Harry Potter: Until We Meet Again, Harry

(Serpent Savior) Harry V. Shara (Slytherin) Enemies on a Narrow Road. Harry is not what he looks like in the movie, but he is written based on the original work. I have read that most other novels are based on the movie, so it is a relatively new subject. The female protagonist It's a slight heartthrob. Every character is very likable. The characters' inner feelings are well written. The emotional line in the early stage is not very obvious. It should be about falling in love and killing each other, which is relatively ambiguous. But the plot during the Triwizard's Ball was so sad to watch, it tortured me [crying]

The storyline is soothing and steady, and it is in-depth step by step. The writing is very careful and not like some industrial saccharine [face covering] (I feel powerless every time I see that) There wasn't much interaction with Harry in the first few dozen chapters (I even wondered if I had read the wrong introduction [facepalm]). The transition to the heart-to-heart conversation with Harry later was very natural and nice! I hope you can update a hundred pictures to scare me [sending my heart]

It's finally tied. In fact, it was tied yesterday but I just wrote a comment today. I accidentally clicked on this book on the recommendation page. I think this is the best HP fanfic I have ever read on Tomato. It is undeniable that I have not seen a good HP fanfic for a long time. To be fair, there are not many HP fanfics, but for many articles I think the author may not have read the original work or has forgotten a lot of the original content. There are very few articles that respect the original characters and are not OOC like this one. In the past, I didn't really like articles in which the main character was Slytherin. This is a matter of personal preference, but I really like the heroine in this book. Her character and the way she handles things are all in line with the image of Slytherin in my eyes. She has shortcomings, but she has more advantages. The author portrays her very well, making her a three-dimensional person in my eyes, rather than just being a cover-up for falling in love with the original characters in some articles. The purpose of writing about love leads to no respect for the original work or the movie. In addition to this, the other characters in this article are also well portrayed so far, without OOC. My favorite is Harry in the article, and I think the author must also like Harry very much. The names of the author's articles are very interesting. It feels like he has thought carefully about it. Many words in the article are also used very well. In short, it is very strong. I really don't have much vocabulary. . Finally, I want to say that this is the first time I have left a comment on a book by Tomato, because I really, really like this book, and I am also looking forward to the next plot. Finally, I wish the author more and more success in his creation and smooth sailing in his life. (I really don't have much vocabulary and I don't know how to write reviews. In short, this book is very beautiful)

Although I haven't finished reading it, to be honest, I quite like this article and the writing style is OK [OK] It was during the part where I was writing Harry's emotional line that I felt like our hearts moved a little faster. Because the long-term competition between the two colleges and the previous conflict have not been resolved, they are in a state of tension, and the heroine and Harry share the same illness and have lost their relatives, so the heroine and Harry can open up and have a heartbeat. However, this description is not very delicate. The heroine lost her mother, but there is no more foreshadowing of missing or why she came to Hogwarts, which makes the conversation with Harry awkward. (Perhaps I am not very fond of Harry and am a snake lover, so I think the pace is a bit fast, and I prefer slow and steady flow) But the description of the time back in the past is really good. It talks about the youthful ignorance between two teenagers, as if they were pulled into a charming dream, very pure and beautiful love.

Very good books that made me writhe like a maggot. In the Tomato environment, it is rare to see such a high-quality book, which can even be said to be the best HP fanfic. The author's writing style is such that I would be willing to order all of it if I got the QD next door. Additionally, the characterization is top-notch. Shara is a full-bodied, living person. The emotional line between her and Harry is natural and uncontrived. The author makes the relationship between the two develop naturally, and more importantly, maintains their personalities. Many works will make the characters become multi-faceted in the process of attracting or becoming popular, showing different personality traits in front of different potential love objects. I personally think that doing so will cause the character to lose its core and become hollow. The most valuable thing about this book is Shara's consistency in life and relationships. This is not to say that the author did not present the diverse sides of her character, but you can always feel Shayla's subjectivity, she is always her, it is her own choice (rather than being manipulated by invisible hands like marionettes) to play different aspects of herself at different moments, which makes Shayla more like a real person. All in all, a rare masterpiece of tomatoes, grass jelly, shockingly delicious!

As an HP fan, I personally feel that this book is pretty good. I actually like the non-travel and non-systematic original indigenous protagonist. In addition, the author's writing style is also good. When reading the article, I can clearly feel that the heroine is really a character in the magical world. She is a person living in that world view. The writing style of this article is also very delicate, and each character has a distinct image, making it very comfortable to read. The character of the heroine Charla is actually quite interesting. I personally like the fifth grade class better. The heroine was entangled in her heart at the beginning, and then pretended to be a loser while secretly doing her best to help Harry and other classmates. I personally found this plot very touching. Although I don't know the development of the subsequent plot, I always feel that a similar situation will happen again in seventh grade. I look forward to what kind of performance Xia La will have by then.

Fuck you, there are very few stories about the original heroine of Harry x. This one is really beautiful to me. The emotional line between Charla and Harry is really delicate and stretched. It's really the best Harry Potter novel I've ever read. I don't give it five stars because it's not finished yet and I don't know where the story will go next. I am particularly looking forward to the next plot. I feel that the author has his own considerations for Shara and Harry. The two people have their own independent thinking. There is no one who is dependent on the other or born for the other. This direction can easily lead to the heroine and the hero going to be (just like what I see now is that Shara concealed the fact that Voldemort has been resurrected for Old Barty, and Harry reacted violently to this. It is also the difference in the two people's behavior, which is very special! There are quite a few fan creations that sometimes cannot avoid the attachment of a certain person to the existence of a certain person, resulting in the protagonist's three views and behavior being highly similar). This is so cool! Although I will cry bitterly for the little cp when I see it at the end, it wouldn't be right if it doesn't be! I also agree with the author's "victory of death and defeat"! War can never be without bloodshed or sacrifice, and it is impossible to give a big cheat just because you are an important role (this is too heroic). It was indeed too cruel to Harry to fight to the death. He watched the people he cherished lose their lives because of this, but without these losses of life, he would not have grown so fast. I am actually very curious about Xia La's future plot direction and personal growth. I'm currently brainstorming the ending of be. Urgent, urgent, urgent, looking forward to a big update from the author! ! Great writing! ! Besides! I particularly like the setting of the female protagonist, the teacher, and the interaction between Charla and Victor is particularly cute! ! ! ! I like Victor very much! ! Although the ending of this article is still Luo He, the interaction between the fourth-grade writer Ke He is also very beautiful and cute! This Kehe should always be cute to me! ! !

It's very interesting. It's the most interesting story about Harry. The heroine Saravida is not a typical Slytherin, but she makes me feel that she is very shrewd and has great ambitions. She is gentle, firm and powerful. It is a perfect match for Xiaoha. In addition, Xiaoha in the original novel is made from a completely cute viper bird. In the later period, she was completely lost when facing Saravida. Gallery mode, chirping, and sometimes I see the arrogant character of the poisonous snake, which is completely like a bird. With Xiao Xia La, Xia La feels like a kitten. She likes to hang on to a person and slowly fall away. Then she gives him a little hope every time, and then the two people are ambiguously pulling each other. It is so exciting. Although the ending is B, it does not delay him. It is delicious. I look forward to the branch line. It's really good to read. If you look at it from a multi-dimensional perspective, the writing between CP and Harry here is actually not very typical. Usually this kind of writing is h1 and the plot is a bit draggy. Personally, I think this one is the best. Fighting the Road Couple made me understand what delicious food is. I usually don't eat this type of writing. The big writing made me fall in love with it.

Goblet of Fire was very good before, and the identity of the heroine felt well established, and the occasional interdimensional jokes were quite interesting. The previous article has a good grasp of the original characters and language style, but I personally feel that the heroine started to change a bit after she went to find Harry during the summer vacation. How should I put it, she chased Harry too much. It is very acceptable for the heroine Harry to have different relationships and finally get together. Their kiss that ended abruptly was the best feeling. The misunderstanding between the two after entering the Goblet of Fire and the heroine's repeated concessions felt a bit emmm, and I felt that Slytherin was not like this. No matter how much Snape liked Lily, he still had extremely high self-esteem. I can understand everything I say, but it doesn't feel smooth. Maybe I personally prefer the female dominant position, and the front part is more fairy-like. (I like the setting of Pansy

After chasing it for a long time, I remembered that I didn't leave a comment. Xia La is not a "perfect protagonist", not the first person to turn the tide, not a lover who gives up everything for her lover, not a hollow person who was thrown into the HP world "to save all regrets". The Shayla I saw had a petite temper raised by a pure-blood family. She was proud, ambitious, kind, and loyal. She judged the situation and went with the flow, and finally grew into a girl who faced fear and still sacrificed herself. Yes, she's still a girl. No fanfic has ever made me realize from beginning to end that most of the people trying to save the magical world are still children. I share the same view as the author. I believe that sacrifice creates the character arc of certain characters. Love is the greatest magic, so love gives us the courage to face death. It should be almost finished. Thanks to the author for taking me to watch Harry Potter from another perspective. Little Xia La, I really hope you can be happy [crying]