Harry Potter: A Different Path to Magic

It's surprisingly good-looking. The protagonist grows up step by step and reconciles with himself. There is no bloody plot, no slap in the face, and no arrogant plot. The protagonist has talents, a bottom line, a good background, and is not a saint. He can judge the situation and judge the situation. He is just an ordinary person who becomes stronger step by step in the magical world. The author's description of emotions is also very good and delicate, giving a change to people who have gone astray. Anyway, this article is great!

Brother, the writing is really good. The plot and story are both logical and suspenseful, as well as the protagonist's growth. It's a good book, not an authentic online novel, but an authentic novel. However, there are some shortcomings that you should pay attention to in the next book. One is that the main plot in the early stage is confusing, and you have no idea what the protagonist wants to do. The readers lack a sense of gain and identification. Second, the protagonist in the middle period is a bit frustrated, and today's readers prefer to watch the protagonist show off. However, these problems have been solved since the beginning of the American plot. I believe that the next book of the brothers will be a great success. You must insist on finishing this book, even if it is a little bit unfinished

It's very interesting. Although I have written and posted some negative or even critical comments, some of which may be quite extreme, after reading it I still say that this is a very interesting novel, and it has new ideas. Advantages: 1. It's not a nanny article, at least it's not about Harry Potter all day long. 2. The heroine is not Hermione. Although there is nothing wrong with Hermione, there are too many fan fictions in which the heroine is him. 3. The experience outside of school is good. Although I have criticized it, it is not the action story itself that is bad. 4. The writing is good, especially the letter I wrote to a friend during my first trip after taking a break from school. It was amazing at first sight. 5. The author has some personal understandings from the perspective of the protagonist. Some of them I personally don't agree with, but they are still very good and give the novel its own characteristics. Disadvantages: 1. The protagonist is more like a virgin. Although he talks cruelly, the protagonist rarely uses cruel methods. I even have no memory of the protagonist killing anyone. 2. In some cases, the reasons or excuses given for the development or turning point of the story are not sufficient. At least the reasons for suspending school are not convincing in my opinion. I'm not saying that the suspension of study and the subsequent plot are bad, but that the reasons for the suspension of study are not convincing enough. 3. There is some naivety in some places, and it can even be said that the author's literary youth is at work. All in all, this is a pretty good novel. I originally planned to give it 4 stars, but after thinking about it, the shortcomings can be considered as flaws, so I will give it 5 stars. At the end of the writing, I have been looking forward to it for a long time as to why the vampire potion was not explained later.

The writing is very good. The author wants to write it more realistically (closer to life), but some of the developments are not very logical. For example, Dobby, he didn't know that the diary was destroyed, so he should develop according to the original work, and the result is not reflected, but others are still okay. I think the protagonist's combat power can be strengthened, but it is a little weak now.

A great book, with ups and downs in the plot, but an unexpectedly heart-warming ending. The protagonist seems to be Newt from another universe, kind-hearted, jealous of evil, sincere but clumsy when it comes to feelings. Even they are both from Hufflepuff and also dropped out of school. The protagonist understands that he is an ordinary person but will eventually come to the forefront in the face of danger. The magic of magic does not lie in changing the will of others, nor in taking away lives, but in that it is a ladder for mankind to move towards a greater era, and that it can make up for our irreparable regrets. I really recommend this book, especially the ending.

First of all, this is not a nanny novel or a system novel, nor is it a cool novel about random killings. The protagonist is not a person who has reached the top with talent and combat ability. It is a novel with the author's own thoughts. Although there are some small flaws in the rhythm and emotional processing, the rating is definitely a bit low. It can be regarded as a rare masterpiece on Tomato. I think it is well written.

I think the rating is totally hilarious, this is a very good book

So far, this is the most beautiful HP fanfic I have ever seen. The perspective is not limited to the messy middle school scene in the original work. The writing is very innovative, and it continues to be maintained within the framework of the original work.

This is the first Harry Potter fanfic I have read from beginning to end. I personally think the author's writing is very good. This rating is obviously greatly underestimated. However, it can be seen later that the author's ending is indeed a bit hasty, but overall it is indeed a good article. What I find particularly rare is that he was able to connect the real geographical changes with the financial market and the magical world in the early stage, although the author basically forgot about these in the later stage...

Very nice. The protagonist doesn't have any golden fingers, he just has a strong memory, strong learning ability, high magic talent, and high potion talent. Light and smooth. It does not repeat the original plot too much, and the original plot is quite watchable. Promote the integration of the wizarding world and the Muggle world around the world. CP Penello.