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This book lacks many verbs. For example, after swearing to the Dao, there should be sounds such as "boom" after the Dao responds, and then some feelings, wonders, shocks, etc. Of some innate creatures, but this book does not have these. It is just that after the oath is completed, the Dao brings merit, and then these creatures look sideways and pass it by in one stroke. It lacks agility and vividness! Also, in Chapter 9, Dao Dao takes action. After reading this chapter, I was just confused. It caught me off guard and I was at a loss what to do! Hongjun directly transformed into the rules of heaven and earth and turned into a spiritual weapon! Rahu directly gave birth to the Demon Realm in advance! This would make the book lack a lot of excitement! Also, this book is about how all living beings can practice the law and realize the Hunyuan Daluo. It is not like other novels [Heaven does not allow living beings to steal His authority and principles, and some can only rely on their souls to become saints]! But this book gave me a good feeling. It is a novel about the development of the ancient times. Although it is not as exciting as the book "Planting Trees in the Ancient Times", it is still okay, so I will give it four stars and forget about five stars. I finally found out what that strange feeling is. This book is written between the third person and the first person, but not the second person. It is like three narrative methods side by side, the first and the third are suddenly linked together. This book is this kind of in-between narrative technique. The protagonist has a lot of psychological activities, and others don't have much psychological activities at all. Even if they do, they are describing other people's psychological activities from the perspective of the protagonist! No wonder I always feel weird, so it's like this! The plot of this book is good to read, but I don't really like the narrative technique, and the writing is okay.

So far, it looks pretty good. Don't ever have a female protagonist, just practice spirituality well. Hope there will be more updates

A well-written leisure novel The first thing I wrote was okay, but the later part felt more and more boring.

The plot content written by the author is all YY content of the protagonist. Even the Witch Clan can see the future possibilities from the law of time, and Dao Dao will only see more and more clearly.

So far, it looks good. There are no particularly outstanding points. The setting is also good. As above, no cp is recommended.

Author, if you write according to this idea, I think it is very good, I think it is quite interesting, because I am tired of reading the normal routines. I have collected all Tomato's prehistoric articles, and they are not interesting. Also, I like the protagonist very much. He has that calm and emotional feeling. This is the protagonist in my mind. He is calm in everything he does. Just write it according to your idea, and don't add CP later. It feels inconsistent with the character, and they said it is centered on the protagonist. I think it is normal, and the world view you added is also very good. And you really have to pay attention to the record of history recorded in the Prehistoric Records. It feels like you obtained the Honghuangjian by recording history, but the problem is that I don't feel that you have made any substantial contribution.

At first glance, this book looked pretty good. During the Longhan Calamity Period, most of the innate saints did not have the ability to enter chaos and do something. Starting a fight in the primitive world can easily attract karma, so it is understandable that there are no fighting scenes. There is no deliberate attempt to darken some characters or beautify any one character. After all, most of the innate sacred things can be used to write a book. It's pretty good without treating good and evil too separately. It is quite unexpected that some new modifications to the method of enlightenment can be proposed in the early stage. However, the attention paid to Dao Dao and Tiandao was too frequent, and it seemed too deliberate. Hope it doesn't end badly.

Very good. This is the second prehistoric novel of this type that I have seen. The prehistoric world is divided into parts based on authority and divine ways. To write this type of writing, you need to master a lot of knowledge from the Shinto Taoists. I really feel good about it.

I feel like there are poison spots hidden in some places, and the magic modification is quite powerful, so I'm ready to quit.

At present, it looks pretty good and not cliché. It is constantly building up the ancient times. The logic is acceptable and the flaws are not big.

Very interesting. The conditioning is clear and has a very clear outline. Unlike most of the original prehistoric flows, having more may no longer be rigid. It's good, but the update speed is quite slow. There are not too many flaws, and they are all within a reasonable range of understanding.

It can be said to be a fine novel in Tomato. When reading it, don't compare it with other ancient novels and don't bring in the settings of other ancient novels.

A good meal, I hope it can be updated and uploaded more.

I think this book has a lot of potential I really think this book is very good and has great potential. And it's very similar to a group portrait article, not the kind of mindless and cool article. Everyone has their own personality and characteristics, and they are also very strong. Take the Nuwa in this book as an example. Although the author portrays her as a bit of a villain, the Nuwa in this book is really quite strong. But why was it blocked? Why isn't it updated? I still want to watch it. I have been waiting to watch it every day.

I think it's okay. I'm tired of watching regular prehistoric movies. It's okay to take a look at a prehistoric movie like this that can go out of its own way to kill time.

It's different from traditional and common prehistoric novels. Personally, I think it's okay. It's just that the turning points and foreshadowing in some places are a bit stiff and need to be improved.

Compared with other novels such as "Honghuangliu", it is wonderful!

The writing is okay. As far as the current writing environment of Persimmon is concerned, this book is pretty good. Besides, what else do you want to eat for free?

The ideas are quite good, but the frequent use of "No! Wait!" Somewhat affects the perception. Come on, author He also said that he was looking for the Spirit Bee Spirit Butterfly, but he has not found it even though he has been looking for it for a long time.

Excellent! Come on, author!

It's pretty good, but it's a bit bland, and the various guesses are too certain.

Although many places are very abstract and inexplicable. But there's nothing tomatoes can do about it. Just eat it, some ideas are pretty good

Non-traditional prehistoric times, changed beyond recognition, alternative prehistoric times [eating melon]

It's really good-looking, with detailed content and a clear development path.

It's not the same old thing, it's very nice.

Good-looking, love to see lots of hair

It looks pretty smooth.

I like this style very much

The novel is well written.

Come on, come on, come on