Warhammer 40K: in the Name of the Father

The writing is excellent and in line with the history and major events of the Warhammer worldview. The author is not a Hammer, or at least has written many official novels/plots, so check the information carefully. The opening scene is extremely stunning, and the angel's action of saving his heir brought me to tears; there is no brainless villain, and the male protagonist also has his own charm and IQ.

I would like to make a suggestion, I hope the plot can flow a little smoother, and don't let the whole dream happen at every turn. Live a new plot. As a reader, sometimes this connection can be a bit uncomfortable. The main storyline goes a little smoother. Let's have less inexplicable exchanges. Can we get past the main plot? There is a kind of walking where a red light suddenly comes and you will be delayed for a long time. There is no need to ponder a scene from Zhuang Zhou in Butterfly Dream. Let's just live the plot normally and not explore the soul a little bit. This is so uncomfortable.

There are relatively few people writing Warhammer novels, which is pretty good. Personally, don't criticize me.

I live up to it... Wait a minute, I'm not Angel-chan's son

So far it looks pretty good, there's nothing bad about it. Author, please keep it up and don't give up. Comment again if there are any changes later. Looks good, keep it up ()

It's quite cute, and the writing style is quite delicate [I understand][I understand]

Visit the bookstore in the early morning. Mouth teeth! This is so beautiful! Mouth teeth! Come on, author, update your mouth! Why don't you update it? I really like this theme [crying][crying]

Come on, don't break suddenly

Live up to the blood of Sanguinius

In fact, it would be better if the protagonist is a local. After all, the performance is completely different from that of a time traveler, more like a local Blood Angel?

Don't be fooled by the name, it's a rare Warhammer 40k fan book

Please update more, teacher, I can do anything. I was totally put off by the title and introduction of the book before. I didn't expect it to be so good. It's really good. Holy shit.

It's awesome, it's very good-looking, but the protagonist's character is too out of the ordinary.

How come no one sees such a beautiful Warhammer?

The writing style is good. I hope the author can keep it up and don't let the works of Dihua

The author is obviously still a novice, immature and uses a lot of AI to assist in writing. But the setting is still new and I hope it will improve in the future.

It's rare to see such interesting Warhammer novels. I hope the author will update it soon. This is the beginning and the author has to work harder for ratings and popularity.

666 Also has a reversal, which is really brain-burning and beautiful.

Warhammer is a good book worth reading

It's a high-quality product, it's a high-quality productヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

Gua, this is the mouth tooth I want to see!

Not bad, the protagonists are Linn, Aesaros, and Sanguinius.

Fighting is fun. It would be nice if I could learn more about fighting and less about daily life.

This is the best and best Warhammer novel I have ever read. The author has been missing for a month. Author, have you been drafted? Don't leave. . .

Great book, great book It is beyond ordinary readers and makes people smile. This book perfectly shows the love and responsibility of the archangel. It is full of passion, touching and passionate! The title of this book is really difficult, don't miss it just because of the title!

Good is good, needless to say, except for the update being a bit slow, everything is perfect Please update another chapter, please, as long as I can update another chapter, I will do anything😭😭😭

Very nice, good luck to the author

So far so good. Come on

Well written and highly recommended

It does look pretty good! ! Persistence💪