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As far as the writing is concerned, the writing is good, and the character creation and plot development are okay. As a fanfic, it is worth appreciating. Of course, we must continue to see the author's subsequent performance. As for the psychological shaping of the protagonist, I personally think the author has a good grasp of the protagonist and Miyamura getting along, especially the feeling in the heart when seeing Hori and Miyamura getting along. This is indeed very detailed. Of course, in my opinion, for the character of Ishikawa, there is no need to continue writing about how he treats Hori. You can write about him letting go faster, which will be more suitable for the character of Ishikawa and will be more conducive to the advancement of the plot. Furthermore, the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine can be written more clearly. I hope that the heroine can clarify her emotions faster and that the heroine can have more roles. In this way, there may be additional additions based on the content in the future. Overall, it is good and worth watching.

Sawada is right! Honoka is just the cutest!

Very beautiful, both Honoka books are written by the author

Come on, tomatoes are the best sawada powder

It looks good, needless to say, the body is still warm. [Blowing kiss][smirking][smirking]

Wow, the old author has opened a new Hori and Miyamura, gkd

It is rare to see a book about Hori and Miyamura, and the author's description of the emotions between different characters is very delicate, which gave me a relaxing and comfortable feeling. The heroine is the lovely Honoka [Send Heart]. It also maintains a soothing rhythm in the advancement of the plot, which is worth watching.

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I just like watching daily life [laughs]

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Boss [crying] Where is my book [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

No, buddy, I'm out of books

Why is he now a freshman in high school, now a senior in high school, and now a sophomore in high school?

I haven't finished watching it yet, why has it been taken off the shelves [smile]

One... Four chapters a day? Haki, go away... You guy...

I'm going, no, what's going on? I saved a little bit, but the book is gone?

It doesn't matter if you have a lot of super Cp, it's good to grind it.

It's better to have a sunny protagonist. In the previous book, sometimes the protagonist felt more depressed than Miyamura. In this book, it feels like the loneliness that an ordinary person has.

I just saw your new book now. The author is great. Remember me? [Blowing kiss]

It's okay. I finished reading it in one sitting, but it's a little lacking.

Very good, especially after reviewing the anime

An old author, trustworthy, probably the best author to write about Hori and Miyamura on Eggplant

It's rare for Honoka to have a single heroine, and another book is also written by the same author.

I'm also reading another one, and they are indeed the best.

Anyone who has read the Hori and Miyamura fanfics will definitely have read this author's book. He is one of the strongest daily fanfic authors in Tomato, and he is the latest work that makes you want to leave!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! With the polishing of the previous book, this one is very well written.

Tomato is one of the few authors who I think writes about Hori and Miyamura fandoms. The writing is very good. I will eat this food first.

Nice! Needless to say, it is a lot better than the author's previous book. Come on.

I didn't expect it. I didn't expect it. I thought the first Hori and Miyamura was yours, but I didn't expect the second one was still yours [Cool][Cool][Cool]

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