Cat's Eye************

Whether it is 1V1 or 1V2, the main reason is that the development of the emotional line in the early stage is a bit too fast and too fierce. The starting point of Yukijian, Hitomi and Rui's love has not been found. Yukimi likes Hitomi by explaining her liking for characters in her previous life, and explains tears by being understood by tears. Then Hitomi likes Yukimi because of understanding. Yukimi is charming and gentle when it comes to tears. ? The logic is described in the article, but it feels like there is very little foreshadowing - the ultimate emotional satisfaction comes from the deep emotional experience, the relationship between the characters and the exchange of souls. In the first chapter of the book, Xuejian and Hitomi happened before they had even met, and in more than ten chapters, it happened again with Tear. It is indeed very fast, but the emotional feeling is not deep when reading. It seems that this kind of impactful and intimate action is needed to forcefully rush into the relationship between Tear and Hitomi, using this action as an important starting anchor point. It makes sense logically, but I can't emotionally mobilize it. The writing style of this book adds to the restraint of emotions. The author uses the important understanding and communication of the characters to promote emotions, and Yukijian's philosophy of restraint is just like the style of this book. The author uses words to describe the charm of the characters, but cannot feel the charm of the characters. There is also the scene where Lei and Xuejian reenact the drunken scene... Knowing that it will cause harm but still not controlling it, and then Xuejian running away is understandable. It's just the close contact between the two when I was communicating with Yukimi and Hitomi's worry and anxiety about not knowing anything and still picking coffee beans outside... It's hard to say in comparison.

The progress in the early stage is fast and sweet, the middle stage is a little sad and pleasant, and the later stage is so sweet. Really delicious😋😋 The last time I saw something so delicious was the story between Yuno and Tomie

It looks good, but of course it may not be to everyone's taste. I personally recommend you to read Lovers first. This is a slightly similar but completely different story to this book. If you find it unacceptable, you can choose to leave but please don't stress. In the end, I think the content is very exciting and I can't stop reading it. I look forward to more updates (๑• . •๑)

It's so beautiful, their relationship is simply magical [love]

The novel is hearty and hearty, the story of three people, Xuejian's frankness, the anxious and conflicting emotions, and the three-dimensional characters.

Damn it made me cry! It's not easy, Dada! I hope you can continue writing it. Although it's cold, it's great👏

A rare fanfic of the three Maoyan sisters and Baihe. The plot and writing are smooth. I recommend it.

Will Xuejian be countered? [Shy]

I really like double heroine stories

Not enough to read the author, not enough to read, please increase your efforts to update [Adoration]

It's pretty good. It's the first time I've seen a Maoyan fanfic.

The teacher's writing is so good, it can't be described in words at all, the ambiguity and pull of this emotion. No! It's so beautiful, my heart is tugging at it.

Delicious😋delicious, looking forward to tomorrow's update, don't be too tired and pay attention to your health

It's very well written. I love reading and writing more.

I like it, I like it, I like it, please write it better, it must not be unfinished or run away, please

I have been reading this book and that one. Judging from my several years of book experience, the writing is pretty good and the plot is pretty good. Please continue to use it, teacher. As long as the teacher doesn't do anything, just that kind of bad job (I don't know how to determine this range, but it is still good for now) it will be a matter of time before it becomes popular, but after all, it is an orange title and it may not be very popular here. Anyway, come on, author and teacher! [Sending Hearts]

It's really beautiful. [Sending Hearts]

Immortal product! The author's writing is so delicate!

Nice! ! ! Delicate feelings

It's so pretty. Please keep it sweet.

The relationship between the three people is simply magical

It's very beautiful. Don't stop updating. Dare to stop updating. I will let you know what cruelty is [laughing]

Very delicious [Learned][Learned][Learned]

It's very well written, please come on, it must be finished.

I didn't expect that there are fanfics of the three Maoyan sisters. They're very good-looking and they're my cup of tea.

In the early stage, it was so sweet that I chuckled, but in the later stage, it was a little bit knifey, and it was so delicious [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Although Mr. Yukijian is a legendary miner, he can't resist the amnesia knife. Author, I really beg you, I just want to watch something sweet [crying]

Come back soon, big brother