Harry Potter: Hogwarts' Beloved Student

The heroine is a very optimistic and strong little girl who gets along well with Snape. And it is rare that there is no prejudice against the protagonist group because of her relationship with Snape. The heroine gets along very warmly with the Weasley family, and she does not favor Slytherin because of her good relationship with Snape. The heroine has a strong subjectivity and is clear about right and wrong. I have seen many novels that disparage Gryffindor and Dumbledore because they like Snape, but this one does not have these poisonous points at all. Dumbledore will weigh the pros and cons but is also very humane and tries his best to help the heroine to avoid the influence of Obscurus. The heart of the reader is warm. The heroine's emotional line is not abrupt (although because of his age, only Harry is in the top score). Because the author portrays it very well, it is completely understandable why he fell in love with the heroine. Come on, author

It can be said that the emotions are delicate and the writing is fluent, and the key is that the author is able to write the heroine as an emotional dull person, but when describing other people's emotions towards her, he mainly focuses on the beauty and sweetness of secret love, without the feeling of frustration that is difficult to let go, which makes readers feel very comfortable watching it. However, I would like to make a suggestion that when describing the difficulties faced by the heroine, this kind of daily flow can directly depict the picture and give people room for imagination. Now it feels to me that all the difficulties of the heroine are forced to be added, and the mental journey must be described in a sadistic way to reflect the heroine's awesomeness. However, this kind of emotion is not directly displayed, but the surface phenomenon should be written to give readers room for imagination, such as movements, expressions, changes in scenes, etc.

After reading 40 chapters, the following is my personal lightning protection. The writing is very good, but compared to group pets, in terms of actual benefits, I may prefer group pets. Suitable for those who have an emotional foundation for HP characters. Personal tastes vary.

A very good HP fanfic. The author's descriptions are fluent and the story is smooth. The writing style is on the upper side among HP fans. It is very good. The story is original and has its own thinking. The original part is good and interesting. I have read the fanfic, so I think the way of writing to make up for the regrets is very good. Moreover, it is the episode that respects the original characters the most. It is difficult not to see some highlight-seeking and belittling original characters in other hp fans of Lao Persimmon, such as sex brain, yandere OOC for all the members, the sense of superiority from God's perspective, and the plot of the so-called heroine who is actually Long Aotian. The heroine knows how to be grateful, sensible, polite, powerful, and has her own little temper. She has a strong sense of subjectivity. Her relationship with Professor Snape is very touching. The two little bitter melons turned into small melons. This is inseparable from the heroine's efforts and the two-way redemption between relatives. She and Harry are the sudden light that appears in the dark life, leading him to look to the future. The two have a green and juicy first love. Two children who were bitter in the first half of their lives walk side by side like this. Come on, first love team! I'm optimistic about you! Life in the Cottage warmed my heart when I watched it. The love that the heroine once had but lost was wrapped up in the chests of the Weasley family like an old hen. It warmed my heart when I watched it! As for the emotional line, the author just keeps the current rhythm. There is no need to be too obvious. Just like now, everyone is a good person and lets it take its course. I was almost embarrassed to death after reading the forced sweet pet OOC article in Lao Persimmon in the past two days. The author has both story and emotional line. It is very well written! Come on! I will keep watching! 💖 It turns out that the rating has not been opened yet. After a little while, if I perform stably, this article will be guaranteed to have a score of 9 or above. I found out that the rating has not yet been opened. Sometimes, if you pay too much attention to the rating, you will lose some good articles🥺

It's good-looking, I like the heroine, she's super smart and cute, and the interactions with Snape, Molly, Ginny and the male protagonists are also very natural, suitable for the age, and there is no sense of violation. It doesn't feel like 11 or 20 years old, especially the Geminis. It's not like many fans who are too boundaryless and manipulative. The characters are well grasped.

Leola is a very cute Obscurial The plot line moves very quickly. Leola is also very smart and hard-working. Her strange talent + photographic memory + great strength make Leola both civil and military. It is probably because of Snape that I dislike Leola less and less when she is with the trio. No matter who Leola is with, the plot line is always interesting, but once she is with three people, there seems to be a film separating Leola, which makes me feel very sad... The family line between Snape and Snape is very interesting, which makes me read this article.

It's really beautiful. I hope the author can add Xiao Duo, because I love male ghosts [Adoration]

I don't know, it's just beautiful. It's just wonderful, flowing, ups and downs, exciting, lifelike, you can't stop, the meaning is not exhausted, the aftertaste is endless, every word is fascinating, fascinating, vivid, sincere, touching, and you can't get tired of it. It can be called a masterpiece, the writing is sweeping, the literary talent is brilliant, the exquisiteness is exquisite, the details are thorough, the wood is three points deep, the case is amazing, hearty, touching, refreshing, the literary talent is flying, wonderful, the plot is compact, the layout is exquisite, the depiction is subtle, it is vivid on the paper, soul-stirring, stunning, the writing is fluent, and the words are fluent. The writing is beautiful, the conception is ingenious, the context is clear, the heart is touching, the charm is long, the whole thing is coherent, the writing is full of wind, the literary thoughts are flowing, the writing is brilliant, beautiful, gripping, far-reaching, thought-provoking, proficient, reaching the pinnacle, superb, unparalleled, unique, wonderful, It is gripping, soul-stirring, elegant and graceful, the chapters are colorful, every word is precious, every sentence is a classic, each chapter is amazing, and it can penetrate the back of the paper. It is full of emotions and words, and the voice is full of emotion. You are immersed in the scene, your heart is surging, your soul is haunted, you can't put it down, linger on, and have endless aftertaste. You will never tire of reading it a hundred times, and you will be amazed by it. It is a masterpiece of the world!

Super good fanfic! I really like little lions like the heroine who are full of vitality, bushi, and passionate. Moreover, the character descriptions in it are very consistent with the original work, and they don't look awkward like some fan fiction. And I think the setting of the heroine's identity is very novel. I really like the cute little pointed tail. I also really enjoyed watching the interaction between the heroine and the Sri Lankan teacher. This faint sense of warmth really gave me a comfortable feeling of being soaked in the sun. After a tiring day, this kind of writing is what I should read. It's really healing. Super invincible special recommendation!

I like the character of the heroine very much. Wood is good and wood is great. I love watching this kind of plot where everyone loves wood. The author handles the details well and controls the character very well [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss]