HP: See You Later, Harry

(Serpent Savior) Harry V. Shara (Slytherin) Enemies on a Narrow Road. Harry is not what he looks like in the movie, but he is written based on the original work. I have read that most other novels are based on the movie, so it is a relatively new subject. The female protagonist It's a slight heartthrob. Every character is very likable. The characters' inner feelings are well written. The emotional line in the early stage is not very obvious. It should be about falling in love and killing each other, which is relatively ambiguous. But the plot during the Triwizard's Ball was so sad to watch, it tortured me [crying]

The storyline is soothing and steady, and it is in-depth step by step. The writing is very careful and not like some industrial saccharine [face covering] (I feel powerless every time I see that) There wasn't much interaction with Harry in the first few dozen chapters (I even wondered if I had read the wrong introduction [facepalm]). The transition to the heart-to-heart conversation with Harry later was very natural and nice! I hope you can update a hundred pictures to scare me [sending my heart]

It's finally tied. In fact, it was tied yesterday but I just wrote a comment today. I accidentally clicked on this book on the recommendation page. I think this is the best HP fanfic I have ever read on Tomato. It is undeniable that I have not seen a good HP fanfic for a long time. To be fair, there are not many HP fanfics, but for many articles I think the author may not have read the original work or has forgotten a lot of the original content. There are very few articles that respect the original characters and are not OOC like this one. In the past, I didn't really like articles in which the main character was Slytherin. This is a matter of personal preference, but I really like the heroine in this book. Her character and the way she handles things are all in line with the image of Slytherin in my eyes. She has shortcomings, but she has more advantages. The author portrays her very well, making her a three-dimensional person in my eyes, rather than just being a cover-up for falling in love with the original characters in some articles. The purpose of writing about love leads to no respect for the original work or the movie. In addition to this, the other characters in this article are also well portrayed so far, without OOC. My favorite is Harry in the article, and I think the author must also like Harry very much. The names of the author's articles are very interesting. It feels like he has thought carefully about it. Many words in the article are also used very well. In short, it is very strong. I really don't have much vocabulary. . Finally, I want to say that this is the first time I have left a comment on a book by Tomato, because I really, really like this book, and I am also looking forward to the next plot. Finally, I wish the author more and more success in his creation and smooth sailing in his life. (I really don't have much vocabulary and I don't know how to write reviews. In short, this book is very beautiful)

Although I haven't finished reading it, to be honest, I quite like this article and the writing style is OK [OK] It was during the part where I was writing Harry's emotional line that I felt like our hearts moved a little faster. Because the long-term competition between the two colleges and the previous conflict have not been resolved, they are in a state of tension, and the heroine and Harry share the same illness and have lost their relatives, so the heroine and Harry can open up and have a heartbeat. However, this description is not very delicate. The heroine lost her mother, but there is no more foreshadowing of missing or why she came to Hogwarts, which makes the conversation with Harry awkward. (Perhaps I am not very fond of Harry and am a snake lover, so I think the pace is a bit fast, and I prefer slow and steady flow) But the description of the time back in the past is really good. It talks about the youthful ignorance between two teenagers, as if they were pulled into a charming dream, very pure and beautiful love.

Very good books that made me writhe like a maggot. In the Tomato environment, it is rare to see such a high-quality book, which can even be said to be the best HP fanfic. The author's writing style is such that I would be willing to order all of it if I got the QD next door. Additionally, the characterization is top-notch. Shara is a full-bodied, living person. The emotional line between her and Harry is natural and uncontrived. The author makes the relationship between the two develop naturally, and more importantly, maintains their personalities. Many works will make the characters become multi-faceted in the process of attracting or becoming popular, showing different personality traits in front of different potential love objects. I personally think that doing so will cause the character to lose its core and become hollow. The most valuable thing about this book is Shara's consistency in life and relationships. This is not to say that the author did not present the diverse sides of her character, but you can always feel Shayla's subjectivity, she is always her, it is her own choice (rather than being manipulated by invisible hands like marionettes) to play different aspects of herself at different moments, which makes Shayla more like a real person. All in all, a rare masterpiece of tomatoes, grass jelly, shockingly delicious!

Fuck you, there are very few stories about the original heroine of Harry x. This one is really beautiful to me. The emotional line between Charla and Harry is really delicate and stretched. It's really the best Harry Potter novel I've ever read. I don't give it five stars because it's not finished yet and I don't know where the story will go next. I am particularly looking forward to the next plot. I feel that the author has his own considerations for Shara and Harry. The two people have their own independent thinking. There is no one who is dependent on the other or born for the other. This direction can easily lead to the heroine and the hero going to be (just like what I see now is that Shara concealed the fact that Voldemort has been resurrected for Old Barty, and Harry reacted violently to this. It is also the difference in the two people's behavior, which is very special! There are quite a few fan creations that sometimes cannot avoid the attachment of a certain person to the existence of a certain person, resulting in the protagonist's three views and behavior being highly similar). This is so cool! Although I will cry bitterly for the little cp when I see it at the end, it wouldn't be right if it doesn't be! I also agree with the author's "victory of death and defeat"! War can never be without bloodshed or sacrifice, and it is impossible to give a big cheat just because you are an important role (this is too heroic). It was indeed too cruel to Harry to fight to the death. He watched the people he cherished lose their lives because of this, but without these losses of life, he would not have grown so fast. I am actually very curious about Xia La's future plot direction and personal growth. I'm currently brainstorming the ending of be. Urgent, urgent, urgent, looking forward to a big update from the author! ! Great writing! ! Besides! I particularly like the setting of the female protagonist, the teacher, and the interaction between Charla and Victor is particularly cute! ! ! ! I like Victor very much! ! Although the ending of this article is still Luo He, the interaction between the fourth-grade writer Ke He is also very beautiful and cute! This Kehe should always be cute to me! ! !

As an HP fan, I personally feel that this book is pretty good. I actually like the non-travel and non-systematic original indigenous protagonist. In addition, the author's writing style is also good. When reading the article, I can clearly feel that the heroine is really a character in the magical world. She is a person living in that world view. The writing style of this article is also very delicate, and each character has a distinct image, making it very comfortable to read. The character of the heroine Charla is actually quite interesting. I personally like the fifth grade class better. The heroine was entangled in her heart at the beginning, and then pretended to be a loser while secretly doing her best to help Harry and other classmates. I personally found this plot very touching. Although I don't know the development of the subsequent plot, I always feel that a similar situation will happen again in seventh grade. I look forward to what kind of performance Xia La will have by then.

It's very interesting. It's the most interesting story about Harry. The heroine Saravida is not a typical Slytherin, but she makes me feel that she is very shrewd and has great ambitions. She is gentle, firm and powerful. It is a perfect match for Xiaoha. In addition, Xiaoha in the original novel is made from a completely cute viper bird. In the later period, she was completely lost when facing Saravida. Gallery mode, chirping, and sometimes I see the arrogant character of the poisonous snake, which is completely like a bird. With Xiao Xia La, Xia La feels like a kitten. She likes to hang on to a person and slowly fall away. Then she gives him a little hope every time, and then the two people are ambiguously pulling each other. It is so exciting. Although the ending is B, it does not delay him. It is delicious. I look forward to the branch line. It's really good to read. If you look at it from a multi-dimensional perspective, the writing between CP and Harry here is actually not very typical. Usually this kind of writing is h1 and the plot is a bit draggy. Personally, I think this one is the best. Fighting the Road Couple made me understand what delicious food is. I usually don't eat this type of writing. The big writing made me fall in love with it.

Goblet of Fire was very good before, and the identity of the heroine felt well established, and the occasional interdimensional jokes were quite interesting. The previous article has a good grasp of the original characters and language style, but I personally feel that the heroine started to change a bit after she went to find Harry during the summer vacation. How should I put it, she chased Harry too much. It is very acceptable for the heroine Harry to have different relationships and finally get together. Their kiss that ended abruptly was the best feeling. The misunderstanding between the two after entering the Goblet of Fire and the heroine's repeated concessions felt a bit emmm, and I felt that Slytherin was not like this. No matter how much Snape liked Lily, he still had extremely high self-esteem. I can understand everything I say, but it doesn't feel smooth. Maybe I personally prefer the female dominant position, and the front part is more fairy-like. (I like the setting of Pansy

It's so well written🥹Xia La is a very three-dimensional protagonist, who may not be perfect but is inexplicably touching... The emotional scenes with Harry are particularly original and good, with a great period of ambiguity where the two secretly pay attention to each other without knowing it. I'm really looking forward to how Shaila will grow up!

After chasing it for a long time, I remembered that I didn't leave a comment. Xia La is not a "perfect protagonist", not the first person to turn the tide, not a lover who gives up everything for her lover, not a hollow person who was thrown into the HP world "to save all regrets". The Shayla I saw had a petite temper raised by a pure-blood family. She was proud, ambitious, kind, and loyal. She judged the situation and went with the flow, and finally grew into a girl who faced fear and still sacrificed herself. Yes, she's still a girl. No fanfic has ever made me realize from beginning to end that most of the people trying to save the magical world are still children. I share the same view as the author. I believe that sacrifice creates the character arc of certain characters. Love is the greatest magic, so love gives us the courage to face death. It should be almost finished. Thanks to the author for taking me to watch Harry Potter from another perspective. Little Xia La, I really hope you can be happy [crying]

I really think this is the best written Harry fanfic. The heroine didn't say anything like Snake Yard and Lionheart. It just felt like it was a true story and not a fanfic. It was so well written and I loved it! It's really sweet especially now that we are in love! I love it so much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The character design feels like the original work. The author did not use any subjective color to criticize any of the characters. The characters written by the author's wife are very accurate to the original work... The writing is also very good. The heroine Shara is also cute. She has been completely integrated into it without any sense of disobedience, just like the original characters. All in all, it is very interesting and beautiful... I finally found a book that is not Harry, the little black cat with green eyes. (I am happy) It is great that Harry is the poisonous tongue in the original work! I will always follow the goddess! ! !

So far, the overall plot is very interesting, the pace is comfortable, and the character creation is particularly brilliant, and it is not OOC at all! The heroine has no cheating in the whole process, and her character is very realistic and fits the temperament of a teenager. She is impulsive and ignorant at this age, makes mistakes, and gets entangled. She is smart but does not have a God's perspective. The logic of her actions is natural and vivid, and she has a strong sense of substitution. The encounter between the male and female protagonists is very interesting. Through a strange time adventure, they slowly get closer and become entangled with each other. The emotional line is delicate and young, which perfectly restores the appearance of teenage love. It is passionate and impulsive, secretly worried, cautiously caring, and full of youthful pull. The two attracted each other and gradually got closer because of their similar growth experiences. The heroine also gradually understood and got closer to Harry's mood and thoughts while getting along. The atmosphere of two-way growth was particularly moving. Draco is still the original tsundere and childish dragon, and his character portrayal is very close to the original. The plot is full and solid, the details are attentive, and the article is a sincere treasure. I beg the author not to cheat! ! !

This book is very good. The only bad thing is - I often have to read the introduction to make sure the CP is correct [smile][smile][smile]

It's super good-looking. # Deadly Enemy Literature # Fight against the Road Couple. I'm so lucky. The heroine is also to my liking. The plot is also very interesting. I like to watch Draco teasing Harry together. The Good Cook [Adoration] [Adoration] After taking another look, I realized it was be, but it was understandable. There was a lack of trust between the two, and their views were different. They were in different camps, and they had very hot tempers. Neither wanted to bow down first. It was difficult to go on, but it was really delicious [KISS][KISS]

It's good-looking. Neither the male nor female protagonists are perfect people, but their growth along the way, especially Shayla's, is really eye-catching. I really like the comradeship between the wolf, hare and swan. Shayla being conquered by little Luna is really good (cb direction), especially the hug and kiss at the end. Shayla admits that Luna is a friend. This part is really touching. Many times the author will focus on the story of the protagonist, thereby weakening the personality of the supporting characters, but in this book I can see many vivid characters in the original work. The two opponents Wood and Shara cherish each other and achieve mutual success. His help to Shara is passed on to Ron. I really like this inheritance-like plot. The author's description of the passionate Quidditch scenes coupled with Shara's high-spirited performance really made me fall in love with this sport for the first time. And the teacher-student friendship between Lupin, Si Jiao and Xia La is also very moving. They are both helpful to the heroine on her growth path. One teaches her how to forge her will into a sword, and the other teaches her how to grow a shield in her heart. But at the same time, they all have their own stories and are the protagonists in their own world. The emotional line between Shayla and Harry is also very good. The author does not deal with the conflicting concepts and positions of the lion-snake love in one stroke, nor does anyone accommodate the other, but allows the two people to develop a deeper understanding and trust in each other during the intensification and collision. Anyway, this kind of pull and ambiguity is very good, but I can't describe it. At the same time, I really want to praise the creation of the character Shayla. The author did not give her a golden finger other than her surname. Her yearning for power as a pureblood at the beginning, her arrogance as a pureblood, her prudent self-protection in the Snake House, and her shrewd calculations were not concealed. When she fell in love with Harry, she wanted to seek more fame and wealth for him because that was what she thought was best. She enjoyed the glory of pureblood status and did not understand the ordinaryness that Harry longed for. She really liked such a real character. She became cute in my eyes because of her shortcomings. At the same time, she is not friendly to her love rivals like other heroines, but directly expresses her disgust and opposition. However, in the face of the overall situation, she is able to help them to a certain extent and cooperate with them to protect the students of Hogwarts when she is safe. She is afraid of death but also brave, she is arrogant but also respectful. Her growth from initially hoping that Harry would escape alive to hoping to fight side by side with Harry and jointly protect those young lives is really admirable. The character of Pansy is complex but also very realistic, and her break with the heroine has long been doomed. Blaise is a very good friend, and Xiaoduo's secret love is also a pity. If possible, I would like to watch Xiaoduo's extra story. (The logic of the writing is messy. It's all because of my great writing skills. It made me stay up all night to read it [I almost cried])

It's very interesting, the writing is good, and the image of the heroine is very solid. She is the Slytherin I imagined. I fully support not changing the original plot significantly. After all, there are a lot of fans who recycle all the lunch boxes to make up for the regrets. I especially like the author sharing his own opinions and creative ideas at the end of the chapter.

It's really great to watch. Harry and Charla's first heartbeat made my heart beat loudly when I watched it. I've always been a fan of it. This time I changed the taste and found it really delicious. I've always been bored by the ending and couldn't finish it. If this was originally a BE, it violated my aesthetic point. In short, it's great! ! ! Harry, what would you do if you didn't have Hermione? The emotional line between the two little ones made me die a little bit. I kept crying😭 but it looked good. As a typical Slytherin, Shara's choice is understandable. Harry is a Gryffindor, so it's understandable that they quarreled. It's just that I felt so uncomfortable watching it outside the screen. I can't imagine what will happen later... But don't worry, I will always follow you [Working on it]

I personally like this book very much. The writing is very fluent and the writing style is also very delicate. However, in my humble opinion, I felt that Harry was a bit OOC when it came to the invitation to the senior prom. First, Harry asked the heroine to explain that the reason why he invited Qiu Zhang first but not the heroine was because Ron hated Slytherin and was afraid of his objection. Harry is a leader who is courageous, decisive, strong in action, brave enough to take responsibility, and not afraid of power. If he alienates the girl he likes because he cares about other people's opinions, then he is not a courageous and determined person at all, and he cannot be a leader. Cowardice, selfishness and timidity will never appear in him. His explanation is completely opposite to his personality and is very disconnected. Secondly, the heroine asked Harry if he liked Cho Chang? Harry replied that I don't know, but she is very beautiful... This also shows that he is not decisive in feelings and cares about appearance. But Harry is actually not a person who cares about a girl's appearance. This can be seen from the Veela's reaction in the original novel. He is not as concerned about a girl's appearance as Ron. The main reason why Ron and Hermione hated Hai Qingtian in the early stage was because he cared about appearance. Harry's answer to Shara seemed like something only Ron could say. I can understand that the author wanted to make the emotional line more compelling, but Harry will not have weak or timid qualities from the first to the last film. Not emotionally, either. The emotional descriptions in the original novel are more simple. For example, when he and Qiu kissed in the Room of Requirement, it was because the girl he liked was close to him that his brain went numb, so Qiu took the initiative and the kiss was successful. He may blush in front of the girl he likes and won't stir up the topic, but he is definitely not someone who can't confirm his feelings, or who is afraid of moving forward because of other people's opinions after confirming his feelings. I hope the author can revise this point again. Of course, this book is very good overall, but just because it is good, I have higher expectations for it.

This is my first long review since reading so many books. How to describe it? Along the way, starting from the third grade, Charla and Harry went from hostility to coyness, from tit-for-tat to admiration for each other. The love between Slytherin and Gryffindor was not favored by others. The love under the invisibility cloak was so beautiful in their eyes. Maybe Slytherin's selfishness told her not to be like this, but those green eyes were always watching her. When I read a book, I like to read the ending first. I think the line BE is my favorite. It gives me the feeling of "I am standing at the end of the story, looking back at the ending where you must die." It is the passing of life that makes those ordinary days more beautiful and valuable. Dear Shayla, do you ever feel regret when you face death? You have fantasized about the future countless times, and you will bring yourselves to other people's weddings. You were so happy at that time, and those green eyes during the revolving door were your reliance to summon your patron saint. I wish you all the best.

I have also been wandering for a long time. Destiny has made them only one step away, only a thin line between them and the dawn. The delicate text slowly unfolds the picture, and the heavy background first comes into view. Even though I knew it was Be, I still burst into tears, especially when I was sacrificed, my tears burst into tears. The back is as wet and dense as London's gloomy rainy season, Ever since he accidentally met the savior in the third grade and participated in the rescue, the gears of fate have been turned, and the eyes of the other person are lingering in his mind. Subsequently, the subtle cares were all touched by admiration. The fourth-year Harry had a cold war with Xiao Xia in a young and impulsive manner. Fortunately, with Master Hermione, the relationship between the two was like a palliative and the past feud was resolved. The words he gave Xiao Xia a unique golden egg to hide were the love of a young boy. "I like you" The secret kiss under the big tree by the black lake after falling in love, the walk under the moonlight the day before Furong's wedding, what Xiao Xia said seriously "I do" I think Xiaoxia is very vivid. Although she is not perfect, I can feel that she is growing step by step from the large and delicate writing style. Underneath his arrogant and calm appearance, there is also a passion for the court, a tenderness when his friends dislike him, a resistance to brutal rule, and a firmness in love. But the girl who was entangled with the savior to the end died step by step in the early spring of 1998. Shala's life was short but long, plain and brilliant. At least they had been passionate and would never forget that they were always in the arms of love. "Pain is heavy, happiness is light." In the face of death, every moment of joy and sorrow is luxury and temporary. I think Harry's flawless view of Bai Yueguang is a joy that Yun Chao Yu Mu cannot achieve. In another world, the still plain black lake is leaning against the big tree. There is no need to worry about others, only they are happy with each other forever. May they have eternal happiness year after year! !

This is a very novel experience. Frankly speaking, I actually don't like this kind of fan fiction without golden fingers and obvious heartthrobs. But when I first saw that the heroine was from the Krum family, I wanted to give it a try. I think the best part of this book is the description of Quidditch. The feeling of blood boiling all over the body is really wonderful. There are indeed very few emotional lines. And the first part gave me a very bland feeling, like riding a slide, but the slide is horizontal. I wanted to give up, but luckily I persisted [laughs] It's beautiful.

I read two pages without reading the introduction and thought the writing was very good, so I tied it and found out that there was a be warning. This review proves the importance of reading the introduction first and then reading the article. Otherwise, you will be like me and hallucinate the sound of the author sharpening his knife, but you can't help but click on it immediately every time there is an update [face covering]

The author's writing style is very delicate and highly reproduces the moist and warm magical atmosphere of the original work! The Harry here is not the stereotyped hero in the movie, but the sensitive, stubborn, flesh-and-blood original Harry. He and the heroine Shaila went from tit-for-tat to soul resonance, and their evenly matched relationship was the most touching. What poked me the most was the heroine Shaila. She is slightly heartthrob but not Mary Sue at all. Why do I like her? Shaila's independence and liveliness are exactly the same as my girlfriend's. As I read it, I felt like I was watching her parallel world story. This is a masterpiece with online logic, delicate emotions, and full of original flavor. You can read it with confidence.

It is really the best-looking HP fanfic in my memory. The writing is beautiful and smooth and has a little humor. I fell in love with the heroine unconsciously as I read it. The emotional line of the young couple is also very delicious. I sincerely recommend it to those who like the original style, please read it! ! ! ! Come on, the author! !

It's really good to watch. Although it is the main plot of the original work, the heroine's personal plot does not completely follow the main plot, and the growth line is very fulfilling. I personally like to see the character's growth line greater than the emotional line. As the author said, it is true that the emotional line is very slow, but the other branches, including the various performances of the supporting characters, are very fulfilling. And it is very consistent with the original work. Neither Harry nor other original characters have OOC. It seems that it is difficult to see protagonists in Tomato who do not have Gold Finger and have independent growth lines. Most of the protagonists have been seen from the beginning, setting the tone and image of the whole story. But the change in Shayla's mental journey is very reasonable. You can see how she grows from making mistakes to a character who makes correct decisions. What's even more rare is that I didn't see any slander against a certain character in the article. Every character is very three-dimensional, regardless of their strengths or weaknesses. Now I am looking forward to the ending, because I think the overall main line of the article and what I want to express are the same as the original work. Make every sacrifice meaningful and every farewell more valuable. Including, you can also see that the author bought a lot of foreshadowing in various places, and I hope the author can take it back in the end. When I got to the middle of the article, I realized that the author said there were multiple endings, and I felt even more excited. We are currently in the seventh year of school, so we should be able to see the ending soon, right? Another thing that I like very much is that whether it is the title of the article or the title of the volume, it feels like it has been written with great care and can correspond to the content of each chapter and each year.

Even though it is probably BE, I still came in because of the original work mentioned in the introduction. I love watching the confrontation path in my life... Unfortunately, it is too rare among HP fans. With this one, I have only come across two books in total that deal with Harry's confrontation path... The psychological process of Xia La's secret love almost killed me...[Crying][crying][crying] All in all, this is a rough fanfic, and the process is not sweet and may even seem quite sad for the time being. You need to be prepared before watching it. If you are interested in the original work, it is still worth watching. However, Harry's role in the early stage is not much. After the two people got familiar with each other, it was fine. Although it didn't take long for problems to arise again. I was really impressed [Petrochemical]

Why is it only 7.? It's seriously inconsistent. The writing is very good, at least 9 points or more. The original characters in it are all vivid and not OOC at all. They are friendly to people who like Snake House or Lion House. There is no blame on anyone. The minor characters are also very charming. Some scenes are particularly graphic. The relationship between the girls is particularly cute. The ambiguous period with Harry is super delicious. It is not pure saccharin. I really like the ambiguous pull. 😍. It would be nice to have a few more chapters of ambiguous pull. It is a rare bg that I can read (pure sweetness is really boring, it is better to have no cp). This book is really good, and the plot is also very reasonable. There is no brainless heartthrob and I fell in love with it just by looking at the face. Harry is a bit of a snake, which is consistent with the original book. Draco is cowardly and cute but not OOC. Theodore also fights well but is a bit sad. After a few months, I forgot about the plot and read it again (x)

What I saw was a very smooth and smooth HP fanfic. The heroine made me blend in without any sense of disobedience, and she was not very God's perspective. And the author's writing style made me feel like the original world view. She is a very vivid character [crying] Really, this is the fanfic that I have seen so far that best matches the original book.