Su Qing: the World Is Becoming More and More Unfair

The writing of the novel is okay, but I often end up as a butt wiper. Without a little bit of the main character's show effect, this kind of comedy show must have something interesting to do well. The setting for Goldfinger is interesting but doesn't really show up. If Goldfinger is set as a protagonist who wants to struggle, various factors will inevitably lead to failure, but if it is messed up but has unexpected effects, it will be a bit clumsy. Let the protagonist become half a troublemaker, maybe there will be more interesting collisions with problematic teammates, and he will not be like a nanny (laughs).

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How interesting! ! ! Author, you went to another world yourself! Then he specially asked Barnier to send it here! ! ! Or are you someone who has had this idea in your mind for a long time, so you wrote it all out? Are you familiar with this? Or did you just write this based on your own understanding after watching all the original films? After reading the later part of this book, I think you wrote it very well! I believe Su Qing in the second book will also be great! I'll write a review for you after I read it! ! !

The writing is quite good. I think it's better to focus on ghosts and beasts. There are many books about ghosts and beasts. There are many erotic books, but there are really not many books that are both erotic and ghostly.

This book is indeed beautiful. It's so beautiful that it's a bit self-conscious and makes you immersed in it.

The writing is very good, but Goldfinger has too little presence, and it feels like there is no way to save the day. The interaction between the protagonist and other people is quite fun to watch.

Happy New Year, take off soon

So far, there are no problems. It looks good. Unfortunately, it lacks a bit of crumb smell. It may also be caused by my recent stay in the sea of ​​​​residues. Hey [note], the overall evaluation is recommended.

It's good to watch, and it's not as funny as the original work [Like]

Love to watch, like it

Great! It has a very Suqing flavor, and the ghost style is very real

The setting is novel, the content is interesting, there are laughs, there are twists, and it is consistent with the original work

Nothing to say, really nothing to say

Haha, it was very interesting to write.

A good novel that is absolutely hilarious

Come on come on come on come on

Invincible, ghostly enough, happy enough

The author has something [like] [note]

The portrayal of everyone is particularly successful

Is there a female protagonist? If yes, who is the heroine?

Fortunately, it's my favorite plot, but it's a pity...

It's quite interesting [Like] [Like] You can ignore the existence of the system. The Darkness in this book is better than the animation...

It looks so good, it makes me so high

Four stars are encouraged. There are minor differences between this book and the original novel. It is not recommended for those who read the original novel. The interaction between the protagonist and Kazuma was pretty good, and the way he tricked Aqua was pretty good too. Some of the character designs are not restored, and the plot is not rigorous in some places.

Very beautiful, the best I have ever seen

I like it. It's good if you read it as a comedy [laughs evilly]. It's easy to read without thinking.

Is there a female protagonist? If so, who is the heroine? [What]