After his death, he traveled to England and had to live his life over again, starting from a newborn baby. Okay, but what the heck is it to grow up and become a wizard? I don't want to be involved in the adventures of the three protagonists. I just want to make money and live a stable life. I will go abroad to hide before danger comes. But foreign countries are not letting up, and the dangers are no less than those of Voldemort. People will change. Now that you have decided, try to change the world. Who says you have to do what is mentioned in the book?
Special reminder: this book is not a cool novel. The protagonist's growth experience is somewhat twists and turns, and there is a female protagonist.
Reader comments
It's surprisingly good-looking. The protagonist grows up step by step and reconciles with himself. There is no bloody plot, no slap in the face, and no arrogant plot. The protagonist has talents, a bottom line, a good background, and is not a saint. He can judge the situation and judge the situation. He is just an ordinary person who becomes stronger step by step in the magical world. The author's description of emotions is also very good and delicate, giving a change to people who have gone astray. Anyway, this article is great!
Brother, the writing is really good. The plot and story are both logical and suspenseful, as well as the protagonist's growth. It's a good book, not an authentic online novel, but an authentic novel. However, there are some shortcomings that you should pay attention to in the next book. One is that the main plot in the early stage is confusing, and you have no idea what the protagonist wants to do. The readers lack a sense of gain and identification. Second, the protagonist in the middle period is a bit frustrated, and today's readers prefer to watch the protagonist show off. However, these problems have been solved since the beginning of the American plot. I believe that the next book of the brothers will be a great success. You must insist on finishing this book, even if it is a little bit unfinished
A great book, with ups and downs in the plot, but an unexpectedly heart-warming ending. The protagonist seems to be Newt from another universe, kind-hearted, jealous of evil, sincere but clumsy when it comes to feelings. Even they are both from Hufflepuff and also dropped out of school. The protagonist understands that he is an ordinary person but will eventually come to the forefront in the face of danger. The magic of magic does not lie in changing the will of others, nor in taking away lives, but in that it is a ladder for mankind to move towards a greater era, and that it can make up for our irreparable regrets. I really recommend this book, especially the ending.
It's very interesting. Although I have written and posted some negative or even critical comments, some of which may be quite extreme, after reading it I still say that this is a very interesting novel, and it has new ideas.
Advantages:
1. It's not a nanny article, at least it's not about Harry Potter all day long.
2. The heroine is not Hermione. Although there is nothing wrong with Hermione, there are too many fan fictions in which the heroine is him.
3. The experience outside of school is good. Although I have criticized it, it is not the action story itself that is bad.
4. The writing is good, especially the letter I wrote to a friend during my first trip after taking a break from school. It was amazing at first sight.
5. The author has some personal understandings from the perspective of the protagonist. Some of them I personally don't agree with, but they are still very good and give the novel its own characteristics.
Disadvantages:
1. The protagonist is more like a virgin. Although he talks cruelly, the protagonist rarely uses cruel methods. I even have no memory of the protagonist killing anyone.
2. In some cases, the reasons or excuses given for the development or turning point of the story are not sufficient. At least the reasons for suspending school are not convincing in my opinion. I'm not saying that the suspension of study and the subsequent plot are bad, but that the reasons for the suspension of study are not convincing enough.
3. There is some naivety in some places, and it can even be said that the author's literary youth is at work.
All in all, this is a pretty good novel. I originally planned to give it 4 stars, but after thinking about it, the shortcomings can be considered as flaws, so I will give it 5 stars.
At the end of the writing, I have been looking forward to it for a long time as to why the vampire potion was not explained later.
The writing is very good. The author wants to write it more realistically (closer to life), but some of the developments are not very logical. For example, Dobby, he didn't know that the diary was destroyed, so he should develop according to the original work, and the result is not reflected, but others are still okay. I think the protagonist's combat power can be strengthened, but it is a little weak now.
I think the rating is totally hilarious, this is a very good book
So far, this is the most beautiful HP fanfic I have ever seen. The perspective is not limited to the messy middle school scene in the original work. The writing is very innovative, and it continues to be maintained within the framework of the original work.
First of all, this is not a nanny novel or a system novel, nor is it a cool novel about random killings. The protagonist is not a person who has reached the top with talent and combat ability. It is a novel with the author's own thoughts. Although there are some small flaws in the rhythm and emotional processing, the rating is definitely a bit low. It can be regarded as a rare masterpiece on Tomato. I think it is well written.
Very nice.
The protagonist doesn't have any golden fingers, he just has a strong memory, strong learning ability, high magic talent, and high potion talent.
Light and smooth. It does not repeat the original plot too much, and the original plot is quite watchable. Promote the integration of the wizarding world and the Muggle world around the world.
CP Penello.
This is the first Harry Potter fanfic I have read from beginning to end. I personally think the author's writing is very good. This rating is obviously greatly underestimated. However, it can be seen later that the author's ending is indeed a bit hasty, but overall it is indeed a good article.
What I find particularly rare is that he was able to connect the real geographical changes with the financial market and the magical world in the early stage, although the author basically forgot about these in the later stage...
This five-star rating is for subsequent expectations. The foreseeable future climax of this book is most likely when the protagonist makes up his mind to initiate a major change in the wizarding world. It depends on when it starts and from which angle it intervenes. I think it would be more natural and less rigid to start with a suffering, redeem a group of people and then naturally embark on the path of change.
This is one of the passages:
"I asked him why," the Sorting Hat continued, each word as clear as if it were under a magnifying spell, "and he said - 'Courage, wisdom, and ambition are all talents or abilities, and kindness is a choice.'"
It's rare to see a fanfic with such a normal outlook [Love]
Although there is a lot of controversy in the early and middle stages when the protagonist does not want to change the plot, the plot of love and career in the later period is pleasant, the ending is satisfactory, and the happiness in ordinary life is more touching (it feels like human witches and peaceful communism are just around the corner)
It feels like a very interesting story, with a different development than other similar novels I have read.
Very nice, not the traditional cookie-cutter academic style
Author, are you writing this in AI? Please forgive me for my neuroticism. I always doubt anything I see in parentheses in a book, and many of the things I like are written in AI [smile][smile]
Courage, wisdom, and ambition are all talents or abilities, while kindness is a choice.
This sentence keeps me like an eagle [Learned]
That's great, it's a supplement and transformation from children's books to online novels. It ranks high among the fanfics I read. If this style is refined, it will be more suitable for the idea side.
To be honest, the setting written by the author is very close to my heart. Because I had a similar idea before. But my idea is that the protagonist of Slytherin is a mixed-blood wizard born with the surname Prince. He and Snape are incompatible relatives. The heroine is also Penelo, one year younger than her. He is very talented in potions. It is similar to the potions in fairy tales. It focuses on rituals and symbols, and then combines some things from other regional myths. The main plot is the fusion of wizards and Muggles. Voldemort belongs to the branch plot to gain fame and power, mainly competing with the nobles and the old forces for the right to speak. But I didn't write it down. I wrote an outline and the first 10 chapters and then trashed it. Now that I have read what the author wrote, I want to write again.
I don't understand why the rating is so low. There are no other cheats except the known plot, but the process of eliminating Lao Fu is still very exciting. Although he was a little bit stubborn in the early stage, he became a decisive and kind-hearted character later on. Recommended reading
The content is relatively new
Unbelievably pretty
Why 6.5? ? ! ! This is fairy grass! ! Thanks to the author for his hard work in building HP's new territory, I will give you five stars to help you pull it off! !
"He said - 'Courage, wisdom, and ambition are all talents or abilities, but kindness is a choice.'"
I haven't finished it yet, but the first few chapters have some amazing quotes that shocked me! I believe that the author who can write such words will not collapse later! ! !
There are some flaws in the front, but the writing in the back is very good. It even ranks among the top among all the fanfics I have read. Unlike other invincible protagonists who can influence victory or defeat, the protagonist in this book is not that strong, but he plays a greater role than the invincible protagonists in those fanfics.
Daniel has his own kindness, the struggles of a small person, and the courage to do everything he can to obey fate.
I really, really like the career article about the trio who are not close to each other. I must give it a five-star rating [sending my heart][sending my heart]
The most beautiful, the most reasonable, the most normal, the most consistent
It's a very good, very "ordinary" kind of plot, but it's also unique.
It's quite interesting. It's on the edge of the original plot and has its own thing.
After reading it, the overall plot does not feel disconnected. I respect the original work very much. It is not a mindless read. It is worth watching.
It's surprisingly good-looking. The protagonist grows up step by step and reconciles with himself. There is no bloody plot, no slap in the face, and no arrogant plot. The protagonist has talents, a bottom line, a good background, and is not a saint. He can judge the situation and judge the situation. He is just an ordinary person who becomes stronger step by step in the magical world. The author's description of emotions is also very good and delicate, giving a change to people who have gone astray. Anyway, this article is great!
Brother, the writing is really good. The plot and story are both logical and suspenseful, as well as the protagonist's growth. It's a good book, not an authentic online novel, but an authentic novel. However, there are some shortcomings that you should pay attention to in the next book. One is that the main plot in the early stage is confusing, and you have no idea what the protagonist wants to do. The readers lack a sense of gain and identification. Second, the protagonist in the middle period is a bit frustrated, and today's readers prefer to watch the protagonist show off. However, these problems have been solved since the beginning of the American plot. I believe that the next book of the brothers will be a great success. You must insist on finishing this book, even if it is a little bit unfinished
A great book, with ups and downs in the plot, but an unexpectedly heart-warming ending. The protagonist seems to be Newt from another universe, kind-hearted, jealous of evil, sincere but clumsy when it comes to feelings. Even they are both from Hufflepuff and also dropped out of school. The protagonist understands that he is an ordinary person but will eventually come to the forefront in the face of danger. The magic of magic does not lie in changing the will of others, nor in taking away lives, but in that it is a ladder for mankind to move towards a greater era, and that it can make up for our irreparable regrets. I really recommend this book, especially the ending.
It's very interesting. Although I have written and posted some negative or even critical comments, some of which may be quite extreme, after reading it I still say that this is a very interesting novel, and it has new ideas. Advantages: 1. It's not a nanny article, at least it's not about Harry Potter all day long. 2. The heroine is not Hermione. Although there is nothing wrong with Hermione, there are too many fan fictions in which the heroine is him. 3. The experience outside of school is good. Although I have criticized it, it is not the action story itself that is bad. 4. The writing is good, especially the letter I wrote to a friend during my first trip after taking a break from school. It was amazing at first sight. 5. The author has some personal understandings from the perspective of the protagonist. Some of them I personally don't agree with, but they are still very good and give the novel its own characteristics. Disadvantages: 1. The protagonist is more like a virgin. Although he talks cruelly, the protagonist rarely uses cruel methods. I even have no memory of the protagonist killing anyone. 2. In some cases, the reasons or excuses given for the development or turning point of the story are not sufficient. At least the reasons for suspending school are not convincing in my opinion. I'm not saying that the suspension of study and the subsequent plot are bad, but that the reasons for the suspension of study are not convincing enough. 3. There is some naivety in some places, and it can even be said that the author's literary youth is at work. All in all, this is a pretty good novel. I originally planned to give it 4 stars, but after thinking about it, the shortcomings can be considered as flaws, so I will give it 5 stars. At the end of the writing, I have been looking forward to it for a long time as to why the vampire potion was not explained later.
The writing is very good. The author wants to write it more realistically (closer to life), but some of the developments are not very logical. For example, Dobby, he didn't know that the diary was destroyed, so he should develop according to the original work, and the result is not reflected, but others are still okay. I think the protagonist's combat power can be strengthened, but it is a little weak now.
I think the rating is totally hilarious, this is a very good book
So far, this is the most beautiful HP fanfic I have ever seen. The perspective is not limited to the messy middle school scene in the original work. The writing is very innovative, and it continues to be maintained within the framework of the original work.
First of all, this is not a nanny novel or a system novel, nor is it a cool novel about random killings. The protagonist is not a person who has reached the top with talent and combat ability. It is a novel with the author's own thoughts. Although there are some small flaws in the rhythm and emotional processing, the rating is definitely a bit low. It can be regarded as a rare masterpiece on Tomato. I think it is well written.
Very nice. The protagonist doesn't have any golden fingers, he just has a strong memory, strong learning ability, high magic talent, and high potion talent. Light and smooth. It does not repeat the original plot too much, and the original plot is quite watchable. Promote the integration of the wizarding world and the Muggle world around the world. CP Penello.
This is the first Harry Potter fanfic I have read from beginning to end. I personally think the author's writing is very good. This rating is obviously greatly underestimated. However, it can be seen later that the author's ending is indeed a bit hasty, but overall it is indeed a good article. What I find particularly rare is that he was able to connect the real geographical changes with the financial market and the magical world in the early stage, although the author basically forgot about these in the later stage...
This five-star rating is for subsequent expectations. The foreseeable future climax of this book is most likely when the protagonist makes up his mind to initiate a major change in the wizarding world. It depends on when it starts and from which angle it intervenes. I think it would be more natural and less rigid to start with a suffering, redeem a group of people and then naturally embark on the path of change.
This is one of the passages: "I asked him why," the Sorting Hat continued, each word as clear as if it were under a magnifying spell, "and he said - 'Courage, wisdom, and ambition are all talents or abilities, and kindness is a choice.'" It's rare to see a fanfic with such a normal outlook [Love]
Although there is a lot of controversy in the early and middle stages when the protagonist does not want to change the plot, the plot of love and career in the later period is pleasant, the ending is satisfactory, and the happiness in ordinary life is more touching (it feels like human witches and peaceful communism are just around the corner)
It feels like a very interesting story, with a different development than other similar novels I have read.
Very nice, not the traditional cookie-cutter academic style
Author, are you writing this in AI? Please forgive me for my neuroticism. I always doubt anything I see in parentheses in a book, and many of the things I like are written in AI [smile][smile]
Courage, wisdom, and ambition are all talents or abilities, while kindness is a choice. This sentence keeps me like an eagle [Learned]
That's great, it's a supplement and transformation from children's books to online novels. It ranks high among the fanfics I read. If this style is refined, it will be more suitable for the idea side. To be honest, the setting written by the author is very close to my heart. Because I had a similar idea before. But my idea is that the protagonist of Slytherin is a mixed-blood wizard born with the surname Prince. He and Snape are incompatible relatives. The heroine is also Penelo, one year younger than her. He is very talented in potions. It is similar to the potions in fairy tales. It focuses on rituals and symbols, and then combines some things from other regional myths. The main plot is the fusion of wizards and Muggles. Voldemort belongs to the branch plot to gain fame and power, mainly competing with the nobles and the old forces for the right to speak. But I didn't write it down. I wrote an outline and the first 10 chapters and then trashed it. Now that I have read what the author wrote, I want to write again.
I don't understand why the rating is so low. There are no other cheats except the known plot, but the process of eliminating Lao Fu is still very exciting. Although he was a little bit stubborn in the early stage, he became a decisive and kind-hearted character later on. Recommended reading
The content is relatively new
Unbelievably pretty
Why 6.5? ? ! ! This is fairy grass! ! Thanks to the author for his hard work in building HP's new territory, I will give you five stars to help you pull it off! !
"He said - 'Courage, wisdom, and ambition are all talents or abilities, but kindness is a choice.'"
I haven't finished it yet, but the first few chapters have some amazing quotes that shocked me! I believe that the author who can write such words will not collapse later! ! !
There are some flaws in the front, but the writing in the back is very good. It even ranks among the top among all the fanfics I have read. Unlike other invincible protagonists who can influence victory or defeat, the protagonist in this book is not that strong, but he plays a greater role than the invincible protagonists in those fanfics. Daniel has his own kindness, the struggles of a small person, and the courage to do everything he can to obey fate.
I really, really like the career article about the trio who are not close to each other. I must give it a five-star rating [sending my heart][sending my heart]
The most beautiful, the most reasonable, the most normal, the most consistent
It's a very good, very "ordinary" kind of plot, but it's also unique.
It's quite interesting. It's on the edge of the original plot and has its own thing.
After reading it, the overall plot does not feel disconnected. I respect the original work very much. It is not a mindless read. It is worth watching.