[Two male protagonists + book wearing + group portrait + double cleanliness + self-guided strategy + ultimate pulling + crematorium for all members]
Shen Xinghe originally wanted to conquer the villainous prince and return home alive after passing through the book and becoming a hater of thousands of people.
As a result, he accidentally used too much force and turned the cold and straight male senior brother who was originally going to kill him into a clingy mad dog.
Shen Xinghe: "Senior brother, I really just want to do the task!"
Gu Changli (wiping his sword): "Well, you do the task, and I'll do it for you."
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"Senior brother, aren't you cultivating the ruthless way?"
"After meeting you, my Taoist heart was broken and I just wanted to practice the Tao of Acacia."
Reader comments
The teacher's writing is quite good, and the character creation is also good, but I have a small suggestion, that is, can you reduce the use of some brackets? In some places, readers can understand without explanation. If there are too many brackets, it will feel like redundancy [Love] [Love] Finally, come on, teacher!
Damn it, why is it only chapter 39? I'm looking at you carefully. Teacher, you raised me really poorly [I'm about to cry]
The teacher's writing is still very good. I saw that the teacher responded to other people's comments and corrected them. There are no more brackets at the end. It looks much better than before [laughs]
Please give me more [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
In fact, the plot written by the teacher is well developed, but this is a time-travel article, and the system did not see it later. Then, is there too much modern language mixed in?
The teacher's writing is quite good, and the character creation is also good, but I have a small suggestion, that is, can you reduce the use of some brackets? In some places, readers can understand without explanation. If there are too many brackets, it will feel like redundancy [Love] [Love] Finally, come on, teacher!
Damn it, why is it only chapter 39? I'm looking at you carefully. Teacher, you raised me really poorly [I'm about to cry]
The teacher's writing is still very good. I saw that the teacher responded to other people's comments and corrected them. There are no more brackets at the end. It looks much better than before [laughs]
Please give me more [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
In fact, the plot written by the teacher is well developed, but this is a time-travel article, and the system did not see it later. Then, is there too much modern language mixed in?