COD B: the Gun Is the Pen, Life Is the Contract

No, Bro, why did it stop? Come back and write quickly! [Angry][crying] So far, it seems that there is nothing surprising, the writing is okay, the plot is compact, some humorous dialogues make the characters more vivid, and the plot is not so dull. In addition, the mystery of Laoji's identity gradually unfolds with the execution of each mission. The feelings of the soldiers are accumulated naturally as they get along slowly. Of course, some of them are attracted by Laoji's character hahaha At present, everyone has probably started to express their feelings to Laoji. If the author can still remember to come back and write, I am really looking forward to the future Shura Field [Learned]

As an iron-blooded otome who joins the party on behalf of others, I would like to say that it is quite easy to join the party, and it feels more like a real person. From the current point of view, the progress of the emotional line is not abrupt and smooth, and the plot logic is also very clear and not messy. Moreover, the author's writing style can be said to be excellent. It is hand-written and has no traces of AI (judging from personal experience in reading the article)

To sum up, in fact, there are many advantages. First of all, the writing is relatively smooth. Secondly, a very important point is that the emotional line is very reasonable. There will not be the kind of emotional line that advances very quickly. The previous plot design was very realistic, and the description of some fights is very exciting in my opinion, and the control of the characters is also very perfect. Secondly, what I like most is the portrayal of YN. It makes me feel that I am so awesome. Why am I so handsome? No wonder they all fall in love with me. It is as simple as breathing. Of course the disadvantage is that I read too quickly. After reading it, you will feel a sense of loss 💔 It feels like lovelorn.

Boss. Just write so well. I wasn't excited at all. So pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty. How can she be so beautiful? Damn it. The writing is simply divine. It's so delicious. This rice is delicious, delicious, delicious, delicious, delicious, delicious. Teacher, I will always follow you. [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss]

The emotional line is delicate, the plot is reasonable, the writing is nice and the characters are distinct. Outsiders can't really tell the difference between OOC and they just think it fits the "stereotype" impression and makes it so exciting ~ I read several books and suddenly traveled through time and then found a way to join 141 and grow from 0. The opening of this book is quite unique! And yn's strong setting really pokes me hehe~ The author is going to update faster and faster. He lives on this fragrant rice! Let me add, good generation! Good job! ! Very good! ! ! My beloved treasure article gives me fire! ! !

The first is the plot. The description of tasks in the plot promotes the development of the relationship between the characters, just like putting together a small puzzle piece to form a complete story. If you look carefully, you will see that the emotions of the characters are like a glass of water that does not boil all at once. It slowly heats up and occasionally drops, but after a while it becomes even warmer. Secondly, it is easy to substitute, but since it is from God's perspective, I know that the final result is love, but you might as well substitute an unknown emotional perspective. Finally, I am very grateful to the author for bringing such a pleasant story, Urgent update~😊

I asked how this writing style seemed so familiar to me. It seemed like I had read two books in a row. The writing is very good, and there are some humorous points. The development is not awkward, the details are very vivid, and you can bring true feelings into the story. Summary: Delicious and love to eat [love]

What I can say after reading the current chapter: The writing is good (no flow, but the wording is exquisite) The plot is tight (one link is linked to the other) The characters are created (yn has a sense of life, and the characters in the plot are also very powerful) There are no flaws so far, recommended 👌🏻

It's so beautiful. I really like the setting of yn in this book.

The author's writing is so good that I'm going to read another one [laughs]) The plot is perfect, the characters are perfect, and the foreshadowing is perfect. The protagonist still has a hidden identity, which I enjoyed reading.

I went to see such a beautiful thing, but there were so few people watching it. I personally feel that it is one of the better ones in Tomato. It is easy to take in and the writing is not embarrassing at all!

I love you is such a sincere and sincere word ~ ​​well written! I really like the unique plot of the novel! There are no glitches so far. Everything is fine. Thank you, author! You are so special. You are different from the chicken drumsticks I know. You give me a juicy feeling. You will catch my eye whenever I see you. Even if you are expressionless, many times I want to taste you. I want to know how juicy you are, but I feel that you have a layer of crispy skin on the outside that I don't want to break.

This book firmly attracted my attention after reading two chapters. It is quite humorous and very strong. After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that the emotional lines are quite natural and not inexplicable. It also echoes the COD world view and the battle details are more realistic. I have read more than a dozen of COD Bili's head works. Even if I don't compare it with the same kind, I would give it a nine points. The writing is funny.

Okay, okay, nice looking

I don't know what to say, but it's just two words: "good-looking"

Did the author install surveillance on my P?

I really like this book. I hope my wife can cook more (-^^-)

Let me speculate why this good book has such a low rating. It should be because there are too few people who have reviewed it, so I took action [smile][smile]

Super super super super super super super beautiful

What a hearty reading! So beautiful! ! More to come, love to read!

The writing is very smooth, the plots are intertwined, the writing is great, and the emotional descriptions are delicate. However, K's mother was forced to leave because she was too emotionally stable to be a supermodel in this field [laughing] Xiao Ke and Xiao Xiong made my heart soft. Ghost's vicious tongue finally started to change. There are also some original characters that are also very attractive. The only shortcoming is that the author stopped updating [crying] [crying]

To be honest, the writing is very beautiful. The only shortcoming is that it is not bright enough (color) [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Immortal product, sweet, just like this one, you can go into the pit with confidence [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The character described is calm, gentle, restrained, no noisy, no cute descriptions, nothing I don't like, I like it! ! ! The story is also very reasonable and attractive. I can't say anything else. Anyway, I like it very much.

I really like this kind of plot. I really like this kind of plot. Every event is wonderfully written, and the details of the battle are very exciting. The key point is that the emotional lines of the characters are reasonable and very fragrant. Every sentence can make my head immediately have a picture. The author please update it quickly! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

Bring the character to life

Nice! Not a novice in writing

Good looking! So fragrant

Very nice, I like it very much! ! ! (മ𐃷മ)

Good, good, good, good... Good!

Nice! No need to say more!