Magical Sonata

You can't reach a thousand miles without taking small steps, especially in a field like this that I have never set foot on. I believe that hard work will eventually pay off. If you like it, I have prepared the stories of twelve city-states for you, a setting collection of 70,000 words, and 20 preparatory chapters to deal with emergencies. If it's not to your liking, I'm sorry for wasting your time and wish you good morning, good afternoon and good night. From chapter 20 onwards, all the content of this book has been optimized, with new paragraphs and chapters, streamlined deletions, and reduced reading pressure and length. ——Separating line—— Today is January 25, 2026. Let me leave a message to record it. Maybe the ending is not very ideal. I don't know where you know it. I know that from the current point of view, you can basically see it all at a glance. I understand that the subject matter is already backward, and it is not the one that Tomato mainly produces. It may end up like a daffodil. Of course, it doesn't matter whether it is a flower or not. But I don't want it to sink into the sea. Magic is a separate world view and set of settings that I spent a lot of time thinking about from the beginning of the idea to the gradual perfection. I thought about many stories and many people, and they lived and ran back and forth in my mind, playing out their own stories. If there is no hope, just have a clear conscience and be worthy of this inspiration and yourself. I use the sentence I gave in my introduction to myself. Even if they are still working hard in my mind, why should I stop moving forward and abandon them? [This is a road of no return unless you have a heart that will never surrender and fight against fate] Still wish you happiness, stranger

The group portraits are still very comfortable to watch, and the different characters are well portrayed and very distinctive. It can be seen that it is quite creative and looks desuwa. I would like to give a suggestion to Lao T. You can consider shortening each chapter, which will be more in line with Tomato's current mainstream word count. 4K5k per chapter is actually about the same. Then you can consider writing a little "discloseable information" at the end of the chapter.

The plot logic is very clear. From the initial struggle at the bottom to the later city-state resistance, every step of development is foreshadowed. The price of the magic book and the conflicts between races are all handled reasonably. The writing is also good. It does not have the common problem of brainless and cool writing, but it is still very good.

I have the potential to be on fire. Remember to kick me when I get angry. Having an outline and having one's own background is more than most authors can do.

I enjoyed reading it. It's difficult for this book not to become popular.

With the quality of novels, it is only a matter of time before they become popular.

I enjoyed reading it. It's difficult for this book not to become popular.

I discovered this book accidentally, and I didn't expect it to be quite interesting.

The plot is compact and not procrastinating, the pacing is just right, and the writing is good.

A friend recommended it to me and I thought it was well written.

The author's writing is good, the characters are vivid and have a strong sense of immersion.

The multi-heroine setting is very attractive and looks great

The author's writing is very good and the story has a fast pace

The structure is exquisite, the doom and the origin are intertwined, the relationship between the characters is deep, the rhythm is tight, and the excitement and tears coexist.

It's been a while since I've seen such a wonderful novel. I've added it to my bookshelf and will continue to read.

It looks good and is logical, but there are still holes to be dug in the middle. It depends on how they are filled.