I'm a beginner. I've been reading Tomato for years, and figured I'd write something for fun in my spare time! I never thought I could write a novel too... Hahaha.
The first few chapters are way too long-winded, with far too many adjectives! I cringe when I read them myself... It gets more concise later.
The story may be a bit clichéd, but there's no melodramatic plot, and the protagonist's abilities aren't held back. I did try to write with some thought, but there are bound to be shortcomings. Feel free to criticize, but go easy on me.
I made it up myself... I'll give it a perfect score first... Hahaha