Damn It, Why Did the Fairies I Caused Disaster Come True?

After seeing it, my sister-in-law is very comfortable. The merchant came to install it in person. The service is really good. It is comfortable to use and well-dressed. It melts in the mouth and is not irritating when washed. Children especially like to eat it and the elderly can also use it. It is very loose and does not pill at all. It is also very clean after washing. The children especially like to eat it. The shape is very good, the size is standard, the makeup does not stick to the cup and lasts a long time. After washing, it is very smooth and the hair is not oily. It is stress-free for sensitive skin. It feels comfortable to hold and does not hurt the gums. I add a few drops every time I cook. The quality is very good. It is consistent with the seller's description. It does not cover my feet. It is also very clean. The foam is very dense. I bought five packs. Moreover, this mobile phone case is cheap and good-looking, so I take two tablets every night. Within a week, my son said that I look better.

This book is carefully written, the characters' emotions change clearly, and there is no irritation in the whole plot. As soon as the old goes out, the new comes in. Although it is a bit cliche, the portrayal of the character's environment is OK, and the relationship between the characters is handled reasonably. I just found out that it was the author of Sister Su, and I said why it looks so good [eat melon][cover face]

Chestnut God is worthy of being you, a master of writing heroines! Finally, I can have a simulation stream of a beautiful heroine [Like][Like][Like]

I feel it's okay, and it's pretty good among regret stories. Although the author's writing style may not be that amazing, the writing is smooth and easy to read. Although it is a novel about a female protagonist, there is no plot to abuse the main character. Those who want to read novels will be disappointed. Unless the protagonist loses his vest, there may be [smirking] later. There are no poisonous points in the whole text. There are no big logical loopholes. Young readers can figure it out by themselves. It does not affect the reading experience. Overall, it is enjoyable to read. Certified bookworm [laughing], mainly because I have little expectations for the plot behind it. I haven't even seen Shura Field yet. I want to see how the author can write without breaking the character. I hope the author can stick to it. Come on.

It's okay, but the second simulation is not over yet from Chapter 66 to Chapter 139, which takes up more than half of the book, and it feels like there are at least twenty chapters left. Isn't it a bit too long? I suggest you write more about reality. The first female protagonist has not found a male protagonist yet. I'm really out of ideas. This second simulation is longer than the old lady's foot wrap.

I can only say that it is indeed the book of the female ancestor [laughing evilly]. I didn't realize it at first, but after reading the comment section, I found out that it is the ancestor of the female ancestor returning for a limited time [laughing evilly]. And compared to the previous books, this one is more biased towards male characters. Although the protagonist in the previous books has always been in control, it all relies on acting skills. The protagonist still needs to be pretentious to achieve his goal. Although it is much better than those where the protagonist is abused every day, it still has a bit of a female character. The protagonist of this simulation finally has some strength in the simulation, and it is not easy [face covering]. But it felt like it was a bit lacking in emotion. It didn't feel as realistic as the previous book "My Wife is the Regent" [Thinking]. In that book, I knew the protagonist was played by a real person but was severely stabbed. I was deceived by the author and made me shed a lot of tears [I almost cried]. I have another question, @ Author bacteria, why is your personal page different from ours? From what I have seen so far, whether it is a reader or an author, you are the only one who is different. What is the situation [what]

Personally, I think it's good. There's no twisty plot. The first life simulation has a total of 40 chapters and the content is pretty good. However, I personally hope that there will be more interactions such as kissing on the mouth in the simulated world. For example, when the male protagonist is lying in Yuxia's arms at the end of the first life, he can take the initiative to kiss Yuxia before dying. (Of course, this is my personal opinion, the author can just think of what he thinks) In reality, the male protagonist has a cinnabar mole that seems to be unavailable in the early stage, so I hope there will be more interaction in other aspects. [Blowing kiss] The second simulation was a bit too long. It currently has 132 chapters. It looks like I can write at least 20 more chapters. The plot development is a bit slow. Moreover, I am a bit uncomfortable with the male protagonist's behavior of deliberately trying to misunderstand the other party. It would be better to do the simulation for the first time simply and neatly. Although it is a world dominated by women, you, the male protagonist, are not originally from this world. This behavior seems too pretentious. It is just to make the female protagonist feel guilty later, and it is deliberately made into sadomasochism.

I have read more than 200 chapters. Overall, it is good. There are some poisonous points. It depends on whether you can accept it. The description of the characters in the simulation is relatively detailed. You can give it a try, but I feel that after watching the simulation for a long time, I am looking forward to the protagonists in the simulation coming to find the male protagonist. It doesn't matter what the reality is.

If my brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother bothering readers. It seems that the readers are being sentimental. My brother is weak and he just needs to rest more. It is the readers who are urging him so much. Injuring his body also makes people feel sorry for him. It is a pity that he pities his brother. Whether he is injured or not, what does it have to do with the readers? Readers are eager for my brother to update 10 chapters a day, but I am different from readers. My brother can send the manuscript and outline to others, and let others help him check the quality and find typos. [Shy]

It's good to watch, but the second simulation is too long. From January to April now, more than a hundred chapters have not yet ended. I almost forgot about the protagonist's real-world wife and the one he met in his dream. What's your name? I forgot to tell you the truth... I followed it for another four months, basically reading one chapter every day. Compared to the second simulation, the third simulation provided an operation that allowed me to return to reality. However, returning only meant a few words of conversation with "Mom", asking how my body was, and nothing else. After following it for a long time, it became a bit unclear which is the main plot and which is the branch plot, and it is difficult to distinguish between simulation and reality. At the beginning, he said that he was going to save his wife in reality, but now in the simulation, he is getting married and having a baby, and he feels like he is not happy anymore. But there is still some progress, at least now it is mentioned that the protagonist occasionally studies some spells for backup. Rather than like before, at the critical moment, he suddenly said that the protagonist had studied a certain spell before, and it came in handy, which was not mentioned before. It's okay to mention this now. In addition, I hope that the ending of this third simulation will not be as bad as the second simulation. Zi Huan in the second simulation was really disgusting to watch, and at the end, some kind of empress suddenly appeared, and she even bet on the fate of the country at the sight of it. It was a bit fake. Now that the protagonists of the third simulation are all together, and they are also accumulating capital to fight the boss, there shouldn't be another sudden addition of a certain sect leader coming to join the battle, and another wave of deus ex machina, right?

The second simulation was too long [Petrochemical]

I read it with another account, so I don't have much time to read this account, but I can feel that the author writes very carefully. In an environment where it is easy to encounter AI writing, the author really writes with great care, and the characters are very distinct. I love it.

Yes, in fact, the author has so carefully written so many stories and it feels like he has put so much thought into them that he could open several books. Each trial is taken out separately and the follow-up to which one is specifically selected is very exciting. The two current simulations are very innovative. The author writes well and has good writing skills. However, because he is too careful, the simulation takes a bit long and the pace is a bit slow. Those who can accept it will be very happy. I hope the author can continue to persevere and this book can also achieve good results.

The pace is brisk and the simulation experience blends into reality. There are multiple female protagonists, and each one is destined to be a female protagonist with the help of the male protagonist's perfect appearance and character. The details and emotional descriptions are in place to ensure that the only binding is a sadomasochism plot. But the level of control is pretty good, and overall it's pretty good.

It seems to be okay so far, not too toxic (mainly because the dream in Chapters 50 and 60 is too toxic), and some of the simulations are too heavy and long. However, this is indeed a common problem with simulation writing. If it is long, it will forget the priority, and if it is short, it will feel awkward and abrupt. Generally speaking, the quality is not high but it is watchable. It is considered mid-to-high-end in Tomato.

Brother, give me one more chapter, I'm dying, please Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I can't stand it anymore. Brother, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe Brother, please Brother, just give me one more chapter, just one more chapter. Brother, I will never touch you again, please, brother, really Brother, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again. Brother, I really can't bear it anymore. Please give me another chapter. Brother, I'm dying Brother, please, brother. Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me Brother, I feel like my whole body is shaking Brother, I can't breathe Brother, please. Brother, give me one more chapter, I'm dying, please Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I can't stand it anymore. Brother, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe Brother, please Author, please read with me: In the name of the world I write, I solemnly swear: From now on, inspiration continues and updates continue! I can't follow the drama! I can't travel! I can't get sick! There will be no games! There will be no hydrology! There will be no slack! Strict self-discipline, every second counts! Face difficulties and persevere! Pursue excellence and create legends! Use keys as plows and keep plowing! Taking pleasure in coding can make steel become steel! Readers are looking forward to it! Worthy of passionate youth! Worthy of the vast future! As a creator, I remember deeply: I was born for stories! The keyboard is my sword! The screen is my battlefield! I am the lone warrior of late night fluorescence! I am the watchman of the Great Wall of Internet Literature! I willingly give the fire of my soul, Burning between the square keyboard—— The story is endless and the updates are endless! The master's wonderful pen has captured the soul, making people look at the empty update page without thinking about food and drink, and the soul is like a flower on a branch. What a cruel heart! Could it be that he wants to imitate that Immortal Si Wen, who ended up with half a volume of heavenly book? If it's a little later, the soul in this room will dry up its tears, and the red will disappear and the fragrance will fade away! Please give me some chapters to extend your life~[Shy]

It's so beautiful [crying] I stayed up late and watched it for a long time. I finished it in one go. Please continue to update [crying]

Mmmmmmmmm Well, well, well, well, well, well, well, that's pretty good.

I think it's quite good. I don't know why the score is so low. The setting of the male protagonist is quite to my liking. There is no Virgin, and it doesn't completely abandon emotions like some books (personally think that is too fake). The plot is also not cliché. The Xu Jiaorong chapter and the Zi Huan chapter I have seen so far do not give me the same feeling. Readers who have not read The Heroine can first read the first three chapters to observe whether the plot setting is to their liking. The author should update it soon, it's just like Sister Su back in the day [laughing]

The author shook her dazzling red hair, and the lace skirt rose in a small arc with her jumping steps. As the only daughter in the family, she has known since she was a child how to use a sweet smile to disarm people - and then crush their expectations. For example, right now, she was blocking the corner of the corridor, staring up at the transfer student who was a head taller than her. "Hey, you stepped on my shadow." She wrinkled her nose deliberately and tapped the ground with her finger, "Apologise." The boy looked down with a confused look, then looked at her: "The shadow... Isn't it on the ground?" "So I said you stepped on it." The author suddenly stood on tiptoes and came close to his chin, with a cunning light shining in her red eyes. "The eldest lady's shadow is very precious, can you afford to pay for it?" She giggled, took out a hard candy wrapped in colorful candy wrapper from her pocket, and stuffed it into his palm without any explanation. "Here, make an apology - accept my candy, and you will be my toy from now on." The boy wanted to refuse, but she had already turned around and ran away. She turned back and winked at him: "Don't think about throwing it away, I will know. At the same time tomorrow, I want to see you eat it and tell me the taste." She licked her lips, "If you lie... Hum, I have plenty of ways to make you cry." The setting sun stretched her shadow very long, and the boy stood there, with the candy in his palm still warm. The author has already walked away humming the song, thinking about how to do better tomorrow - after all, the more panicked the prey, the more interesting the hunt will be. The brackets will be deleted for two cents [laughing]

Top one!!! I urgently call upon you to write and start a new chapter! The soul of literature has returned, don't stay in a foreign country! When the soul comes back, it waves its brush to break through the dust net and flows down the river of stars. The soul comes back, and its strange thoughts open up all things, so that the idiot will no longer be heartbroken. During the day, I look forward to it, my eyes are in the clouds, and every word is heart-wrenching; at night, I think about it, my dreams are full of flowers, and my heart is filled with panic. Waiting for it, coming and going in the morning and evening, only adds to the confusion; looking forward to it again, the passion is as hot as soup, and the intention cannot be forgotten. Everyone says that good writing can last a long time; I just sigh, the late update is the most heartbreaking. I hope that when you pick up your pen, your spirit will be high, your ink will fall like a waterfall, and your writing will flow like a river. It will flow thousands of miles and continue to be brilliant! Live up to your crazy thoughts, live up to your watchfulness, The soul of the pen is immortal and its fragrance will last forever! @

I don't want to give you a low score. My sincere evaluation is that it's good-looking. Book friends, you can check out the author's other novels. Anyway, when I read Tomatoes, I almost cried because of Sister Su's knife. Just don't take it too seriously. It's good as long as it's good-looking.

It's really good. It's a clear improvement compared to the previous works. I love watching it more and more. The emotional foreshadowing is much better than before. [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] I love you, Su Zi, and I hope the subsequent works will get better and better.

It's so good that I stayed up late to finish reading it. I will follow up and comment on it. I hope the author can learn from it. This is just my personal opinion. The author arrived. I feel that you wrote the content in the simulation too frequently, resulting in not many chapters in reality, and there is a slight bug. The first destiny heroine has tracked the reincarnation aura of the protagonist at the beginning of the second simulation. According to this world view, the heroine in the first simulation should be extremely powerful, and locking the male protagonist's position should be easy. But I have now seen the third simulation, no matter it is the first time , there was no news at all before and after the second simulation, as if the female protagonist in the first and second simulations didn't care about the male protagonist at all. In addition, because of my strong personal introduction ability, I easily brought in the male protagonist. I also found a big bug. Logically speaking, if the male protagonist can become a fifth-level monk at the level of god in the second simulation, his understanding should be very terrifying, which means that normally, he should already know that the simulation is actually reality. The world, but he still regards it as a game, a tool to improve his own strength. I feel that this is very inconsistent with the character of the male protagonist. In addition, maybe because I put myself into the situation of the male protagonist, the images of the male protagonist and the female protagonist often appear in my mind, so I feel that the imagination is particularly unsmooth. What can I say, the character design of the first simulation of the male protagonist and the second simulation of the male protagonist are all based on gentleness. Then the third design It's also a bit too frequent. Although the author's writing style is very good, it's easy to follow me. I did feel a little heartbroken when the male protagonist died. However, if you use a set frequently, the novelty will disappear and it will be replaced by boredom. I was very happy with the first simulation. I felt a little familiar with the second simulation. By the third simulation, the male protagonist still had the same character and the same routine, and it felt a bit boring. I hope the author can improve it a lot. The above is just my personal opinion.

Remaining blood is just the protagonist's daily life The second paragraph of simulation is too long, and the further it goes, the more deformed it becomes, making it feel like the characters in it no longer look like one person. Also, the protagonist doesn't look like a man, and the further you go, the less he looks like him. The third simulation came and the result was that none of the characters in the simulation had met, and they agreed to get married and were saved. After two simulations, did you feel better in the real world? Did you lose everything? Did you get saved by the simulated character? There was no introduction fraud at all.

The second simulation was too long. You have to suppress your desires first. At the beginning, you pressured the protagonist for more than 100 pictures. I really can't pursue it any longer, so I say goodbye.

I would like to give the author a suggestion. You can add a heroine to the name, because there are not many readers of this type of book. Most people who want to read it directly search for a heroine. However, it is difficult to find this book directly. I still found it by looking at the viewing history. This book is one of the best among female heroes. Come on, author.

It was a very boring night. As usual, I was looking for gold on tomatoes, but nothing seemed to suit my taste. But you, my friend! You are a real hero. I thought I would just go to bed after reading it. I have to go to class tomorrow, and the more I read, the more I read. At that time, you were only reading Chapter 60. I stayed up late to read them all. The next day, I was late as expected, and then I was called to the office. Come on, author, I support you!

໒꒰ྀི꒰ྀིっ˕ -｡꒱ྀི꒱ྀི১ Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Standing at thirty: It means updating thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to hear, including readers. When you are seventy, do what you want and don't go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters in a day, you can do whatever you want! DSo update quickly, my wife [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

To write about a heroine, it has to be Sister Li. She is still very beautiful.