Shape Moon: Crowned Succubus Starts High Jump

The author is definitely a veteran. The writing style is very comfortable. The character of Shirou who is born in the womb is also good. I just don't know what kind of Lang he will become. The only shortcoming is that it is too short and not enough to read.

The writing is okay, I don't see any bad points. One point is deducted because the heroine does not have Mrs. Ellie. Mrs. Ellie is so annoying to me [admiration]. It's a pity that the author of this book has no magic changes and is still with Kiritsugu.

Very nice. There were a lot of holes dug in the early stage, and it can be seen that the author wanted to write a lot. So far, there are no bad points, and the writing is considered to be excellent in Tomato.

It looks good, but I disagree with Coyote's level of charm [laughs evilly]

The author knows Xingyue very well and can also understand some of the secondary designs. In terms of plot, we can also see that the author is okay. All in all, this book is in a tomato. I think it's pretty good. (◦˙▽˙◦) Come on, author!

It's okay, but it's a bit annoying to have broken iron and random things. It's completely unnecessary and I have to add it recently. I'm satisfied with it.

Great article on style, you can read it. SVIP recommendation [like] [like]

The author will work harder and it will look good from now on, without any poison.

1. Beng Tie is just a joke or foreshadowing here, not a plot, so it is still acceptable. There is no need to be harsh. After all, this book is for entertainment. 2. There is a love line and so on, but it's at the back 3. It is originally a time travel, whether it looks like Shirou or not is not important personally, and this is also a parallel universe Overall, the writing is not bad, it is very funny, and there is no poisonous logic.

A tall tree like a tower breaks out of the ground and scatters her fruits to the world. The tree that thrives from infinite possibilities is closer to the sky than ever. Past and future, reality and fantasy, body and mind, space and time. The boundaries between these four are slowly disappearing. People often say that in the end there is only nothingness. But I know that there is not everything there. You will be an infinite light. Your name is - Ayin. Remember our names. Then... Disappear.

There are no problems or poisons so far, it looks good, and this kind of start is very novel, interesting and fun.

It's not bad, it's very good-looking, even though the main character is a saint, it really poked me I took a look at the comment section and was exhausted. I said that normally the urine score of this kind of book Tomato should be quite high. Why is it so low? Is Yue Chou and Beng Tie so powerful? Judging from the linkage between Beng Tie once a year, in a few years the world view will probably be integrated.

The author is so awesome that I give you a copy┏┳━━━━━━━━━━┓ ┣┫██████████┃ ┣┫██████┏━┓█┃ ┣┫██████┃┃█┃ ┣┫██████┃More┃█┃ ┣┫██████┃Big┃█┃ ┣┫██████┃Full┃█┃ ┣┫██████┗━┛█┃ ┣┫██████████┃ ┗┻━━━━━━━━━━┛ Fast update Dear Daddy: Seeing the words is like meeting each other, and the letter is soothing. Falling in love with you is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in this world. It's not about weighing the pros and cons, or coming up with ideas, but suddenly having you makes me worried about you and I can't let go of you. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning or a nap at noon, I love you. By the way, do you still have it in your draft box? [Adoration]

Emm... I hope the author can write longer, so I will give the author some suggestions. At present, the combat power increases too fast. According to the setting, each attribute point can be increased a little, so that there is no need to show the improvement of the protagonist through level.

After reading the first volume, I thought it was very interesting, but my rating is only 7.9. I always have an ominous feeling. Could it be that there is some water behind it? Someone please explain or I'll have to run away.

So beautiful, so exciting, plump [admiration]

It wasn't until I heard Chapter 11 that I realized it was drawing the bow, not drawing💩

From my point of view, this book should have five stars, but I gave four stars more because I feel that the combat power is a bit broken. I have not seen 100 pictures, but the combat power has begun to collapse a little. Of course, in addition to the combat power, other things are still OK. The characters are described as they should be, some are funny, and some are fighting. As a rare book about the moon, it is very good. If you like it, you can read it. I personally recommend it.

Does the author have Ilya and Kallen in the harem?

If the author can update it frequently, it will undoubtedly be a good book⊙ω⊙ After reading it, I realized that the writing was lacking and there were many typos.

Finally there is a new Fate. Article.

No big problem at the moment My suggestion is to improve the name of the Noble Phantasm to make it more suitable for the Noble Phantasm names of Servants of the same line. For example, the two Noble Phantasms: Armor and Round Table Gathering Can be changed to: The glorious knights gathered under the holy sword (Round Table Gathering), the armor that protects the future. It forms a contrasting relationship with the Sword of Promise of Victory.

I originally wanted to give it three stars. The plot of Arashi was really unpleasant, but when I saw Mapo inviting all the heroes to eat Mapo tofu later, I couldn't stand it anymore [face covering]

Very good monthly article, I like to read it (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

It's okay, I just don't understand why I have to find a father. Don't you feel disconnected if you have past life memories?

Support the author, don't pay attention to those godmen, let me tell others who will come later, this book brings a little bit of Mi's setting to cheat the protagonist. I can't accept the suggestion to just blow up the mhy building. It is more effective than spraying in the second creation. Mi Hei is really crazy.

I didn't like the protagonist very much at first, but until I saw the protagonist jump high, I suddenly felt that everything the protagonist did was very pleasing to my eyes [][][]

It's so beautiful [like] [like] [like], it's at the forefront of the Xingyue track

It's well written, all have good endings, the protagonist's outlook on life is very good, no swordsmanship, and the plot is quite interesting.

It's very exquisite in the Tomato Free Book! I added a little bit of Bentie plug-in, but it's nothing. It's already pretty good among Tomato Fate fandoms. Are some of the gods in the comment section just going away without reading it? It's all free, but I'm still spraying here and there, and I don't want to go to the paid area next door! Don't affect other people's mood while reading [smile]