Comprehensive Comics: from the Beginning of Becoming Eiriri's Brother

It must be strongly supported. For now, I feel that there is no need to add other anime. If the characters have more emotional lines, they may not be able to grasp the emotional lines, and the roles will become difficult to distinguish. There are already many female band characters, so focusing on writing the current ten or so characters is amazing.

It's very interesting. The slow-paced daily life is written fluently without much lag, and the conversations with most of the girls in the article don't seem to deviate from the original work. However, Kasumigaoka Shiu's character image feels a bit too mature. She can show maturity at the age of ten, but it should not be maturity itself. When writing about her, you can also write a little scene about her as a little girl. It is right to go too far, and children who are too young will always act too mature and stand out. For example, there will be a series of works that are not in line with the current identity such as Kasumigaoka Shiyu's Reading of One Hundred Years of Solitude. But overall, this novel fits my reading interests well. In addition, I read some comments that the male protagonist is a bit of a dog-licker. But actually I don't quite agree with this. After all, the male protagonist only made contact under normal behavior and environmental logic. In a series of behaviors such as verbal behavior and so on, he did not show any licking. In the article, the relationships between the male protagonist, the female protagonist, and other female protagonists are all gradual, and there are no abrupt or embarrassing scenes. Normal social interaction with girls cannot be said to be a nuisance. After all, one cannot completely stop socializing with the opposite sex before the opposite sex can come to interact with you and like you. Unless you have a very special talent or a handsome face. In the article, the contact with the female protagonists such as Kasumigaoka Shiha, Toyokawa Shoko, Wakaba Mu, etc. Also seems to be quite normal. But it might be better if Toyokawa Shoko's character could be changed. After all, Toyokawa Shoko is only 10 years old now.

It's a very nice new book. When you first read it, you may feel that the protagonist is a little cold or dull, but later on you can feel the gentleness and delicacy of the protagonist. The author has written very well about the protagonist's relationship with different characters and the control of some details. It is very comfortable to read and makes you feel warm and sweet. Come on.

I caught up on the latest gen in one day. Let me tell you my opinion. I have almost never read anime or light novels (I only read good character clips and read them for a few minutes), so it was quite painful to read this novel. I had to search for each character to see what they looked like, their personalities and their stories. But it did not stop me from reading this book. It was well written. I only know that this book had the motivation to read the gen from the beginning of Chapter 1. , The male protagonist is a very nice and gentle person, and the female protagonists have different personalities and are quite interesting. I haven't seen them (anime, light novels) and don't really understand them. Anyway, they are quite interesting to me. By the way, I have read a lot of Yinglili in this one (so I am more familiar with her, the blond tsundere [facepalm]). Lily in this is really cute, not arrogant at all, just coquettish, and the author's recent update is so fierce that it starts with six chapters [Like] [Like] [Like] To sum up, I watched it too much. For me, personally, I haven't found any poisonous points or bad points. I hope it will be a happy ending later and I won't have any regrets! ! At the end of the extra chapter, every female protagonist gave birth to a beautiful baby for the male protagonist [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Finally, I wish the author a happy day, all the best, and good health. The same goes for the bosses. Thank you for your gifts that make the author even more cute [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Newbie, new book, please support! [Sending Hearts]

I've just read Chapter 24. It feels bland but I like reading it. It's just that there are people around 10 years old in it, and they all look very precocious. It would be nice if they could change their age a few years older, otherwise it always feels awkward when I read it. I saw Chapter 49. The person in it is Yinglili rather than another vivid girl, but his name is Yinglili. Alas, I have read Chapter 63. It is quite interesting and relaxing, but every time I think about it being in elementary school, I feel a sense of irritability and violation.

It's great. The author's control over emotions is very delicate, and the rhythm is very comfortable. It's very comfortable to read. This is the feeling of comprehensive comics, redeeming and changing some of the imperfections in the original works. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.

The writing and description are so detailed. I felt a strange feeling when I kept reading it (a very irritable feeling). Although it is not my cup of tea, it is still good overall. Maybe it's because I am very irritable! The protagonist is too young and the author's writing is very delicate. As a result, when the protagonist's talent is expressed, other people's reactions are too bland or take it for granted (ah~ not bad, this turns out to be a genius), but the protagonist is only in fifth grade! Based on those performances of the protagonist Prodigy! ? That's basically a monster (referring to talent). Anyway, just looking at it makes me feel weird. Maybe it's because I'm an ordinary person and don't understand or have never been exposed to those geniuses. Anyway, in the book, whether the music teacher or the literature professor, the protagonist or other elementary school students' amazing performances are all like that~ It's okay, not bad.

Very good, the author is very good. Now high school has officially begun. But there are too many characters, Bang Bang, Qingyin, Passerby and Shikamaru... There are so many female characters, and in the end, if you want to deal with them well, you basically have to go if. It is unlikely to accept them all, unless there is no concern at all about shaping the character in the previous article, and it is unlikely to accept only a few, which is missing girls. Finally, if the author hopes to finish it. Then a single if would be the most appropriate ending/it would also be nice to remain single. They are all very good. If the plot is not changed much in the future, the multi-female harem will ruin the book. [Blowing kiss]

I just watched a little bit, and I really like the character of the protagonist. It has a very quiet and beautiful feeling. There are very few protagonists like this in fan fiction, but it really made me feel comfortable. I will give you a five-star review first.

Comprehensive comic strip, well written I personally like daily stories written since childhood. I can see the growth of the characters, and I can understand the changes and transformations of the characters, whether male or female. When the writing is good, the characters are full and vivid. This is what I think is the advantage of this book. Secondly, the key points were found very well. The career line, whether it was writing or music, was very clear, and there was no problem with the distribution. Although there are relatively few innovations, the rhythm is very comfortable and there is nothing wrong with it. Although the system is the driving force of the plot, it is still handled well. You can see the personality and thoughts of the protagonist, make fewer mistakes and less poisonous points, and keep up the good work. What I like the most is the mature behavior of this kind of male protagonist and the calmness and gentleness at the core. I think this kind of coolness is something that the formulaic Asasi male protagonist and the slow male protagonist do not have (I hope more people write about this kind of thing, it is quite hard to find) But there are still some minor problems. Some plot designs are a bit sloppy. If you think about it deeply, you will find it a bit problematic. There is also the feeling that the general world view of manga authors is a bit distorted, and there is no sense of localized atmosphere that Japanese high-quality products give me (actually, this is not bad, after all, if the writing is good, there is no need to write a manga, just create an original one). You can check more information and so on, and more appropriate terms will not be too dramatic. Finally, there is not much pure daily life in the content (this is not important because I like to watch daily life, haha). Most of them are specific exchanges or plots with clear purposes. I think if the writing is good, you can try it. More of this kind of daily life will be more realistic. To sum up, I should actually give it a five-star rating. I think there are very few variety comics that have a comfortable pace and a good plot that is not toxic, but after all, there is no emotional drama. I hope to see the protagonist's maturity in love and the psychological change of accepting the concept of harem written in a natural way. I have read too many books with good settings but ruined by emotional drama and love (there is a book next door that I am very disappointed with. I hope you can write it well) I wish the author will get better and better as he writes better, his grades will improve step by step, and he will finish the work smoothly (please update more, I am short of books [blowing kiss])

It focuses on daily narration, without having to think about it. [Send Heart] The overall feeling is good. Personally, I can feel that the protagonist's thoughts are delicate [Like], but the reaction to the outside world is a bit bland. Although this may be a serious but gentle and delicate description of the protagonist's character [Thinking], it just gives people an impersonal feeling [rolls eyes]. The character is too perfect, and his personality is not obvious. This kind of character gives me a very boring feeling. It may be that the author's writing power is limited, but the overall feeling is quite satisfactory. Personal insights, I hope it will be helpful to the author. However, the protagonist knows what the other characters are thinking, and it's right to respond indifferently. Although it is also correct, the protagonist's reaction is so indifferent, which feels like a shortcoming.

First of all, it is a very slow book. From my point of view: If I were to say how comfortable it is to read this book? I think this book is okay, because there are not many novels on this subject, and it makes me feel very novel, without the sameness. Secondly, there are no big problems with the relationship between the characters in the book, the clarity of the logic, and the writing style of the articles (even if there are, please bear with me, it is a new book after all) Finally, I think the author has worked very hard. Every time when I feel that I am not full, the author will immediately update the book three times [shy][shy]. I originally thought that this book would be updated slowly, saving dozens of chapters, but I haven't read it for two days, so I updated it immediately, almost 30 chapters. Therefore, if you are in a book shortage, you can read it. After all, this is Tomato, which is considered good. And the length of my reading speaks for itself.

Praise! The plot flows smoothly and the author clearly knows the characters deeply. The most important thing: explosive updates! ! ! , The author is simply a superman [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]

Absolutely excellent work. If the author had not written a variety comic, but had set his own characters, this novel would definitely have a higher rating. It is really well written, and the writing style makes people come alive. It is a pity that most novel authors have lowered the subject of variety comics to a lower level. Many readers are not even willing to read variety comics.

Sometimes, those moments that can make deep memories and ups and downs of emotions require just the right time, the so-called right time, right place, and right people. I am very lucky. Currently, I am facing the stage of anxiety, eagerness, confusion and random thoughts. Listening to the songs I liked in the past and reading this novel, my complicated mood and thoughts are slowly calmed down and soothed. Most of them are personal feelings. This kind of warm daily life, watching the author write about the characters I watched in the past from a young age, writing about their daily life and their mental journey, I also got a little healing. Slowly, my mind began to reminisce about the past, remembering my own childhood, sitting at home watching my favorite TV shows and listening to my favorite songs. Really, at this moment, my heart has gained its own salvation. The older I get, the more fragile my heart becomes. I am really an old thing. It's just a personal feeling. Everyone needs to judge whether the work is good or bad. I only speak for myself. I think this is a pretty good one, at least so far.

[Facepalm][Facepalm][Like] It's really possible. It started with a variety comic, but after watching the end, I even forgot that this was a variety comic world. Even when the system prompted me to improve those sub-skills, I ignored the unconventional existence of the system. In my opinion, the characters in the book are already a group of beings with the same name. The relationship between all the characters is different from the relationship in the anime in my memory. Everything is harmonious. The author has written "brand new characters". I am fascinated by it. It is indeed a good work.

There are very few manga series with such delicate writing style, and the plot is pretty good. It is a good novel among daily manga series! At the moment, I just want to see how the author handles so many emotions in the later period [laughs evilly], and if possible, it is best to arrange some physical strengthening options for the protagonist. The protagonist involves music, painting, novels, and study. It is impossible without a good body!

It's great. The development series is different. It's sour and sweet. It would be better if the author could make the protagonist's image more lively in the future development. The author has a good grasp of the anime characters, but the protagonist's image is more like Asashi's human machine. It's too passive... It smells like a Japanese male protagonist [Thoughts]

I can't comment on the professional part. This is the most heart-warming novel I have seen in recent years. The world is very impatient, and I am also one of the impatient kings. It has been a long, long time since I read a book seriously, or watched an anime or movie without fast forwarding. This book is very enjoyable to read slowly, and will not make people rush to catch up on the latest. It makes my soul slow down, although my body is still anxious for itself. I don't strongly recommend this book. I just hope that those who are lucky enough to read it can read a few chapters slowly and see these soul-warming pictures, so that you can gently wipe away your tired souls in your busy life. I just realized that after reading for 8 hours, I only read about 70 chapters... It's really comfortable. It may be a bit excessive to talk about each paragraph, but just talking about most of the words makes the picture appear in my mind, which will definitely leave out a lot of heart-warming scenes.

I have only watched the heroine of Passerby, not others. The writing is okay, but I feel that Shiyu's character is a bit strange, and the author made the character description too mature for the convenience of writing. Then the clips where Xiaoxiang was added were very uncomfortable to watch. It can be seen that the author likes Xiaoxiang very much. In the end, I praised Xiaoluo very well.

A plain but interesting story, this is a story that belongs to many young boys and girls. The whole book is biased towards the music department, mainly focusing on the band, supplemented by novels, and then implementing the emotional lines of the heroines. The ordinary daily life, without the so-called excessive emotional ups and downs, is as plain as a stream, but it does not make people feel bored. Instead, it feels like an ideal life. The emotional line is a matter of course. There is no grand love story, only the ordinary and ordinary daily life like a steady flow of water. Every character in it has written his own emotional thoughts. Very nice

Not bad, although it's bland, I like it very much [blowing kiss]

The language is very warm and the descriptions are very picturesque. It is a highly recommended book.

It is a very quiet and gentle work, but the portrayal of the protagonist may be a little too perfect. It is basically a description of saving others. Maybe it can be thanked for the protagonist's own inner description. Of course, I was already very sleepy when I wrote it. Maybe I don't remember some of the plot very clearly. This is just my personal opinion. It's very beautiful. It's been a long time since I've seen such gentle and delicate writing.

How to say it? The male protagonist is very Asasi, which is okay if you have an appetite for it. This book focuses on healing and redemption. If you want to see gravity and distortion, you should not be able to see it. I really want to see the protagonist tell Su Shi that I am here to disband Connect. The scene is so interesting when I think about it.

The 100 chapters are rated 9.0, With delicate writing and deep thinking. At present, there are only plots related to the Bang series and the passerby heroine. The protagonist starts to interact with them from elementary school students. The current elementary school chapter has ended and the junior high school chapter has just begun. I look forward to the author completing the million-word novel. (A very enthusiastic and well-written author, Kuku is so excited haha)

The first few chapters are very heart-warming. They focus on the daily interactions with various characters, as well as the protagonist's own growth, plus the improvement of various skills and proficiency. The rhythm is very smooth. I look forward to the story of growing up. Good luck to the author.

This is a well-written comprehensive comic novel. I feel that the author has dabbled in literature and music, and the character creation is very delicate and has sincere emotions. Unlike other comprehensive comic characters, which only focus on appearance and behavior, but not on portraying the inner nature.

It looks good, but I don't know how it will end.