own.
For example, using martial arts, combining martial arts with firearms, poisoning, etc.
I hope my comments are useful to the author.
Third review: So-so. The center is unclear and there is no main line. Basically it is written around system tasks. There has been a trend of triggering other system tasks during system tasks, layer by layer.
The plot is conventional and the progress is a little slow, but sometimes the description of the new female character seems to be playing with butter. Important female characters will be shown in close-ups first.
If you want to have a harem in the future, sell Qi massage and life extension classes, refine medicine, buy land, open a sect, and build a private city.
It's very good to watch. Although it has martial arts as a hook, it doesn't seem to be too dramatic. The author obviously has a certain American reading experience. Anyway, the content makes me feel that it is very American, and it is not a direct application of the routine to the United States.
It's a very good novel. Although the protagonist's behavior pattern is not in line with the national conditions of the United States, and the combat power is insufficient, the excitement is not enough, but the plot design is reasonable and the rhythm is tight. It is written with heart, not an AI product. The real drawback is that one chapter a day is too little. At this speed, as an online article, it is easy to lose popularity and become less popular.
It's okay. In fact, the content of AI describing female characters can be less and focus on the plot. Come on author.
I only gave it 4 points. I guess it was polished by AI. There are too many complicated descriptions.
A good book, the plot is fluently written, and the protagonist has his own persistence in his views. I just hope that this boy's skill will be completed soon.
No matter how beautiful the female character is, can we not draw hundreds of words to describe it every time? I suspect this is AI
Except that the system space cannot store system rewards, everything else is fine. It can currently be given 4.5 Stars.
Tomato is pretty good. The moral standards are quite high. The plot is not too exciting. It would be better to make waves every once in a while. Updates are a bit slow.
The writing is very correct, which is rare in Tomato, Grain and Grass
Okay, I need five words
Very good, I can look forward to it
It's pretty good. It has some shortcomings, but not to the point where it's a big problem. Please give it a try, author.
It's okay, except that the protagonist's words are a bit too literary in the United States.
The biggest drawback is that updates are too slow. I can't read ten chapters in a day.
Actually I want to give it two stars, but I don't see any invincibility.
But the overall writing style is good, and I can read it if I'm bored.
It's very well written, I listened to it for a long time, and it's full of words.
The subject matter is novel and the language is concise. The contrast between the decadent American life and China's traditional culture and education seems to be a conflict in every chapter.
It's well written, it doesn't look mindless, and the storyline makes people want to read it, but it's just too short.
Overall it's pretty good, but it's not exciting enough. The protagonist isn't strong enough, and the hooks aren't big enough. If it were stronger, the rating might go up.
Well enough. There are too many descriptions of the characters' appearance. When viewed on mobile phones, most of them describe appearance. Moreover, there are too many descriptions of women's appearance, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to eat. Overall it's a good book. See Chapter 39. When will the protagonist have the strength to seek justice? Always discovering problems shows how difficult they are to solve. If you don't solve the problem, it will be very uncomfortable. All in all, there is hope. When people and laws are useless against animals, the protagonist has the ability to solve the problem on his own. For example, using martial arts, combining martial arts with firearms, poisoning, etc. I hope my comments are useful to the author. Third review: So-so. The center is unclear and there is no main line. Basically it is written around system tasks. There has been a trend of triggering other system tasks during system tasks, layer by layer.
The plot is conventional and the progress is a little slow, but sometimes the description of the new female character seems to be playing with butter. Important female characters will be shown in close-ups first. If you want to have a harem in the future, sell Qi massage and life extension classes, refine medicine, buy land, open a sect, and build a private city.
It's very good to watch. Although it has martial arts as a hook, it doesn't seem to be too dramatic. The author obviously has a certain American reading experience. Anyway, the content makes me feel that it is very American, and it is not a direct application of the routine to the United States.
It's a very good novel. Although the protagonist's behavior pattern is not in line with the national conditions of the United States, and the combat power is insufficient, the excitement is not enough, but the plot design is reasonable and the rhythm is tight. It is written with heart, not an AI product. The real drawback is that one chapter a day is too little. At this speed, as an online article, it is easy to lose popularity and become less popular.
It's okay. In fact, the content of AI describing female characters can be less and focus on the plot. Come on author.
I only gave it 4 points. I guess it was polished by AI. There are too many complicated descriptions.
A good book, the plot is fluently written, and the protagonist has his own persistence in his views. I just hope that this boy's skill will be completed soon.
No matter how beautiful the female character is, can we not draw hundreds of words to describe it every time? I suspect this is AI
Except that the system space cannot store system rewards, everything else is fine. It can currently be given 4.5 Stars.
Tomato is pretty good. The moral standards are quite high. The plot is not too exciting. It would be better to make waves every once in a while. Updates are a bit slow.
The writing is very correct, which is rare in Tomato, Grain and Grass
Okay, I need five words
Very good, I can look forward to it
It's pretty good. It has some shortcomings, but not to the point where it's a big problem. Please give it a try, author.
It's okay, except that the protagonist's words are a bit too literary in the United States.
The biggest drawback is that updates are too slow. I can't read ten chapters in a day.
Actually I want to give it two stars, but I don't see any invincibility. But the overall writing style is good, and I can read it if I'm bored.
It's very well written, I listened to it for a long time, and it's full of words.
The subject matter is novel and the language is concise. The contrast between the decadent American life and China's traditional culture and education seems to be a conflict in every chapter.
It's well written, it doesn't look mindless, and the storyline makes people want to read it, but it's just too short.
Overall it's pretty good, but it's not exciting enough. The protagonist isn't strong enough, and the hooks aren't big enough. If it were stronger, the rating might go up.
Not bad, not bad Not ai+1 Special theme +1