Mortal*************

The plot is exciting and connects the past and the next. It's good. I hope I can keep writing.

The author has great potential and this book is the best mortal novel I have seen on Tomatoes so far All the names of people and magic weapons have changed.

I haven't read the original novel, but I think it's okay. Don't be so angry when reading a novel. Did you spend any money? It would be better to encourage the author more.

Not bad, no need to say more, there is nothing poisonous about it, it cannot be said to be a divine book but it can be regarded as a good fanfic.

Okay, give it a good review

Reading is smooth and comfortable

Well written, I like reading it

Personally I think it looks good

The plot is reasonable and very interesting.

I personally think it looks pretty

Not bad, come on! Don't go into Dongchangzi

That's great, don't stop, otherwise I'll spread rumors that you are Xiaonan Niang [shy]

Must give five stars, no need to hesitate at all

Okay, there's nothing bad about it. The plot of the original novel has not been changed at this stage, and it's not a nanny novel. It's very interesting. It's one of the better fanfics I've read, but I just started writing it. The number of words is too few.

The plot can be detailed without being procrastinating. The protagonist has his own opportunities, and the plot is not too brainless. Interested fellow Taoists can give it a try

It can be pretty good-looking. It is probably because there are not many people that the rating is not high. The author should update quickly. One chapter a day is too slow. I've read it all.