From the Beginning of Qin to Honkai Impact, God Kiana Is Here

It's not bad, and it's not purely based on a mythical plot. Originally, I have always scorned the so-called role-playing and templates, because I feel that it is better to write the original characters directly, and I have seen many role-playing templates written in the same way as pre-made dishes. I've read Beng Tieyuan a lot, but this one is still quite fresh. I hope I can write 100 chapters [Eating Melon]

Super nice. It's just that Qi Bao, a god who shoots through the solar system with his finger, can completely rely on this template to complete Tian Wen (relying on his own strength to form a cabinet), War Wen (the front line against global collapse), Guardian of the Common People (what Fu Hua has done), etc.

It's very nice. I can only say that once I get it, it's a treasure. It's rated 8.0 And I booked it. At present, I personally feel that the dentist is a poisonous spot. I'll see how I deal with it in the future.

Hundred or single? Don't get married, be ignorant, and bullshit. I want to read cool stories, not heretics.

Well, my personal feeling is still very good. As long as it doesn't collapse later, I can go up to 8.5 Points. The main reason is that I finally found a template article. Sometimes I really don't know why there is a role-playing part in those templates. If you say role-playing, you just do the role-playing. What kind of template do you have to create? It makes people really outrageous, I feel like,

Overall, it is very interesting. It turns out to be a fanfic of mythology. This type is still very rare. As for the ability of the protagonist, I suggest that it is better to suppress the combat ability. This can only suppress the combat ability. There is no way the Herrscher's combat effectiveness is too strong. If you put it in modern times, a Herrscher would be invincible, let alone ancient times, and it is the Herrscher of the Sky. This combat power itself is enough. I don't even think there is a need for a Herrscher template. The protagonist only needs to wear a shell of Kiana. The character Yi Xiaochuan is very complicated. My tendency is not to kill him if he can, but to kill him if he can't. My tendency is to be neutral, as long as he doesn't pose a threat to me. It's not bad to keep him as a mascot, but if you really think this guy is disgusting, you can also get rid of him. My suggestion is that as long as the group pet article is a group pet article, everyone dotes on the protagonist. If you think it is fun, you can also have some ambiguity. I suggest you don't get married. After all, you can marry anyone. So the ancient marriage change articles are very bad. I don't like them unless they are worn by wives. I don't like those kind of flat tweets, where the protagonist is invincible at the beginning and everything is flat. This kind of article is not interesting. But the protagonist is invincible, but the flat push is not good. Generally speaking, my opinion is good. So I give you five stars. Personally, I think it looks very good. Of course, it's just my personal opinion.

It's pretty good-looking, not too toxic, but there are a few problems The first one: This is not pure history, it is a fan of "Mythology". Different people have different opinions. I personally think it is okay. The second one: There are bad sentences and missing words in almost every paragraph. It's okay if you don't look carefully. Listening to the book is a disaster, and it's extremely uncomfortable. The third one: The protagonist has Kiana's appearance and abilities, but she is not completely acting. She is just covered in a layer of template, which may be a poisonous point for some readers, but for me it's fine. That's all for now, other possible questions will be added later.

You can't have the consciousness of Honkai to cause trouble. The protagonist Konglu has no abilities at all, but he keeps emphasizing the consequences of Honkai, which makes him a little scared.

I listened to more than 30 chapters in one go. It was a good read, but the names of the characters were a bit difficult to read. I can't help but curl up the corners of my mouth. [Cover face]

It's great. The front part looks average, but the back part turns out to be more comfortable. I hope I can perform stably and don't be poisonous at the back. I really like Kiana's novel. It's not easy to find an author. Come on.

Overall, it is a good work. The author wrote in the middle that he might have had a whim and wanted to do something fancy, but luckily he stopped it. It would be interesting to see the Honkai Impact as spiritual energy. Kiana will be bored if she has been an emperor for a long time. I want to see the future dynasties.

The best Mythology of Great Qin is much better than the shit Mythology.

I think it's better to wear Bengbeng's Saintess set to see the cards [sneaky laugh]

I've caught up. The current situation is that the Queen's behavior is biased towards Na Na's heart. The subsidiary template of Konglu Template is a bit cloudy when it comes to St. Freya's Memories. I thought I could make dumplings but I thought I would fight for hegemony for the Qin Dynasty. As a result, I still have no intention of fighting for hegemony. It may also be that I want the progress of the plot to be too fast. Overall, it is relatively good, I think it's mid-to-high.

The first part may be to introduce the plot, and the writing style is relatively immature and a little bad, but in the end, the writing is very good. The author is also very careful, at least the logic is not that bad. Now is the ancient immortal god to the Middle Ages finally to modern times There is still a lot to take away from the mythical plot. Then it will be a new stage, leaving the blue star and opening up the sea of ​​stars You can go. Some stories about Xingtie [laughing evilly] There is still a lot more that can be written Come on, author [Like]

Beautiful, 99% rare. It's equivalent to an ancient feudal dynasty meeting a female version of the Astartes. No, the female version of the powerful psyker can't defeat it [sneaky laugh]

This book is surprisingly okay. The first mortal chapter is probably a mythical event. The protagonist feels more conflicted in the mortal chapter. Later, it starts to be similar to cultivating immortals. I directly use the template of Liyue in Genshin Impact and mix it with Sun Wukong and Yang Jian. The result is surprisingly okay.

If I keep writing at this pace, the rating of the real book will go up, but I hope the author can control the description of the protagonist: just like Otto Apokalis said: There are three times of growth in a person's life. For the first time, I understand what is right and wrong For the second time, I understood that some things are not just right or wrong. The third time, after understanding that there is no right or wrong in things, I still firmly do what I believe in and take responsibility for it. Now what the author needs to describe is the protagonist's process from being confused to taking on his own responsibilities, and what the author's responsibility is and how to change all need to be described by the author's own three views. As a visitor of stories, I will look forward to the stories written by the author.

The idea is a great idea, but the mythology part is a bit too much. You can read it as a mythology fanfic. Book friends who are not very strict about historical details and character logic can read it together.

There are a lot of poisonous points, but this is one of the few fics in Tomato that doesn't procrastinate, and it's not difficult to see that the author has a complete outline. It has completely turned into a self-help post later on. I thought of this book and came back to read it. The protagonist has been completely taken over by Kiana, and Da Qin has also been taken over by Honkai Impact.

Author, please, please continue writing [I'm about to cry], but it's hard to get popular because people with two dimensions don't necessarily like to read historical dramas [face covering]

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Author, you have forgotten the roaring dog of Erlang Shen, and Nezha can be written according to the traditional myth. In addition, where is Xiang Yu, when will their family have a meal, and where is the memory of Thirteen Ying Jie. Also, I want to see Xiao Xing/Qiong Ming with Jing Yuan's face. Brother Yang Jian, accompanied by Xiao Danheng and Xiao Yueyue, then went to Xianzhou to play. The expressions of Xianzhou Jingyuan and others, Ying Xing followed the path of the author of Tiangong Kaiwu in history, but with a familiar face, and the same body of Fengsheng Pharmacist, Pharmacist Liuli Buddha

This book is good. I didn't feel any obvious poisonous points after reading 23 chapters. Personally, I highly recommend it.

It's quite promising. The author has good ideas, but he could still add a little more.

It looks good, I want to read it a hundred times, come on, author! ! !

The subject matter is okay, average

At least it's better than those who use the Bengsan template. To me, the male-changing template is also a female, which is really poisonous.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the panel progress is too slow, many details have not been polished, and the subject matter is very novel.

Kiana is interesting