Dongjia cp. Toshiro Tomura x Tong Jiaru
Don't forget the national humiliation
Tong Jiaru often thinks of the rainy night when he met in the East Village, and then laments that fate's arrangement was so unexpected.
Dongcun once asked him a question, and he said, "Sir, if our fighting stopped at a certain moment, would everything be different?"
Tong Jiaru told him that the initial encounter was a lie and it would not end well.
When Tong Jiaru saw him off in East Village and got on the leaving train, he knew that everything should come to an end.
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I've read a lot of Dongjia's cp stories, and to be honest, this is the least OOC fanfic I've ever seen and the one that best fits the character's personality. I started watching it during the winter vacation and just finished it today. . . . Who knows how I felt when I saw the update and clicked in happily, only to end up with a mouth full of knives. . 😭
I especially can't accept be. I'm the kind of person who would never read any more if I knew be. But with this article, I would insist on reading even if I knew be in advance. Because my wife's description of the details of the characters is really meticulous and does not use too much force, making people feel bored or strange. Moreover, the plot has not changed much, and it is basically written according to the original timeline (I really hate adding a lot of original characters to fan fiction, it feels very fragmented) 😱
Yes, yes, yes, I highly recommend it, and you won't lose money if you invest in it (? But the score feels so low, why? I've seen a fanfic with a plot so embarrassing that it makes people scratch their toes, and it scored more than 9 points?)
(I haven't written such a long book review for a long time. Hehehe, encourage yourself🌹👌😊)
The Dongjia article I saw on Douyin attracted me in just one second! I particularly like the teacher's writing style! I hope that this work of the teacher can be seen by more fans who like Dongjia CP! ! [Send heart][Send heart]
It is basically consistent with the style of the original drama. It is similar to watching the full version of IF Braveheart 2. Tong Jiaru is still smart and brave. What I admire most when watching the drama is that Tong Jiaru is firmly and firmly moving towards the fight against Japan step by step.
The teacher's writing is so delicious! It's not OOC at all, it fits the character very well, the emotional development goes from shallow to deep, and the portrayal of other characters is also vivid, each with its own characteristics. After reading so many Dong family fans, I can rate it as top-notch [Adoration]
I have been crying [almost crying], there have been some changes, but after polishing, the plot is very coherent and the characters are very three-dimensional. The game between Tong Jiaru and Toshiro Higashimura is really interesting, as if it was taken from the original work. I shed a few tears and it was clearly written. I can only accept the ending of Be while crying. This is the best result [crying] @ Eat Two Bites 1 The writing is so good
It's not OOC, it fits the character very well, and the emotional line between Dongcun and Tong is also very natural. Dongcun in the book really makes people feel sad and hateful, and Tong's character is not broken, and Tong does not have those emotional lines in the original plot in the book, and Tong and Dongcun are more of a battle of wits. It is very interesting, and it is really rare to get an OOC fanfic [Like] [Love] [Love]
The author writes with great emotion. Some parts can make people laugh to death, but they are not OOC at all. Some parts are very sharp. The relationship between Lao Zhang and Red Rose, the dilemma of loyalty and filial piety between Ouyang and his son. The characters in this book are most in line with my idea of Dongcun and Tong Jiaru. I hope it will be updated soon [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]
What the teacher wrote is really, really beautiful! The Dongcun in it is not OOC at all, and the plot is also very good. Dongcun is entangled with Tong Jiaru like this. It has the atmosphere of the original drama. The teacher also wrote the plot with the original sentences deleted. I am very excited. The love and hatred between them are so beautiful. I am very much looking forward to the next plot [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
Immortal product! Teacher, among all the fanfics, you are the one that suits me best. Both the characters and the plot are the most consistent with the original plot. You can develop the character story without affecting the development of the original drama and the image of the characters! Teacher, how can you be so great! ! ! Teacher, you have worked hard. Please keep it up and keep feeding me! ! ! Ah, teacher, you are really great! ! !
This book is very well written, and it provides a detailed analysis of some of the unreasonable aspects of Cun Cun in the play and his feelings towards his husband. I won't say anything more, teacher, I will always follow you!
It is in line with my imagination of the owner. It fits very well. The ending is hard to accept but it is the most perfect for everyone [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] It's great and beautiful. I finished it in one breath [shy][shy][shy][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving] ] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]
It's so beautiful. Author, please keep this pace and remember to update more often. Sweet he, okay! ! ! ! !
Super well written! When I chased him to the East Village and slaughtered the entire temple, I was really shocked and felt that it was inevitable. As an invader, my conscience will be slowly eroded, and it will become inevitable to use any means. In the end, Tong Jiaru stepped in and killed Ke Fengyi. She was really strong, brave and resourceful, and super cute. Her tone of voice was also very interesting. I also like the ending that I missed. The invaders were killed by the rebels, and Tong Jiaru won the dawn of victory.
A different flavor to the modern chapter. The venomous peacock and the cute curly hair are so hilarious. I hope they will continue to produce them. The writing is great!
In troubled times, the country is in turmoil. Once you meet a close friend, you will miss him for half your life. Tong Jiaru used his body as a scholar to uphold the character of his family and country, while Toshiro Higashimura hid his sanity in the midst of the killings. They were strangers but in a rain, a cup of tea, and a rescue, they formed an inseparable bond. Their position is a wall, and their homeland is a blade. Across the sea of gunpowder and blood, they dare not get close, cannot retreat, and cannot let go. They are obviously enemies but not friends, but they reach out to each other when they are most embarrassed; they are obviously suspicious, but they are connected in a crisis. In troubled times, the body is like floating catkins, and human life is as light as dust, but the care hidden in the cold eyes and temptations is heavier than the mountains. Looking back, the mountains and rivers remain the same, but the people and things have changed. It turns out that the most touching thing is never the perfect stay together, but the understanding in the dark, the protecting each other in the crisis, and the bit of intolerance between the positions. The country remains the same, and old friends cannot be forgotten. This encounter that started on a rainy day eventually became the most difficult bond in troubled times.
Super good-looking. The teacher wrote the hatred and love between Toshiro Toshiro and Tong Jiaru very thoroughly. It is not OOC at all. It is very consistent with the characters of Toshiro Toshiro and Tong Jiaru in the drama version. Family feuds and national difficulties are ahead, the mountains and rivers are broken, and the country is in decline. They can only hide the love between their children in their hearts. It's not that they don't love, but they can't afford to love. In the face of the troubled world and the blood feud, their love seems too light and too light [crying] [crying]
The teacher wrote it well, not OOC at all. Although the ending is be, it is very realistic and touching. It vividly shows the hatred and love between the two people. Especially the last few letters, I just cried to death.
In the early part of the book, I still saw Tiantian Dongjia~ which slightly satisfied me. Later on, it went on the right track and blended with the plot of the TV series. It was painful to watch. Dongjia has this flavor. The extra episode I just watched was also very good! Very suitable for the owner!
Fried Chicken is so good, I feel like the deleted parts of the original drama are not back [almost crying]
It's so beautiful, I'm really not OOC [crying] I didn't expect that the first book I read would be the fairy tale [crying] The writing is also great. Although it made me unhappy at the end, I think this should be a more suitable ending [almost crying] I love you so much [blowing kiss]
I really feel that the author's writing is very restorative, and it is very consistent with the characters of everyone in the play. It is not OOC at all, especially the deleted scenes. I love you so much, author.
The teacher's writing is so delicious that I stayed up late to tie it! ! ! I really want to know whether the ending is he or be
I didn't think much of it at first, I just felt it fit them very well, but until I saw that extra story, those letters [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
This book is really huge and beautiful! The character creation is vivid and consistent with the original work, and is not OOC at all. The author's writing style is delicate and the characters are flesh and blood. The plot is full of ups and downs (both sweet and bitter), including the supporting characters. They are also vividly portrayed. I can't help but cry when I see life disappear 😭 Highly recommended! ! !
The character creation and plot design are all top-notch! It is a very authentic adaptation of the original work! The ending may be regretful and sad, but for the two owners, it is probably a more "decent" ending...
The two of them have a great sense of tension. They have completely different flavors in the early and late stages. Moreover, the teacher's original characters are even more lovable. They are not just tools to promote the plot. They are passionate and sincere Rose, honest and brave Lao Zhang, and innocent and kind Kyoko. I really love them [almost crying]
This is a Be story that I am very satisfied with, and it can only be Be. Many second creations have Toshiro Higashimura treason for love, which I cannot accept. Higashimura also has his beliefs, although his beliefs are wrong and narrow.
I also write some fan fiction, but not about my boss. In short, I am a very picky person... But I have to say that the author is very talented, and more importantly, interesting. He often makes you laugh, laugh again and again, and laugh out loud. Good book.
It's well written, and it's not OOC at all. I don't have any love-mindedness, and I'm in love with wife literature. Goddess, you are so awesome!
I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and the reviews are overwhelming. Mr. Tomura and Mr. Kazuo fit the characters in the play very well. Their identities and positions are inherently different. I can like you or love you, but between home countries, I choose my own country and have my own beliefs. Whether the other party will block each other's way in the future, they will not be lenient; the author's psychological description is very delicate, and combined with the deletion of the original TV series on the Internet, he has a very good portrayal, which is strongly amway [send heart][send heart][send heart]
A very good article. It is rare that it fits the character of Dongcun very well. It basically does not deviate from the plot. Both of them are loyal to their country. Dongcun is a complete bad guy. Be is the most perfect ending.
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😊❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ I've read a lot of Dongjia's cp stories, and to be honest, this is the least OOC fanfic I've ever seen and the one that best fits the character's personality. I started watching it during the winter vacation and just finished it today. . . . Who knows how I felt when I saw the update and clicked in happily, only to end up with a mouth full of knives. . 😭 I especially can't accept be. I'm the kind of person who would never read any more if I knew be. But with this article, I would insist on reading even if I knew be in advance. Because my wife's description of the details of the characters is really meticulous and does not use too much force, making people feel bored or strange. Moreover, the plot has not changed much, and it is basically written according to the original timeline (I really hate adding a lot of original characters to fan fiction, it feels very fragmented) 😱 Yes, yes, yes, I highly recommend it, and you won't lose money if you invest in it (? But the score feels so low, why? I've seen a fanfic with a plot so embarrassing that it makes people scratch their toes, and it scored more than 9 points?) (I haven't written such a long book review for a long time. Hehehe, encourage yourself🌹👌😊)
The Dongjia article I saw on Douyin attracted me in just one second! I particularly like the teacher's writing style! I hope that this work of the teacher can be seen by more fans who like Dongjia CP! ! [Send heart][Send heart]
It is basically consistent with the style of the original drama. It is similar to watching the full version of IF Braveheart 2. Tong Jiaru is still smart and brave. What I admire most when watching the drama is that Tong Jiaru is firmly and firmly moving towards the fight against Japan step by step.
The teacher's writing is so delicious! It's not OOC at all, it fits the character very well, the emotional development goes from shallow to deep, and the portrayal of other characters is also vivid, each with its own characteristics. After reading so many Dong family fans, I can rate it as top-notch [Adoration]
I have been crying [almost crying], there have been some changes, but after polishing, the plot is very coherent and the characters are very three-dimensional. The game between Tong Jiaru and Toshiro Higashimura is really interesting, as if it was taken from the original work. I shed a few tears and it was clearly written. I can only accept the ending of Be while crying. This is the best result [crying] @ Eat Two Bites 1 The writing is so good
It's not OOC, it fits the character very well, and the emotional line between Dongcun and Tong is also very natural. Dongcun in the book really makes people feel sad and hateful, and Tong's character is not broken, and Tong does not have those emotional lines in the original plot in the book, and Tong and Dongcun are more of a battle of wits. It is very interesting, and it is really rare to get an OOC fanfic [Like] [Love] [Love]
The author writes with great emotion. Some parts can make people laugh to death, but they are not OOC at all. Some parts are very sharp. The relationship between Lao Zhang and Red Rose, the dilemma of loyalty and filial piety between Ouyang and his son. The characters in this book are most in line with my idea of Dongcun and Tong Jiaru. I hope it will be updated soon [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]
What the teacher wrote is really, really beautiful! The Dongcun in it is not OOC at all, and the plot is also very good. Dongcun is entangled with Tong Jiaru like this. It has the atmosphere of the original drama. The teacher also wrote the plot with the original sentences deleted. I am very excited. The love and hatred between them are so beautiful. I am very much looking forward to the next plot [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
Immortal product! Teacher, among all the fanfics, you are the one that suits me best. Both the characters and the plot are the most consistent with the original plot. You can develop the character story without affecting the development of the original drama and the image of the characters! Teacher, how can you be so great! ! ! Teacher, you have worked hard. Please keep it up and keep feeding me! ! ! Ah, teacher, you are really great! ! !
This book is very well written, and it provides a detailed analysis of some of the unreasonable aspects of Cun Cun in the play and his feelings towards his husband. I won't say anything more, teacher, I will always follow you!
It is in line with my imagination of the owner. It fits very well. The ending is hard to accept but it is the most perfect for everyone [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] It's great and beautiful. I finished it in one breath [shy][shy][shy][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving] ] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]
It's so beautiful. Author, please keep this pace and remember to update more often. Sweet he, okay! ! ! ! !
Super well written! When I chased him to the East Village and slaughtered the entire temple, I was really shocked and felt that it was inevitable. As an invader, my conscience will be slowly eroded, and it will become inevitable to use any means. In the end, Tong Jiaru stepped in and killed Ke Fengyi. She was really strong, brave and resourceful, and super cute. Her tone of voice was also very interesting. I also like the ending that I missed. The invaders were killed by the rebels, and Tong Jiaru won the dawn of victory. A different flavor to the modern chapter. The venomous peacock and the cute curly hair are so hilarious. I hope they will continue to produce them. The writing is great!
In troubled times, the country is in turmoil. Once you meet a close friend, you will miss him for half your life. Tong Jiaru used his body as a scholar to uphold the character of his family and country, while Toshiro Higashimura hid his sanity in the midst of the killings. They were strangers but in a rain, a cup of tea, and a rescue, they formed an inseparable bond. Their position is a wall, and their homeland is a blade. Across the sea of gunpowder and blood, they dare not get close, cannot retreat, and cannot let go. They are obviously enemies but not friends, but they reach out to each other when they are most embarrassed; they are obviously suspicious, but they are connected in a crisis. In troubled times, the body is like floating catkins, and human life is as light as dust, but the care hidden in the cold eyes and temptations is heavier than the mountains. Looking back, the mountains and rivers remain the same, but the people and things have changed. It turns out that the most touching thing is never the perfect stay together, but the understanding in the dark, the protecting each other in the crisis, and the bit of intolerance between the positions. The country remains the same, and old friends cannot be forgotten. This encounter that started on a rainy day eventually became the most difficult bond in troubled times.
Super good-looking. The teacher wrote the hatred and love between Toshiro Toshiro and Tong Jiaru very thoroughly. It is not OOC at all. It is very consistent with the characters of Toshiro Toshiro and Tong Jiaru in the drama version. Family feuds and national difficulties are ahead, the mountains and rivers are broken, and the country is in decline. They can only hide the love between their children in their hearts. It's not that they don't love, but they can't afford to love. In the face of the troubled world and the blood feud, their love seems too light and too light [crying] [crying]
The teacher wrote it well, not OOC at all. Although the ending is be, it is very realistic and touching. It vividly shows the hatred and love between the two people. Especially the last few letters, I just cried to death.
In the early part of the book, I still saw Tiantian Dongjia~ which slightly satisfied me. Later on, it went on the right track and blended with the plot of the TV series. It was painful to watch. Dongjia has this flavor. The extra episode I just watched was also very good! Very suitable for the owner!
Fried Chicken is so good, I feel like the deleted parts of the original drama are not back [almost crying]
It's so beautiful, I'm really not OOC [crying] I didn't expect that the first book I read would be the fairy tale [crying] The writing is also great. Although it made me unhappy at the end, I think this should be a more suitable ending [almost crying] I love you so much [blowing kiss]
I really feel that the author's writing is very restorative, and it is very consistent with the characters of everyone in the play. It is not OOC at all, especially the deleted scenes. I love you so much, author.
The teacher's writing is so delicious that I stayed up late to tie it! ! ! I really want to know whether the ending is he or be
I didn't think much of it at first, I just felt it fit them very well, but until I saw that extra story, those letters [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
This book is really huge and beautiful! The character creation is vivid and consistent with the original work, and is not OOC at all. The author's writing style is delicate and the characters are flesh and blood. The plot is full of ups and downs (both sweet and bitter), including the supporting characters. They are also vividly portrayed. I can't help but cry when I see life disappear 😭 Highly recommended! ! !
The character creation and plot design are all top-notch! It is a very authentic adaptation of the original work! The ending may be regretful and sad, but for the two owners, it is probably a more "decent" ending...
The two of them have a great sense of tension. They have completely different flavors in the early and late stages. Moreover, the teacher's original characters are even more lovable. They are not just tools to promote the plot. They are passionate and sincere Rose, honest and brave Lao Zhang, and innocent and kind Kyoko. I really love them [almost crying]
This is a Be story that I am very satisfied with, and it can only be Be. Many second creations have Toshiro Higashimura treason for love, which I cannot accept. Higashimura also has his beliefs, although his beliefs are wrong and narrow.
I also write some fan fiction, but not about my boss. In short, I am a very picky person... But I have to say that the author is very talented, and more importantly, interesting. He often makes you laugh, laugh again and again, and laugh out loud. Good book.
It's well written, and it's not OOC at all. I don't have any love-mindedness, and I'm in love with wife literature. Goddess, you are so awesome!
I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and the reviews are overwhelming. Mr. Tomura and Mr. Kazuo fit the characters in the play very well. Their identities and positions are inherently different. I can like you or love you, but between home countries, I choose my own country and have my own beliefs. Whether the other party will block each other's way in the future, they will not be lenient; the author's psychological description is very delicate, and combined with the deletion of the original TV series on the Internet, he has a very good portrayal, which is strongly amway [send heart][send heart][send heart]
A very good article. It is rare that it fits the character of Dongcun very well. It basically does not deviate from the plot. Both of them are loyal to their country. Dongcun is a complete bad guy. Be is the most perfect ending.