Horimiya: I Flirted with Miyamura, and Hori Got Jealous

As far as the writing is concerned, the writing is good, and the character creation and plot development are okay. As a fanfic, it is worth appreciating. Of course, we must continue to see the author's subsequent performance. As for the psychological shaping of the protagonist, I personally think the author has a good grasp of the protagonist and Miyamura getting along, especially the feeling in the heart when seeing Hori and Miyamura getting along. This is indeed very detailed. Of course, in my opinion, for the character of Ishikawa, there is no need to continue writing about how he treats Hori. You can write about him letting go faster, which will be more suitable for the character of Ishikawa and will be more conducive to the advancement of the plot. Furthermore, the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine can be written more clearly. I hope that the heroine can clarify her emotions faster and that the heroine can have more roles. In this way, there may be additional additions based on the content in the future. Overall, it is good and worth watching.

Very beautiful, both Honoka books are written by the author

Sawada is right! Honoka is just the cutest!

It looks good, needless to say, the body is still warm. 😘[smirking][smirking]

Come on, tomatoes are the best sawada powder

It is rare to see a book about Hori and Miyamura, and the author's description of the emotions between different characters is very delicate, which gave me a relaxing and comfortable feeling. The heroine is the lovely Honoka 💕. It also maintains a soothing rhythm in the advancement of the plot, which is worth watching.

Wow, the old author has opened a new Hori and Miyamura, gkd

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