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Looking for High-Quality HP (But If You Don't Reach the Level of the Book I Posted, You Will Be Exempted)
I Have Given up Hope on High-Quality HP. Please Slap Me in the Face with a Book.
I Declare That I Am Tired of Watching HP. Is There Anything I Can Do to Pique My Interest?
٩(*´◒`*)۶Because of you, the bookshelf is full
I Dare Say HP Is a Masterpiece! ! !
I Was so Angry That I Bluntly Said That HP Didn't Have a Book About Conferring Gods😋
I want to read a book like "Harry Potter: Slytherin".
Is There Any HP Cool Sister Who Flirts with Pretty Sisters?
Don't change from male to female! ! ! Pure girl kind
HP, the Heartthrob, the Male and Female Shura Field, Please! ! !
HP-Themed All-Direction Articles, All-Directions in the True Sense
I want to read a book similar to "HP: The Slytherin Witch She Dominates Everyone".
The HP Heroine Is the White Moonlight of Everyone in Hogwarts (Otome)
Isn't There a Chinese Cultivator Who Shocked HP?
At Voldemort's level, he is considered a minor figure in the world of immortality. Who doesn't seek immortality if he cultivates immortality? Split souls to make Horcruxes? Have you seen our natural weapon? As for martial arts with a lower magic level (I'm not sure about this), apart from splitting souls, other Voldemorts are considered
Is There Any New Book from HP? Woo Woo Woo
I want to read a book like "Sorry Harry, I am the Savior". A strong woman, preferably a Slytherin, with a CP but focused on her career, with an online IQ and EQ, not stupid but sweet, thank you ٩( 'ω' )و I must have an original heroine~
I Announce That I Have Read All the High-Quality Articles in HP😎
I want to see something similar to "HP: When they blend into their respective fandoms". After four years of reading fan fiction on Tomato, I am already invincible... (At this time, a burst of strong music sounded🔥🔥🔥)
Please Provide HP Female Videos, Preferably Some Kind of Shura Field or Something😍
HP Natives, Without Time Travel or Rebirth (It's Okay If the Plot Is Good)
I want to read a book similar to "[HP] Thorn Rose".
Is There a Harry Potter Heartthrob for Both Men and Women?
I Want a Good-Looking HP, and I Want an All-Rounder.
I would like to read a book similar to "Harry Potter: I am the Deputy Head of Slytherin".
HP Has Been Passed Down from Generation to Generation and Even the Four Giants, All Heroine Otome
Detachable cp, Zhan Li, Ha Jin, Lu Xi, ggad, etc. Can be detached, Lei ggad, it is best not to describe in detail
HP, Group Favorite, Heartthrob, Cool Article, Original CP Completely Dismantled
HP All Heartthrob
Better take James
Looking for Hp Articles, Preferably Without Cp/all, so That I Can Write About Them Casually
I want to read a book similar to "HP Gentle Senior Gradually Becomes Academy White Moonlight". I'm an omnivore. As long as it's good-looking, cute, and well-written, I'll be willing to read it. Thank you very much for your recommendation. I prefer people-oriented ones, preferably those with no fixed CP.
















































































The heroine is a very optimistic and strong little girl who gets along well with Snape. And it is rare that there is no prejudice against the protagonist group because of her relationship with Snape. The heroine gets along very warmly with the Weasley family, and she does not favor Slytherin because of her good relationship with Snape. The heroine has a strong subjectivity and is clear about right and wrong. I have seen many novels that disparage Gryffindor and Dumbledore because they like Snape, but this one does not have these poisonous points at all. Dumbledore will weigh the pros and cons but is also very humane and tries his best to help the heroine to avoid the influence of Obscurus. The heart of the reader is warm. The heroine's emotional line is not abrupt (although because of his age, only Harry is in the top score). Because the author portrays it very well, it is completely understandable why he fell in love with the heroine. Come on, author
It can be said that the emotions are delicate and the writing is fluent, and the key is that the author is able to write the heroine as an emotional dull person, but when describing other people's emotions towards her, he mainly focuses on the beauty and sweetness of secret love, without the feeling of frustration that is difficult to let go, which makes readers feel very comfortable watching it. However, I would like to make a suggestion that when describing the difficulties faced by the heroine, this kind of daily flow can directly depict the picture and give people room for imagination. Now it feels to me that all the difficulties of the heroine are forced to be added, and the mental journey must be described in a sadistic way to reflect the heroine's awesomeness. However, this kind of emotion is not directly displayed, but the surface phenomenon should be written to give readers room for imagination, such as movements, expressions, changes in scenes, etc.
After reading 40 chapters, the following is my personal lightning protection. The writing is very good, but compared to group pets, in terms of actual benefits, I may prefer group pets. Suitable for those who have an emotional foundation for HP characters. Personal tastes vary.
A very good HP fanfic. The author's descriptions are fluent and the story is smooth. The writing style is on the upper side among HP fans. It is very good. The story is original and has its own thinking. The original part is good and interesting. I have read the fanfic, so I think the way of writing to make up for the regrets is very good. Moreover, it is the episode that respects the original characters the most. It is difficult not to see some highlight-seeking and belittling original characters in other hp fans of Lao Persimmon, such as sex brain, yandere OOC for all the members, the sense of superiority from God's perspective, and the plot of the so-called heroine who is actually Long Aotian. The heroine knows how to be grateful, sensible, polite, powerful, and has her own little temper. She has a strong sense of subjectivity. Her relationship with Professor Snape is very touching. The two little bitter melons turned into small melons. This is inseparable from the heroine's efforts and the two-way redemption between relatives. She and Harry are the sudden light that appears in the dark life, leading him to look to the future. The two have a green and juicy first love. Two children who were bitter in the first half of their lives walk side by side like this. Come on, first love team! I'm optimistic about you! Life in the Cottage warmed my heart when I watched it. The love that the heroine once had but lost was wrapped up in the chests of the Weasley family like an old hen. It warmed my heart when I watched it! As for the emotional line, the author just keeps the current rhythm. There is no need to be too obvious. Just like now, everyone is a good person and lets it take its course. I was almost embarrassed to death after reading the forced sweet pet OOC article in Lao Persimmon in the past two days. The author has both story and emotional line. It is very well written! Come on! I will keep watching! 💖 It turns out that the rating has not been opened yet. After a little while, if I perform stably, this article will be guaranteed to have a score of 9 or above. I found out that the rating has not yet been opened. Sometimes, if you pay too much attention to the rating, you will lose some good articles🥺
It's good-looking, I like the heroine, she's super smart and cute, and the interactions with Snape, Molly, Ginny and the male protagonists are also very natural, suitable for the age, and there is no sense of violation. It doesn't feel like 11 or 20 years old, especially the Geminis. It's not like many fans who are too boundaryless and manipulative. The characters are well grasped.
It's really beautiful. I hope the author can add Xiao Duo, because I love male ghosts [Adoration]
Leola is a very cute Obscurial The plot line moves very quickly. Leola is also very smart and hard-working. Her strange talent + photographic memory + great strength make Leola both civil and military. It is probably because of Snape that I dislike Leola less and less when she is with the trio. No matter who Leola is with, the plot line is always interesting, but once she is with three people, there seems to be a film separating Leola, which makes me feel very sad... The family line between Snape and Snape is very interesting, which makes me read this article.
I don't know, it's just beautiful. It's just wonderful, flowing, ups and downs, exciting, lifelike, you can't stop, the meaning is not exhausted, the aftertaste is endless, every word is fascinating, fascinating, vivid, sincere, touching, and you can't get tired of it. It can be called a masterpiece, the writing is sweeping, the literary talent is brilliant, the exquisiteness is exquisite, the details are thorough, the wood is three points deep, the case is amazing, hearty, touching, refreshing, the literary talent is flying, wonderful, the plot is compact, the layout is exquisite, the depiction is subtle, it is vivid on the paper, soul-stirring, stunning, the writing is fluent, and the words are fluent. The writing is beautiful, the conception is ingenious, the context is clear, the heart is touching, the charm is long, the whole thing is coherent, the writing is full of wind, the literary thoughts are flowing, the writing is brilliant, beautiful, gripping, far-reaching, thought-provoking, proficient, reaching the pinnacle, superb, unparalleled, unique, wonderful, It is gripping, soul-stirring, elegant and graceful, the chapters are colorful, every word is precious, every sentence is a classic, each chapter is amazing, and it can penetrate the back of the paper. It is full of emotions and words, and the voice is full of emotion. You are immersed in the scene, your heart is surging, your soul is haunted, you can't put it down, linger on, and have endless aftertaste. You will never tire of reading it a hundred times, and you will be amazed by it. It is a masterpiece of the world!
Super good fanfic! I really like little lions like the heroine who are full of vitality, bushi, and passionate. Moreover, the character descriptions in it are very consistent with the original work, and they don't look awkward like some fan fiction. And I think the setting of the heroine's identity is very novel. I really like the cute little pointed tail. I also really enjoyed watching the interaction between the heroine and the Sri Lankan teacher. This faint sense of warmth really gave me a comfortable feeling of being soaked in the sun. After a tiring day, this kind of writing is what I should read. It's really healing. Super invincible special recommendation!
I like the character of the heroine very much. Wood is good and wood is great. I love watching this kind of plot where everyone loves wood. The author handles the details well and controls the character very well [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss]
I'm an excavator and I'm going to work: Wow, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely.
It's good to watch, I didn't think it was OOC, and the plot is well written. No clues at all. I like the heroine character very much.
🤔Personally speaking, this book is one of the better written ones among the fanfics I have read. The character of the heroine is well portrayed. The wood is good and I like this kind of wood😋. The setting of the heartthrob is also well written by the author. The only bad thing is that the timeline is a bit too long. It may be a bit boring if you read it later, but it is undeniable that this is a good book.
I like it, I don't know how to express it, so I liked all the comments in the author's post (what an inexplicable way of expression) [Sending my heart]
Personally, I think it's very good-looking. I recommend everyone to join in. I'm very close to Professor Snape.
The author writes very well. Leola is a very good girl. Whether it is the family relationship with Snape, the mutual redemption of the two lost relatives, the friendship with the girls, and the love with the male guests, they are all very good. Come on, come on, look forward to the next development.
She's so beautiful. I'm going to fall in love with her. Otherwise, she would be a heartthrob. She has a personality like the little sun.
It's good-looking, good-looking, and a very new angle. It's very comfortable to read, not exaggerated, and the emotions are expressed very naturally. The only shortcoming is that it's too short, so please do it✊Update soon
The structure is clear and made me linger while reading it. The heroine is a blockhead, which made me laugh to death. Others were chasing the heroine crazily, but the heroine always thought they wanted to be friends with her.
The heroine has a very good personality, and many of the self-made plots are very novel and interesting, such as meeting Quirrell by chance and helping the Weasley family grow fresh vegetables. The teachings are very close to the original work, the characters in the original work are not OOC, and the writing is excellent
I won't say much else, this one is super nice.
I got greedy and caught up with the big army.
Good-looking but boring and not attractive enough
Give me a very warm feeling
The writing is exquisite, and a new character (protagonist) is created alone. Although the first part is not particularly good (Chapter 1), the second part is very good.
Nice! Cute and warm, the emotions are rendered delicately, and it comes naturally.
It's good to watch. It's tied with the boss. I'll save it on the bookshelf.
Highly recommended. The writing is very good and very logical. It's very comfortable to read. Lots of obscure facts about Harry Potter. The character portrayal is also very good. Natural straight balls are so delicious! ! ! ! ! !
Nice! The writing is good and the plot is smooth. Little Bitter Melon should do well.
I really like the writing style of this book. My sister is like a little sunshine, and she is obviously a little bitter gourd, but she is so cute.