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The teacher's writing is quite good, and the character creation is also good, but I have a small suggestion, that is, can you reduce the use of some brackets? In some places, readers can understand without explanation. If there are too many brackets, it will feel like redundancy [Love] [Love] Finally, come on, teacher!
Damn it, why is it only chapter 39? I'm looking at you carefully. Teacher, you raised me really poorly [I'm about to cry]
The teacher's writing is still very good. I saw that the teacher responded to other people's comments and corrected them. There are no more brackets at the end. It looks much better than before [laughs]
Please give me more [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
In fact, the plot written by the teacher is well developed, but this is a time-travel article, and the system did not see it later. Then, is there too much modern language mixed in?