[Single female protagonist + Arknights + Slow Heat + Highway]
Travel around Terra China and experience all kinds of life. Record everything you see and say in a book, and the summary should be this Terra Travel Diary. And these are not the first views of this land that I can see, but they are the first glimpses of it that I have seen. Receiving a positive reply from the former principal completely broke my peaceful life. I wanted to travel across this land and write my own travel diary...! However, reality is often different from one's expectations. Ursus, a land of ice, Lateran, where chaos and order coexist, Iberia, which was once prosperous... I don't know if this travelogue will eventually find readers, and I don't know if it will be reduced to ashes in a certain inquisitor's furnace. But every time I opened it by the campfire, those voices and those faces would reappear in the firelight.
This is just an ordinary Terran story.
Reader comments
The writing seems okay? (Although it's okay to say that I'm a little uncomfortable with this style ੭ ᐕ)੭), but I don't know if it's because of my wrong memory of the settings, but I feel that the previous plot is a bit broken.
1. Regarding the dialogue between the protagonist and the old bookstore owner, I feel that the dialogue text is missing to a certain extent (I think it may be because I have watched too many plots of Ark, and I don't know much about general novels. After all, they are all dialogues). I did not see your direct text describing the protagonist telling the shopkeeper that the destination of this trip is Longmen, but the old shopkeeper accurately said it later in the text. What if the protagonist wants to go to Longmen to find Rhodes Island? Although it can be inferred from the context that the protagonist should have told the shopkeeper the route of his action (the dialogue text I saw only stated that it passed through Ursus, and there were also friends' comments on this route. It felt like there was a sentence missing between the two sentences), but I still think this writing is a bit inappropriate. There is also the evaluation of Rhodes Island by the old shop owner. I feel that he is a bit too well-informed, so much so that it seems like the author's comments in the narration (ー_ー)...
Rhode Island was founded in 1094, and the Chernobog incident occurred at the end of 1096. By all means, Rhode Island had only been established on this land for less than three years at this time. The shop owner's experience of meeting Rhode Island operators would not be three years ago. I feel that it would be more reasonable to change the statement that I came a few years ago to one or two years ago.
The place where the spaceship was stopped seemed a bit weird, but anyway, I feel that based on my reading experience of the first volume, this book is still worth reading. I wish the author a smooth life, smooth sailing, abundant financial resources, and ten consecutive double gold draws⸜₍๑•⌔•๑₎⸝
It's good to watch. It's been a long time since I've encountered a protagonist with such low damage, so that I can feel the suffering of this land (by the way, the top student doesn't even have a staff)
The writing seems okay? (Although it's okay to say that I'm a little uncomfortable with this style ੭ ᐕ)੭), but I don't know if it's because of my wrong memory of the settings, but I feel that the previous plot is a bit broken. 1. Regarding the dialogue between the protagonist and the old bookstore owner, I feel that the dialogue text is missing to a certain extent (I think it may be because I have watched too many plots of Ark, and I don't know much about general novels. After all, they are all dialogues). I did not see your direct text describing the protagonist telling the shopkeeper that the destination of this trip is Longmen, but the old shopkeeper accurately said it later in the text. What if the protagonist wants to go to Longmen to find Rhodes Island? Although it can be inferred from the context that the protagonist should have told the shopkeeper the route of his action (the dialogue text I saw only stated that it passed through Ursus, and there were also friends' comments on this route. It felt like there was a sentence missing between the two sentences), but I still think this writing is a bit inappropriate. There is also the evaluation of Rhodes Island by the old shop owner. I feel that he is a bit too well-informed, so much so that it seems like the author's comments in the narration (ー_ー)... Rhode Island was founded in 1094, and the Chernobog incident occurred at the end of 1096. By all means, Rhode Island had only been established on this land for less than three years at this time. The shop owner's experience of meeting Rhode Island operators would not be three years ago. I feel that it would be more reasonable to change the statement that I came a few years ago to one or two years ago. The place where the spaceship was stopped seemed a bit weird, but anyway, I feel that based on my reading experience of the first volume, this book is still worth reading. I wish the author a smooth life, smooth sailing, abundant financial resources, and ten consecutive double gold draws⸜₍๑•⌔•๑₎⸝
It's good to watch. It's been a long time since I've encountered a protagonist with such low damage, so that I can feel the suffering of this land (by the way, the top student doesn't even have a staff)