I'm a newbie, I've been watching Tomato for a few years, and I'm writing a book for fun when I have nothing to do! I never thought I could write a novel... Hahaha
The first few chapters are too wordy and use too many adjectives! It's embarrassing to look at it myself… It'll be more concise later.
Although the story is a bit cliche, it doesn't have any bloody plot, nor does it suppress the protagonist's abilities. Although it was written with a lot of thought, it definitely has shortcomings. Comments are welcome, but please be merciful.
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I made it up myself... I'll give it a perfect score first... Hahaha
I made it up myself... I'll give it a perfect score first... Hahaha